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Format of the New form of Rhyme named MlNICHU is as follows: 1. Total12 lines (4 stanzas of 3 lines each) 2. Rhyme scheme: Aba, cBc, dbD, ABD. 3. 4th stanza consists of repeat of 1st line of stanza1, 2nd line of stanza 2, and 3rd line of stanza 3. 4. Poem should stick to a chosen theme through all stanzas. A twist can be introduced in third stanza, if required by the theme, to make it more interesting. 5. Syllable count : Stanza 1: 6,12,3 Stanza 2: 4,8,2 Stanza 3: 2,4,1 Stanza 4: 6,8,1.

Written on December 27, 2023
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Celebrations




remember the delight,
reflected in wild hearts, eager and excited,
by moonlight

soul gently kissed,
by roaring fires of joy, lighted
heart’s mist

observe
hopes invited,
verve

remember the delight,
by roaring fires of joy, lighted
verve

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Sara Kendrick

January 31, 2024 at 2:24 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K

Linda Alice Fowler

January 30, 2024 at 7:35 AM

Hi Gina. Your delightful poem expresses such happiness and joy and enthusiasm for life. I love it. <3 Congratulations! :)

Jeanette Swan

January 29, 2024 at 8:11 PM

Congratulations. Love the word 'verve' , and the stirring of memory and hope together :)

Beata Agustin

January 29, 2024 at 7:15 PM

Wow! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing this of celebration-delight. God bless you.

Mohan Chutani

January 29, 2024 at 6:17 PM

Gina, thanks for participating in my contest. pefect imagery of joy, celebrations, fires, hopes & verve of life. Congratulations for your placement. Wishing you best for New Year and times ahead. Mohan.

Silent One

December 27, 2023 at 11:45 AM

You did this form very well Gina, its not one for me, but I appreciate your efforts on this and you have shown the theme of celebrations very well..

Daniel Henry Rodgers

December 27, 2023 at 7:38 AM

Regina, your poem is a bonfire for the soul! You paint with starlight and embers, dancing hope into a waltz of verve. We taste moonlit joy, feel hearts kiss the flames, and lose ourselves in the vibrant chorus of life. A thousand tiny sparks, ignited by your verses, light the way for our own celebrations. Exceptional! - Daniel

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