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The silent ones

Quick clay
A dog sent in
Looking for survivors
Given the last hug?
Hunting for people
Silent in quick clay

In a delivery room
She was real and she was perfect
Stillborn  
A song played in the room next door
Dobie Gray – «Drift Away»
No beat

A wreck on the highway
Knocking on heaven’s door
A graveyard shift
Knocking on the door
Silence broken by
Slow steps

A ship in distress
A chopper sent in
Looking for survivors
A doctor thinking
The silent ones can wait in
The cruel sea

The room was bright
The respirator turned off
Death was pronounced
The body wheeled away
The room cleaned and disinfected
Nobody should die alone

The shelves is almost empty, the fridge too
The christmas gifts hide under the tree
Few in number, all wrapped up in blue
Nobody tells her to get up and dance
Nobody tells her to sing, sing «Silent Night»
All is not calm, all is not bright

I hear bells ringing
I hear choirs singing
All is not calm
All is not bright
Shine a little light on
The silent ones

Premium Member Do We Ask the Beatnik To Leave

Lee is a beatnik all right, the seventy year olds agreed
he was lying in the grass, playing bongos next to his weed
as chill as we had ever seen Maynard on Dobie Gillis too
We was singing a weird slow song, name I had no clue

what do we do with him? someone wanted to know
Do we ask him to leave? Will he be complaint and go?
it would not hurt any of you to take a hint from Chet one said.
You are mostly Type A’s, could you try to be C’s instead?

I wanted to try, so I sat down and began humming a song.
The others tried to stop me, for my singing voice is wrong.
Then I began to drum, but a rhythm does not come from me.
I finally read a book, sitting next to the beatnik, Lee.

Nameless Dobie Shepherd

nameless dobie shepherd 
shot ten times with a bb gun
just because he wanted food

his owners thew him in the 
woods when he was eight months 
old, but alas, they underestimated 
his will to survive and to live

nameless dobie shepherd 
collapsed on front doorstep
after he prayed apparently

i gave him water and i fed
him leftover grilled chicken

he licked my writing hand in 
gratitude and weakly stumbled 
in my home

i called my connect at the vet,
and she nursed nameless dobie 
shepherd back to health

now he is a handful and a
joymaker in the lives of many
for he pays it forward by helping
me help other lost, abandonned
souls


Premium Member O, For the Shows

The Honeymooners
  Burns & Allen
Mister Ed, Mork & Mindy
  My Favorite Martian, My Three Sons

Sergeant Bilko, Dobie Gillis
  O, for the shows that used to thrill us
You Bet Your Life, the Jack Benny Show
  I can't list more ~ they're all I know

Premium Member San Francisco 1968

Sickening sweet smell of marijuana
A young guy with a super grin playing bongos
I had never seen that in real life, just on Dobie Gillis.

Come on up! My free-minded cousin said.
There were beds, but they were occupied.
I did not know people sleep during the day.

Being from the Midwest, this was all new
Are these your roommates? I asked her.
Just people, she told me.

I changed into my swimming suit, 
Because I was in San Francisco, 
And I thought there would be a beach

Someone started a sing-along in the living room.
I was intrigued; this was freedom I had never seen.
We’ll swim tomorrow, my cousin promised.

We never got to the beach
But I saw S Street 
And I met real hippies

I found out my zodiac sign
And I learned I have gold in my eyes.
Someone called me an old soul.

It was 1968 I was sixteen.
And it was enough.

Premium Member Now That Was Entertainment

Richard Burton
       was uncertain
     if Liz Taylor cried

     Fred Astaire
       liked Ginger Rogers'
     graceful derriere

     Ricky Ricardo
       said 'I Love Lucy'
     Those two had a ball  

     Superman or 'Mr. Kent'
       for Lois Lane
     was never meant

     Archie Bunker 
       loved fawning Edith
     despite her awkward clunkers

     Mister Ed
       had fun with W-I-L-B-U-R
     playing mind games with his head

     Dobie Gillis
       dreamed of girls
     pity, he had no pearls

     Dick Van Dyke
       was never sure
     'bout Mary Tyler Moore

     Julie Andrews
       stole his heart
     in Mary Poppins' part

     Old George Burns
       wife was spacy ~
     'Say Goodnight, Gracie!'


The Silent Ones

Quick clay
A dog sent in
Looking for survivors
Given the last hug?
Hunting for people
Silent in quick clay

In a delivery room
She was real and she was perfect
Stillborn
A song played in the room next door
Dobie Gray – Drift away
No beat

A wreck on the highway
Knocking on heaven’s door
A graveyard shift
Knocking on the door
Silence broken
Slow steps

A ship in distress
A chopper sent in
Looking for survivors
A doctor thinking
The silent ones can wait
In the cruel sea

The room was bright
The respirator turned off
Death was pronounced
The body wheeled away
The room cleaned and disinfected
Nobody should die alone

The seats are empty
Nobody tells me to shut up 
And dance
Nobody tells me to leave this behind 
And sing 
One more song

His Favourite Song

Was his theme song to his life story
An old record...from present to history
A soundtrack
To any sidetrack...on his block
To his black...and back from his black

He knew the words
As though he had written them
He loved the melody...it composed him
As though he was the instrument
The best swing of his golf club...on the green!

His heart melted...it consumed him
And nothing mattered
Or even existed...for he was lost
He was overcome
By a force he couldn’t fathom 
But that he couln't deny and he openly welcomed

It drove his soul to the highway and beyond
It abandoned his inhibitions
It stripped him off his pride
The excitement returned him to child
To innocence...to how he met my mother

Time stood still
Nothing existed...through the chorus
It posessed him utterly and completely
Only when he reached the climax
Did he think all this naive 

But I saw his withdrawing tears
His raw menhood...his true blood
And for a song duration
We connected a generation
Father and son...through Dobie Gray

Happy Father’s Day
Ngoma Sr.

Learn To Dance

Got a party coming up
I need to learn some moves
so I listened to the all-time greats
for tips on how to groove.
These music legends from times past
should know the moves to use
but what they say is conflicting
and now I'm just confused.
Curtis Mayfield sang 'move on up'
Dobie Gray sang 'get on down'
but someone else says 'get on up'
can't argue with James Brown.
'Let your backbone slip' says Otis Redding
(he sat on the dock)
but last time that I tried that move
the darned thing went and locked.
Chubby Checker did the twist
but that just gives me gyp,
Van Halen reckon I should jump
more likely that I'll trip.
On second thoughts, I'll sit it out,
ignore the dance floor action.
If I take on all of this advice
I'll just end up in traction.
Some dancers are pure naturals
it's how their body's wired,
in my case it's much simpler-
I'm getting old.
And tired.

Star Whores

Obi Wan Kenobi
Said “dooby do be dobie”
He wasn’t one but nearly two
And didn’t know just what to do
In his brownie, Kenobi robe(y)

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