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BACK IN YOUR COURT

CANADA FIGHTS BACK

COURAGE TRUMP THOUGHT WE DID LACK

OUR TARIFF ATTACK

Counter-Clockwise

With its disparate arms it beckons.
Look at its face, its eyes half-passed closed,
With a mouth smiling counter-clockwise,
It ticks to me and it tocks to me.
But I still cannot understand how,
Legless, time runs out on me so fast.

                                                          (Honorary Mention in Brian Strands's No 1491 Contest)

Premium Member BEHIND THE PRESCRIPTION COUNTER

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
The fluorescent hum doesn’t bother her.  
Neither does the line winding past aisle three,  
the man who taps his foot like a metronome, nor 
the mother bouncing a fussy child.  

Her hands move gracefully~  
meticulously counting pills into amber vials,  
smoothing wrinkled labels,  
turning each bottle just so  
so the instructions face outward.  

She knows Mrs. Putzer forgets her reading glasses.  
She remembers Mr. Kim’s allergy to penicillin  
even though he hasn’t mentioned it in years.  

When the young man with trembling hands  
asks, again, about his dosage,  
she doesn’t glance at the clock.  
She unfolds the leaflet slowly,  
points to the bolded text,  
says take your time  
like she’s handing him a cup of water  
after a long walk.  

Some days, the world is a rumpled prescription,  
filled with smudged ink, 
but Mary is the angel in blue scrubs
behind the prescription counter

*You may this poem’s companion story here on Poetry Soup as follows:
poetrysoup.com/short_stories/an_angel_in_blue_scrubs_13589


Premium Member Non-Counter-Intuitive

It's Your Expectations
That Dissappoint You,
Not What Things
Really Are.

You Can Absolutely
Love Everything If
You Just Control
Your Mind.

-Gray Squirrel

10-16-2025

Premium Member Counter-Measure

There's Really Something
       To Be Said!
That I Need To Be
          Heard!

Inside This Stupid
  Squirrel's Head
Pretending I'm A
            Bird.

-Gray Squirrel

06-29-2025

Nuttall's Woodpeckers' Useful Addition

There Were 
Two Of Them
On The Tree.

I Tried To
Catch Them!

Thru' The Window!

But:

You Know
How Flighty
Birds Can
     BE. 

***

Click! Click! Click!
    Useless.

Premium Member Bordering on the unbelievable'

A petition has intiaton.' On border soverigenity.' Midst angst
And supposition ? In one dimention flow of people..Has
Been a staple, before Noah sailed over the silenced; and hidden
Creations.' Yet subject to conditions i e ( travellers funding
Available craft? the (prevailing tides and seasons ) allowing
Integration, of benefit to any nation.' Any artifice; or abberation
Type's Cannot justify, it is my inclination.' Only  in the 1700s
Enslaved peoples in ( massed movement ) mirror of the
Current.' And did such not cause misery.? The 1970's
Was a purging, a cathartic stage' of (that un-normal) un-needed instancy.) driven by such materialistic social engineering originally.!
In a certainty of lunacy.' So in Britian late 2024 a petion is
Now set forth.' To seal all borders for a full five years course.' In normal
Times such would be ludicrous.' Yet in consideration of what we see' with
All the currant human misery..' It now appears most judicious and not at all Im-prudent; to use.' as i can see.)


Work Smarter Not Harder

It is ridiculous to think that being peaceful implies weakness.

If you want your peace, you must be willing to fight for it.

As in protests.

If you want to lead a war, you must be a pacifist.

As in manipulation.

Premium Member Counter-Intuitive

Counter-Intuitive

If 
You
Don't Try At All:

You
Will Never Be 
Disssssappointed.

-Gray Squirrel

12-02-2024

The Lunch Counter

It was a whole other world
No cellphones or tablets
No text messages
People gathered and talked
The most popular places no longer exist
Every afternoon and all weekends
The place to be was the lunch counter
Woolworth’s always had the best
Every store in every mall and street
Great food that never emptied your pocket
And a staff that would make your day happy
No matter what mood you were in
It is so sad that Woolworth’s had to die
Sadder yet, the lunch counters went with them
But we do have memories and pictures
That way, they will always be alive

© Poem – XXVIII/X/MMXXIV
LRET

Premium Member 1950s Luncheonette Counter

noisy luncheonette
1950’s fast food
men in suits and ties

women in cotton dresses
wearing high heeled shoes
none unchaperoned

counter closed on Sundays
family day
everyone in church

Premium Member Kitchen counter

I miss our sex.
So fast
crazy
energetic
lazy
we'd do it
in the 
bed, sure.
but also
on the desk 
the couch
the dryer
in motion
with paddles
scarves
and all 
kinds of 
lotions.

But now 
you're gone 
and I know 
you gotta 
miss it.
Just 
come back 
and tell 
Mama 
where you 
want me 
to kiss it. 

I mean 
really 
are we 
done??
Not even 
one last lick
let's throw 
ourselves 
up against 
the counter 
and see if 
we stick. :p

©SamHarty

Premium Member Counter Clockwise

Spinning
counter clockwise,
it’s getting dark early;
Make sure that you play in the Sun 
daily.

Counter Intrinsic

Causality before truth
truth before causation
Universal in transference
inextricably defined

An atom of veracity
a little bit pregnant
Plato through Lewis
—reality entwined

(Rosemont College: October, 2022)

Premium Member Counter Battery Fire

Screw the rules of engagement.
Focus on target acquisition.
Fix range and bearing.
Estimate windage.
Calculate time on target.
Battery away. 
Commence fire.
Volley after volley.
Shot after shot.
Insult after insult.
Snide remark follows snarky jab.
Brutal comeback lands with a jolt.
Gas-lit accusations trip the NBC alarm.
F-bombs. C-words. Total devastation.
Just a typical conversation
Over no man’s land in the family room.
In a time of love and war,
All casualties are blue on blue.

Premium Member When Science Is Not Only Science

Science is not only facts and logics
It has a different perspective
It tells us the law of the universe
To counter and control natural disaster 
It invents 
To make life easier
It sprinkles help 
To reach the corners of the earth
But not to make wealth
Not to destroy
Not to conquer
Science must go with a little sympathy and love
To help those in need
To give us hope materialistically and spiritually
No violations
Science is only for the benefits of mankind
An undebatable fact and logic
A strong testimony of sympathy and love

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