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BEHIND THE PRESCRIPTION COUNTER

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The fluorescent hum doesn’t bother her. Neither does the line winding past aisle three, the man who taps his foot like a metronome, nor the mother bouncing a fussy child. Her hands move gracefully~ meticulously counting pills into amber vials, smoothing wrinkled labels, turning each bottle just so so the instructions face outward. She knows Mrs. Putzer forgets her reading glasses. She remembers Mr. Kim’s allergy to penicillin even though he hasn’t mentioned it in years. When the young man with trembling hands asks, again, about his dosage, she doesn’t glance at the clock. She unfolds the leaflet slowly, points to the bolded text, says take your time like she’s handing him a cup of water after a long walk. Some days, the world is a rumpled prescription, filled with smudged ink, but Mary is the angel in blue scrubs behind the prescription counter *You may this poem’s companion story here on Poetry Soup as follows: poetrysoup.com/short_stories/an_angel_in_blue_scrubs_13589
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Hind Avatar
February 1, 2026 at 10:33 PM
I love people like that. <3
Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 4:42 PM
gosh, me too...we need more of them
Wolf Avatar
January 31, 2026 at 9:05 PM
I really love this. Another of society's unsung heroes/heroines! Bravo! Pills and Bills ~ Gershon
Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 4:42 PM
glad you liked it, Gershon! appreciate your visit and comments
Jones Avatar
January 30, 2026 at 7:22 PM
An engaging poem. I shall look up the link later. For now I think I’m a bit sleepy. I’ve been in training most of the day with homework and instructional videos for NAMI as an empathy Navigator. It is challenging in a not to overwhelming way. Good night dear Sara!
Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 4:43 PM
oh my, you do sound like a busy gal.....take care and hope you did well with your homework
Rolland Avatar
January 30, 2026 at 3:41 PM
superb poem, we should never judge anyone, i think, this is so true, very enjoyable poetry
Etgen-Baker Avatar
February 3, 2026 at 4:43 PM
many you, Yann...I agree...we all are fighting our own battles ... wishing you well
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