consciousness correction
here we are in space-time
limited and feeling incomplete
onset of dread, an ominous chime
but why should soul acknowledge defeat
it does not, merely observing the impulse
heart contractions in this body-mind
feeling bliss throb as God’s pulse
we become divine aligned
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Categories:
correction, angst, introspection, spiritual,
Form: Rhyme
The Blessing Of Correction
The nature of man is stubborn
Does not want to be corrected
That's were true separation happen
If you find in the brink of death
You will seek forceful repentance
As free moral agent learn from your mistake
Do not deny those mistake
Do not repeat those mistake
Move on and learned from those mistakes
Seek wisdom from the instruction
Receive the instruction and
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Categories:
correction, education, faith, life, wisdom,
Form: Prose
A YEAR IN PASSING
January wakes us weary,
New resolutions pressing heavy.
Then comes February’s charm—
A month of love, or wasted calm.
We march ahead into March,
Preparing for the chill to lurch.
April brings the planting days,
As a third of the year slips away.
Hope returns with open skies,
Maybe this month—maybe May.
June arrives with quiet tunes,
We wish the world would feel okay.
Halfway through, we
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Categories:
correction, desire, poems, visionary,
Form: Free verse
Connecting the dots part thirteen the case for a 30 AD crucifixion of Jesus Christ etc Q and A
Q According to Mike, Repoman 64 ,if Jesus was crucified in 30 AD, would 40 years later
be in 70 AD, when the Roman General Titus, destroyed the temple of Jerusalem?
A Yes, thirty years plus forty years=70 years
Q What's the average generational life span according to Psalm
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Categories:
correction, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Form: Prose
correction
a correction
Elon Musk has invented a driverless car that will drive to the supermarket with a slip of paper tucked under the left-hand window wipers, giving the staff a list of food you ordered of that
drives back parks in the garage, turns into a robot carries your shopping up seven floors to your
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Categories:
correction, 8th grade, allusion, anti
Form: Blank verse
Consciousness correction
The roots of conditioning go in deep,
letting soul take not a consciousness leap,
so becoming slow and slower yet still,
this is the way to God we bend our will.
Refinement is an arduous process
but over time bliss mists do make ingress,
so though we oscillate, thoughts are distilled
and in time darkness is with God’s light filled.
Earth life is
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Categories:
correction, spiritual,
Form: Sonnet
Oh, Correction
There is a brown-bodied bird with a dark head, known as the Hawaiian Crow, and they are the most prevalent species of birds.
There are the Java Sparrows, and they are gray and black feathered birds. Not a prevalent species, but they do frequent my feeders.
There are the pigeons, big bodied and mostly gray feathered, speckled
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Categories:
correction, allusion, analogy, perspective,
Form: Imagism
Consciousness Correction
I've always had an aversion to emotions with a negative trait.
Anger doesn't dissipate with age, but I don't fly in to a rage
when I feel the first inkling of frustration. Instead, I contemplate
the source of my anxiety and tell myself, "Just turn the page."
By doing so I segregate the trivial from something with validity.
I prefer
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Categories:
correction, anger, conflict,
Form: Rhyme
Consciousness Correction
Yesterday,
when conscious slept,
anger was my shield,
fear my faithful sword.
When hatred contaminated my heart,
tears ached for tranquillity,
polluted in guilt from selfish greed.
Life can be a disaster waiting to occur,
leaving you in despair gasping for air,
suffocating your sighs with crippling changes,
due to disorientation in imagining reality.
I've always been in an internal war,
fighting the two voices in my
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Categories:
correction, emotions, life, peace, perspective,
Form: Free verse
Consciousness Correction
Placed seventh in
Consciousness Correction Poetry Contest
Sponsored by Unseeking Seeker
Consciousness Correction
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Categories:
correction, emotions, inspirational, introspection, spiritual,
Form: Rhyme
Consciousness Correction
I thought anger was a negative emotion
to be avoided at all costs.
Then I thought about the oppressed.
Anger grew inside of me.
I chose to act upon that anger.
I used my voice to speak against the oppressor.
Even so, I measured my motivation
tempered my response with love and wisdom.
My desire, beyond the lust for recognition.
If my words
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Categories:
correction, anger, courage, discrimination, love,
Form: Prose
Consciousness Correction
Consciousness Correction – 11-20-23
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Consciousness Correction
Envy sneaks in unseen
A thief robbing light from my house of gratitude,
Sowing simmering anger, extinguishing thankfulness,
In blind yellowed views
Gratitude held captive,
Strangled,
Pennies of “I wish” tossed into stone cisterns
Where winter thrashes cyclconic -
Vortex of a gleeful witness to spring’s demise -
Dead-ends swell in jealous broken branches,
Wrapped in near sighted stigmatisms,
Lenses smeared
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Categories:
correction, life, light,
Form: Free verse
Consciousness Correction
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Fear
Loud boom!!
Not knowing
Predicament
Wreck, thunder? I froze
Anxiety flows
Terrible foe
Look!~growing~
Check rooms
Fear
g
o
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Categories:
correction, anxiety,
Form: Other
Consciousness Correction
The turning wheel of time stirs up the dust of disarray,
that settles in the crumbling cauldron of disordered life.
In the maiming moments of disdained dejection,
truth tumbles in the mélange of disorienting chaos.
Under the scorching blaze of the envy flame,
the desiccated soul suffers parched and forsaken,
searches for the niche of sanguinity in self-belief
to get the
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Categories:
correction, emotions,
Form: Free verse
Consciousness Correction
Envy is like a fire that burns
That melts the soul and fills the urns
Too much envy is perilous
It rots the bone, too cancerous
Too much envy from vague reason
Halts the flow of gorgeous season
Once the seeds of envy is sown
It rouses hatred to be born
When someone hates, he
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Categories:
correction, wisdom,
Form: Rhyme
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