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Poetry/Fibonacci/Consciousness Correction
Copyright Protected, ID 11-1597-743-14
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, November 14, 2023
For the International Contest, Consciousness Correction
Sponsor, Unseeking Seeker, Judged 11/29/2023

Third Place

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"Be like a lotus flower, open your petals to let go of fear and sadness." Quote by _Constance I grew in 'fear' with panic and with suspicion. Everyday was apprehension filled with terror, anxiety, and great cowardice. Fearful emotions filled my child's life when a tragic experience left me broken. My days mournful bleak with woe. Oh, the deep 'sadness' and the forlorn tears, and the gloom. Most days I was just melancholy anguish, sadness, I was all darkness blue woeful gloomy with long days a struggle to live & exist. But, one morning I rose up and transcended life. Fear and sadness left my mind, life I was content in faith, joy, calmness, and happiness with bravery courage trust love & cheer gladness & delight, happy to be alive.

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 12/4/2023 11:12:00 AM

Constance, congratulations on your win! I love the flow of this poem and the shape, so like a lily pad unfolding into a new "consciousness." And the way you started with third stanza perfectly stops the emotions of the first two stanzas alerting me to a new "a-ha!" Well done. Advent blessings of peace, hope, joy and love to you!

Constance La France
Date: 12/5/2023 6:20:00 AM

Sam, thank you so much for the congratulations, nice comment and compliment, appreciate

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/30/2023 7:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful win. WOW!!! A wonderful write/great quote/picture. I Love This. Your pen was working overtime on this one. Have a wonderful/blessed day with your win..................

Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2023 1:42:00 PM

Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations, compliment and comment, appreciate. A Fibonacci is a difficult form to write, for me anyways, blessings

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/30/2023 6:16:00 AM

The form chosen for this competition is perfectly suited to your expressive poetry. To metamorphosis, to purposefully correct oneself, requires enormous tenacity, boldness, and steadfast faith. Congratulations on your win

Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2023 1:43:00 PM

Sotto, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, appreciate and blessings

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/30/2023 5:40:00 AM

A wise masterpiece. Congratulations on your medal finish.

Constance La France
Date: 11/30/2023 1:44:00 PM

Richard, nice to hear from you and thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, blessings

Jay Narain

Date: 11/15/2023 10:35:00 AM

Nice poem, Constance. I was happy to see a happy ending.

Constance La France
Date: 11/15/2023 7:57:00 PM

Jay, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, blessings

Bill Baker

Date: 11/14/2023 9:47:00 PM

A miracle to have lived through your experiences as a child, Constance. I'm in awe of the strength it took to survive and then thrive though it all. Kudos to you and the source of that strength, my friend. A wonderfully written Fibonacci poem. A FAV for my list! Bill

Constance La France
Date: 11/15/2023 7:58:00 PM

Bill, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, and the FAV, yes, my journey has been a twisted one, blessings

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/14/2023 4:02:00 PM

loved the form you used...so appropriate for your words. To transform, to consciously self correct, is a phenomenal act of strength, courage, and faith...to turn the tables on one's anguish, anxiety, and fear is nothing short of miraculous. I found so much I liked about your poem. I've been where your poem started and am now where it ended...decades ago. Best decision I ever made. Have a blessed evening, Sara PS am faving.

Constance La France
Date: 11/15/2023 7:59:00 PM

Sara, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and FAV, blessings