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Consciousness Correction

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Fear
Loud boom!!

Not knowing

Predicament

Wreck, thunder? I froze

Anxiety flows

Terrible foe

Look!~growing~

Check rooms

Fear

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Poetic form: Decastich with one poetic license the word gone

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2023

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Sotto Poet Date: 11/26/2023 1:49:00 PM Sara, that shape is really cool and you did a great job, using only a few words to describe a tough subject related to Consciousness Correction. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 11/26/2023 2:39:00 PM Lasaad, the shape is flowing from the poem's outline. Your visit was uplifting. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues Date: 11/26/2023 6:29:00 AM Beautifully done, Sara! You are a great poet! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 11/26/2023 9:19:00 AM Oh!!, Kim. I am honored that you think so. Sara K

Len Gasun Date: 11/24/2023 4:58:00 PM The emotion is excellently painted by your creative words and work my dear poet friend Sara. This unpleasant emotion you've creatively portrayed leaves us message of hope, sense of comfort and enlightenment not only in words expressed in metaphors but especially in your beautiful and unique poem form. I love this a lot and enjoyed. Thanks a lot for sharing. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 11/25/2023 5:09:00 AM Thank you, Len Gasun, for the nice review of my work. I appreciate you stopping by and taking time to comment. I always need those blessings and God's help with my writings. Sara K

Hilo Poet Date: 11/24/2023 7:55:00 AM Hmm, Sara. Thought this be a Shape, though one thing is certain, au comparé to mines is shy of decade in length. BOL in USs contest. Aloha, William Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 11/24/2023 7:58:00 AM Why, thank you, William. Yes, it is short. The fear was real. A limb had fallen on top of the house so I learned on Thanksgiving Day when we came back from my daughter's home and I saw it. It wasn't a large limb, but a very noisy one. Sara K

Eve Roper Date: 11/21/2023 8:18:00 PM Love the shape, Sarah. Loud noises can be very intimidating. Have a wonderful Thanksgiving. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 11/22/2023 4:46:00 AM Why, thank you, Eve and I hope you have an awesome Thanksgiving as well. Sara K

Silent One Date: 11/21/2023 8:30:00 AM Interesting form and in only a few words you described the emotions so well. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 11/21/2023 12:16:00 PM Thank you, SO. I appreciate the high praise of my work. Sara K

Ink Empress Date: 11/21/2023 7:34:00 AM This is a very creative form and you’ve written so well about fear and anxiety and how one might need reassurance to comfort and to dim those fears really. As always it is a pleasure reading your work, goodluck in the contest Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 11/21/2023 9:08:00 AM Thank you, IE. I am never sure if it is what is wanted or expected but your comments are reassuring. Your visits add a special touch. Sara K