Consciousness Correction

I thought anger was a negative emotion
to be avoided at all costs.
Then I thought about the oppressed.
Anger grew inside of me.

I chose to act upon that anger.
I used my voice to speak against the oppressor.
Even so, I measured my motivation 
tempered my response with love and wisdom.
My desire, beyond the lust for recognition.

If my words gain recognition,
I will purposefully pass them to the oppressed.
Their stature and power shall rise.
Their voices will gain resonance.
It is not their guilt and shame to hold.

Prejudice is a horse without a rider.
Fear and hate power its hooves.
Sadness flows through its mane.
Righteous Anger must take the reins.

Once again the oppressed will have pride.
There will be no aversion to kindness.
Greed will be replaced by generosity.
To go against the will of God
will be counted as an embarrassment.
A new light will shine upon the world.
Peace and purpose are indeed possible.

Unseeking Seeker’s “Consciousness Correction” Poetry Contest. Written November 22, 2023.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023



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Date: 12/29/2023 8:18:00 AM
Congratulations on being number 15 in the "100 Best New Poems" list for Soup with your powerful write. Have a great/wonderful day/2024 writing away.................
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/29/2023 8:22:00 AM
Thanks and Happy New Year Paula.
Date: 12/4/2023 11:33:00 AM
Masterfully composed, Richard! I especially love the fourth stanza where the realization of the way to use "righteous anger" comes into your consciousness - removing hate from your anger and actions giving it courage as a powerful weapon for change. So happy to see this on the winner's list. Congrats and high fives!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/5/2023 12:49:00 PM
Thanks for thoughtfully considering my words.
Date: 12/1/2023 5:16:00 AM
Meaningful, insightful poem, Richard. BIG congrats on POTD.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 12/1/2023 7:04:00 AM
Thanks Vijay.
Date: 11/30/2023 7:48:00 AM
WOW!!! Back with Congratulations on another wonderful win. I enjoyed reading your powerful write again.  Have a wonderful/blessed day with your win................
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2023 5:59:00 PM
Thanks Paula, I appreciate you dropping back.
Date: 11/30/2023 6:23:00 AM
Richard, you have beautifully conveyed this poem. Congratulations on your placement
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/30/2023 6:46:00 AM
Much appreciated.
Date: 11/27/2023 4:56:00 AM
Richard, your poem is a powerful exploration of the transformative potential of anger when channeled toward justice and change. Your thoughtful reflections on oppression and the role of righteous outrage in challenging it offer a compelling perspective. - Blessings, Daniel
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/27/2023 3:32:00 PM
Thanks, this is a thoughtful response.
Date: 11/26/2023 7:41:00 PM
Temper down with love and wisdom. Great inspirational verse.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/26/2023 9:49:00 PM
Thanks Eve. Blessings Richard.
Date: 11/26/2023 7:10:00 AM
Huge congratulations on your honour of POTD, Richard! Your message is so strong - totally agree with your perception of righteous anger. Best wishes ~
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/26/2023 2:20:00 PM
Much appreciated. Blessings Richard.
Date: 11/25/2023 8:47:00 AM
A powerful and needed message, Rick. Thanks for sharing an example of how righteous anger can be a positive. Congratulations on your POTD! It is well deserved, my friend. May your day be filled with blessings, Bill
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/25/2023 2:42:00 PM
Thanks Bill. Blessings to you as well.
Date: 11/24/2023 8:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful poem's selection as POTD. Blessings and hugs. :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/25/2023 7:59:00 AM
Thanks for reading and commenting.
Date: 11/24/2023 8:14:00 PM
Richard, when kindness reaches a heart, doubt and fear depart. True, anger is an emotion, but to calm the rolling tide, one must walk away. (The sea will calm, when the wind ceases.) Your thoughts are powerful. Congratulations my dear friend, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2023 8:49:00 PM
Much appreciated. Thanks for your visit.
Date: 11/24/2023 1:44:00 PM
Congrats on a poignant potd!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2023 5:03:00 PM
Thanks so much.
Date: 11/24/2023 11:36:00 AM
Congratulations on the honor of your POTD
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2023 5:04:00 PM
Much appreciated.
Date: 11/24/2023 11:15:00 AM
Peace and purpose Richard - lovely. Congratulations on the honor of your POTS! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2023 5:04:00 PM
Thanks Linda.
Date: 11/24/2023 9:39:00 AM
The anger of the oppressed seethes below the surface, Congrats on POTD
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2023 5:04:00 PM
Thanks Joseph.
Date: 11/24/2023 9:05:00 AM
- Richard, congratulations on your p.o.t.d. - Brilliant poem :) - hugs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2023 5:05:00 PM
You are sweet.
Date: 11/24/2023 7:05:00 AM
Richard, another masterpiece. Congratulations on POTD~ Warren
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2023 5:05:00 PM
Thanks Warren.
Date: 11/24/2023 7:00:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A powerful write. One should never go against the will of God. Have a very blessed day writing away..................
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2023 5:05:00 PM
True. Thanks for reading.
Date: 11/24/2023 6:21:00 AM
There is a righteous anger… “Even so, I measured my motivation tempered my response with love and wisdom. My desire, beyond the lust for recognition.” And love the last 4 lines. You are a thinker not irrational. Be blessed! Congratulations on POTD
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2023 5:06:00 PM
What a wonderful comment.
Date: 11/24/2023 5:48:00 AM
Richard congratulations on POTD.I particularly like the last paragraph. Great writing!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2023 5:06:00 PM
Much appreciated Daniel.
Date: 11/24/2023 5:36:00 AM
One of my fave set of Bible verses is Psalm 72:13,14: "He will have pity on the lowly and the poor, and the lives of the poor he will save. From violence and from oppression he will rescue them, and their blood will be precious in his eyes." I believe the fulfillment of this prophecy is coming soon. Awesome potd Rick
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2023 5:07:00 PM
As do I. Thanks for a poignant response.
Date: 11/24/2023 5:29:00 AM
A very inspirational poem. Your resolve to replace the negative emotions like anger should be everyone's resolve. Anger, if it is excess can do more harm than we can imagine... it leads to strained relationships and even to crime. Your poem reflects the goodness of your heart. Congratulations on your well deserved POTD, Richard.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2023 5:08:00 PM
Well said.
Date: 11/24/2023 5:27:00 AM
Back to Congratulate you on POTD. Much love and blessings, Gina
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2023 5:09:00 PM
Thanks for dropping back.
Date: 11/24/2023 4:50:00 AM
Richard, a well penned, thought provoking poem, congratulations on POTD!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2023 5:10:00 PM
Thanks Tania.
Date: 11/24/2023 3:27:00 AM
Such a wonderful/brilliant write, Rick. Congratulations on POTD! Charlie
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 11/24/2023 5:10:00 PM
Thanks Charles.
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