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November 21, 2023

Contest : Consciousness Correction

Sponsored by : Unseeking Seeker

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The turning wheel of time stirs up the dust of disarray, that settles in the crumbling cauldron of disordered life. In the maiming moments of disdained dejection, truth tumbles in the mélange of disorienting chaos. Under the scorching blaze of the envy flame, the desiccated soul suffers parched and forsaken, searches for the niche of sanguinity in self-belief to get the self-seeking shade of hope in frustration. The sapling of irresistible longing rooted deep in desire, nurtured in the receptive core of the longing heart, blossoms the flower of passionate hedonism, luring the being with the illusion of impulsive urge. In the disorderly squall of divesting dismay, the mangled mind is disheveled to a dishabille state, tries to snap the chords of captivating greed, the psychic cascade of unconcern carries them away. Chasing the mirage across the dunes of desolation, the hope of taking life to the oasis disappears deluded. As the beleaguering storm of disenchantment blows, consciousness takes the correction course to undo despair.

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