Combing Poems | Examples


Combing And Coming -

Noise and surf
blown over, 
I remember 

Shade of flowers,
they look very mismatched
in my corner here

These city streets
ebb and flow like the sea,
let me

A close shave
of thighs, 
my window's je t'aime

I must have walked out — 
my nose choked 
~with the rain~

Seconds pause.
please remember
the seconds of flowers.

Combing the Crop

five bees blossom dance...

     hovercraft buzz bush roses -

          stolen honey dew

~~~~~~~~~

(combing the crop)

Combing for Reasons

I comb the banshee’s long hair
until she is calm and silent.
She is older
than the lowest barren hills.

Then,
a young girls voice
issues from her open mouth.

“Daddy.”

I’m not her daddy,
No one knows her father,
unless it be the ever-wailing winds.

“Daddy” her voice is getting louder,
ceiling light-fixtures begin to tremble,
a picture jumps to its death
from a cringing wall.

“Stop it! No one knows anything!”

The banshee dissolves into tears
and silence.

Moments come and go,
the locked house door, swings open
with a shattering crack.

A little girl is at my front step –

the screeching from her mouth
is mind-shattering. terrible.

Seagulls drop like stones from the sky.

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

An Irish myth. Some interpretations say that combing the Banshee’s hair
is the only way to stop her life-threatening bewailing.
She is said to foretell of death, but who or what is unclear.
This post might lead the reader to think of child abuse, at least I hope so.


Premium Member Beautician Stops Combing

The beautician frowns in the mirror.
She stops combing.
I think she has found a tick.
I get them frequently. I live in the country.

Why would you have paint in your hair? She asks me.
I am a painter, I tell her.
She gives me a look I have not seen since my mother died.
I have to laugh.

Gently Combing Golden Locks

An ethereal vision
    Iridescent her hues 
        Locks of spun gold
A mermaid I'm told

This mythical creature
from Atlantis it's been said
    In the blink of an eye
        In the minutest breath
           In the tenderest heart beat
I was feeling bereft

Did I really catch a glimpse   
or was it wishful thinking
Searching the horizon 
with eyelids a blinking

No signs were left
    There was nothing - no inkling

As searching in vain 
For proof she had been there
    upon some distant rocks
        gently combing golden locks

21st September 2019

Contest Name:	MERMAIDS 
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

Contest Strand Select 10
Sponsor Brian Strand 
HONOURABLE MENTION

Premium Member Combing My Mane

The joy in my heart can't be explained
Sorta like when you get your first choo-choo train
Well I stand up to pee
Discovered have no teats
Which made sense, started combing my mane


Beach Combing

Fenced off with a comb
New age sand crab’s beachfront home
Cup of styrofoam

By Robb A. Kopp
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Beach Combing

Blue tides going out
Moonlit sands beneath my feet
Sea breeze kissing my cheek 

By Robb A. Kopp
All Rights Reserved © MMX

Combing

I comb thy noblesse, in that some lost hurt
might bring thee sorrow, choosing some avert -
a random's borrow to then so divert,
God's asking of our faith, to so invert
our courage, from His marrow of exert.

I comb the gray to know my own alert,
in functioning abuse from its framework.
Would guide me forward then to not berserk
my soundness, in thy Holy needs' concert.

I comb exactness, from its true cost's blurt,
an over action  of confining skirt,
that harbors definition by insert.

I comb resourcefulness from feelings curt,
to truth's contraction, without haste's overt.
That Godly sanctioned glory not desert,
of calling's minded motion, nor revert -

I comb my love for thee, that tangled worth,
that faith and understanding give new birth!

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