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Gently Combing Golden Locks

An ethereal vision Iridescent her hues Locks of spun gold A mermaid I'm told This mythical creature from Atlantis it's been said In the blink of an eye In the minutest breath In the tenderest heart beat I was feeling bereft Did I really catch a glimpse or was it wishful thinking Searching the horizon with eyelids a blinking No signs were left There was nothing - no inkling As searching in vain For proof she had been there upon some distant rocks gently combing golden locks 21st September 2019 Contest Name: MERMAIDS Sponsor: Line Gauthier Contest Strand Select 10 Sponsor Brian Strand HONOURABLE MENTION

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Date: 9/21/2019 7:21:00 AM
I think you really saw her, Ann..that's how you painted a vivid portrait of her..much enjoyed the read in rhymes..all the best.
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/21/2019 12:29:00 PM
I love mermaids, so I feel sure they do exist, if only in my mind, haha. Lovely to hear from you Vijay, as always your comments are so encouraging - thank you dear friend. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

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