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Noise and surf blown over, I remember Shade of flowers, they look very mismatched in my corner here These city streets ebb and flow like the sea, let me A close shave of thighs, my window's je t'aime I must have walked out — my nose choked ~with the rain~ Seconds pause. please remember the seconds of flowers.

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Date: 7/22/2025 4:38:00 PM
I'm not familiar with this form, but I like what you've done with it. Appreciate the brevity and conciseness. enjoy your evening, Sara
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Date: 7/22/2025 1:16:00 PM
Interesting piece. I’m not familiar with the form.
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Date: 7/22/2025 1:48:00 AM
Loved this new type of poetry. Glad you can improvised.
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Date: 7/21/2025 10:26:00 PM
such mystique in the world of p0etic brevity..love this, paige!
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Date: 7/21/2025 9:43:00 PM
Intriguing form of poetry, Paige. Thanks for exposing me to another new form of poetry. Blessings, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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