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Premium Member Love Was Sent, Treasure That Healed Two Crushed Hearts, a Collaboration With Susan Ashley

Love Was Sent, Treasure That Healed Two Crushed Hearts, 
A Collaboration with Susan Ashley
 
Life shattered, soul crushed, another one has perished 
once gone from this world was all she ever cherished
No amazing and joyful tales to tell the kids
just naked silence, from raging of black rapids
From heavens above, truest of gifts handed down
romance sent, from He that wears faith's eternal crown.

In that gloom and doom came our Spring's resplendent morn
Love, joyful sound of Living, thus we were reborn

Love, its Lights flamed, happiness needs no explaining
summer warmth came from darkness rapidly waning 
O' what glory, shall your heart forever hold mine
our sweet blessing, came from angelic hands divine
Within nights, kisses that sated our hot desires
came oaths of eternal love that never expires.

In that gloom and doom came our Spring's resplendent morn
Love, joyful sound of Living, thus we were reborn

Our soaring passions’ pure as nightingale’s song
enrapturing seduction righted what was wrong
upon our heartstrings’ twilight music we did fly
as supernova lusts did unfurl ‘cross the sky -
scintillating stardust showered us with magic
our souls’ kissed in sparkling bliss since events tragic.

In that gloom and doom came our Spring's resplendent morn
Love, joyful sound of Living, thus we were reborn

Dreamy nectar - ripened wine, whetted revival
as I sipped upon your essence for survival
rousing the wild-honey luscious look in your eyes
behind ambrosial mist passionate beauty lies
on thirsty tongues of fire we burned ‘till morning’s light
melting past the pain in moonflower swirls of night

In that gloom and doom came our Spring's resplendent morn
Love, joyful sound of Living, thus we were reborn

Robert J. Lindley and Susan Ashley
(a collaboration), April 24, 2019

Poet’s note: My dear friend, it always a great honor for me to be able to collaborate with you and truly enjoy your inspirational verses! Such a blessing is to me a very precious gift you give me and my appreciation is sincere and honest in this my admiration for both your great friendship and your magnificent poetry talents!

Premium Member The Unchangeables - Potw

lasting... 
all through your life, dear child, 
the following crucial life lessons... 

let go of the things 
you cannot change; 
all things beyond your control.
the past lies decayed 
in your rearview mirror.
don't look back!
never mind
that "T" left uncrossed, 
that "I" without a dot on top;
all the wrongs not righted.
don't look back!
never mind 
what you regretfully did, 
what was done to you,
what opportunities you missed.
focus on the present
and mine diamonds out of it.
don't dwell 
on mistakes you've made;
they're supposed to be made.
do not lose sleep 
the over opinions of others.
you have no control 
over how people perceive you;
do not lose sleep! 
let it go... 
look forward.
the future awaits you.
you can never predict 
what it has in store. 
there's no telling 
how the order of things will go, 
how moments, events; 
life, in general, will play out.
look forward nevertheless! 

just keep busy living, 
breathing, and let
the unchangeables all go.


Poem of the week on 03/18/2023

Writing Challenge - L words - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Constance La France
Theme chosen: Lasting
Date written: 03/14/2023

Mom

Mom, you are my role model
Raising me to a young woman, from a little girl
Step by step, day by day
You've done a great job, in so many ways

When I need someone, you are always there
I never have to doubt that you care
I can always tell you what i'm thinking of
Mom, you have my love

You raised me the best you could
Took care of me like any good mother would
You brought me in this world, guided me through life
Giving me the things every kid needs to survive

You righted me when I was wrong
many times you helped me stay strong
Like many mothers, you've tried your best
And mom, i'd say you passed the test

Raising four girls by yourself
Must have been harder than I could inmagine
But obviously you knew just where to begin
And for that i'll love you to the end.....
© Amy Cook  Create an image from this poem.


Paradise Lost

The mighty line their pockets, 
And the workers pay the price.
Racing along in the jaws of the rat, 
As we fight for moral life.

Wrongs no longer righted,
Paying through the nose.
Suffering for a wealth of greed, 
As apprehension grows.

Domino’s standing in a row,
Just waiting for that push.
Not knowing when it’s coming, 
Left dangling on a hook.

Heads just above the water, 
Braced for more to come.
Working harder paying more, 
Subsidising on and on.

Swallowing the lies no longer, 
We're seeing what is true.
The freedom of choice is dwindling, 
There’s nothing we can do.

The safety net has long since gone, 
Leaving broken and shattered trust.
A nation with fading identity, 
Slowly grinding into dust.

What once made us who we are, 
Disappears each passing day.
As rules and regulations change, 
Human rights are stripped away. 

Feared to voice opinions, 
Lest we’re branded for our views.
Seemingly cornered, no way out, 
Hoping we make it through.

The worst around the corner, 
And so much more to come.
Take it on the chin, stiff upper lip, 
Left to bravely soldier on?

The mighty fall eventually,
A cycle that time has repeated.
The price is high for working man, 
As resources are depleted.

A lump in the throat of the future, 
And what awaits us there.
For those we chose to lead us, 
Line their pockets, is that fair?

Too blind to see, with carrot dangling, 
And now we pay the price.
In a crazy suffocating mess , 
Just another day in paradise.


©.L.Kelly

Obsession Part 3

I shall take my morning walk,
communing with the birds and talking
to myself while reading Kafka,
glancing at the latest headlines.
Dear Stravinsky's 'Rite' is slighted,
(he'll be back when ears are righted.)
When I smell a rose I'm prompted 
to recall a certain lady, gifted with
a strange perception, I must sadly 
take exception, for the moment anyway.

On That Day

Torrents of misfortune rained down
Swollen rivers of grief overflowed
threatening to sweep us apart
but not on that day

On that day all wrongs were righted
Curses dissolved into blessings
Tension melted in the glow of good will
Evil evaporated in the light of truth
Despair fell victim to hope
Death succumbed to life

Sipping Eggnog spiked with Rum
Hugging our sons and our daughters
Gently scolding wayward grandchildren
Slapping old friends on the back
Bragging and telling tall tales
Laughing hysterically at our lies

On that day there were no missing pieces
On that day the wounded world was healed
On that welcome Christmas Day
it all made sense


Premium Member The Moons Yellow Eyes

The Moon’s Yellow Eyes										
After: The King in Yellow by Robert Chambers 
					
Situations righted by the assassination in Sheepshead Bay (alibied with difficulty under earth’s single moon), I curl up on the windowsill hissing at the pallid orb. Oh how, I long for my planet, Carcosa. I lick the remaining human poison from my claws. Yes, man-made poison, but I, I am the one who delivers— population control. 

Wilde, my mate, our transformed intermediary, brushes my coat. I purr. How oddly complacent Wilde has become. Once, he too walked on four legs. After our arrival on Earth and his change (We thought the change would regrow the ear I tore from him in his last life—) my mate became no more than a castrato. I do regret the torture which deprived him of two fingers on his right hand. (It made his job more difficult.) But, discipline was necessary.

the pestle crushes
poison white snakeroot:
yellow eyes shine 

Well, why am I telling you this? To that I would say, why not? Who on earth would believe a cat could talk?

The feline form has advantages in espionage. A petted and pampered puss can lure the reticent, overhear the loud-mouthed, two-footed, earthly baboons—with cunning, obtain information no human in their right mind would divulge to an enemy. As valet, advisor, disciplinarian to Wilde (and he to the earthlings), my position abides, a mere slap and tickle from the throats of power. My teeth, neck piercing weapons of choice; my claws scimitars of death drip with the blood of masters.  

One more night out. Wilde cat-like licks the scar on his damaged hand and stares at the invitation stamped with the Presidential seal. One more night, sweet puss and the reign of The Yellow King will begin.


Published by Illumen 2016

Premium Member conditionally unconditional

Conditionally,
“unconditional”
comes with its 
vast conditions,
don’t you agree?
we invest our love,
and all of ourselves 
into the adoration
and dissection 
of all forms 
of muses,
who will, 
or will not
be found 
swimming amused 
in each others' 
minds, 
in each others'
poetry;
we are a muse
ourselves, egregious
to the rules of iambic
and other rigid romping
rhythms and rites 
to be righted, 
that we daily play 
dodgeball with ardently,
it's like ducking from 
incoming magpies
guarding their nests,
circling their 
small-worldly boundaries,
establishing their tiny
very tight territories,
they fly in at us hard
with their sharp beaks 
and their spit, they assert
they are allied with the best, 
those well informed
highly schooled scribes,
who largely mistaken in mind,
dunk others less than less, and wait 
for the curs'ed to float, 
but in the sinking
those curs'ed 
drowned muses,
in that terrible
horrendous misfortune,
tied to their dunking chairs,
eyes now wide open,
find diamonds
at the bottom of 
their damned pond, 
as they swiftly pass 
schools of wayward fish
with no clear direction in mind,
and other monsters
pulling out hearts
with their pre-prehistoric
saber-toothed grins;
hellelujah for those 
who bespoke for you
freeverse from the ego 
within the heart -
it’s the mind that cuts
without hesitation, 
draws lines in the sand,
limiting us to couplets
in greeting cards
sans ampersand,
conditionally 
"unconditional";
the curs'ed
eventually wake
and they rise, 
spilling tea
stirring 
sugar 'n spice
into the bland,
who eventually
open their eyes
and their minds,
unconditionally 
“conditional”
sans ampersand
heart 
mind





Candide Diderot. ‘24

Boney Bonny Dames and Old Money Games

Until I've seen, Melbourne days
	was not just emptiness in play
I know I'll see
What I didn't see,
the September soaked symphony
	of Vivaldi vines climbing,
jacaranda booms,
tremolo spilling eaves

Until you know this suburban kid's righted the wrong
I'll verse on my way, you as the bridges in my song
Making choruses of dreams that could soon belong

And urban princes and their Porsches
Lost in winters, cold in summers
They adore to ornate you, over muskwood and glassy silvers
But can they look up to the night,
And know wonder in the sight?
In that blue-hued veiled Van Gogh I see your stars

These hardened hands carrying letters I send
	will wear me down to some sorry end
And this I know
But I'll go knowing
the Chapel charade was the pretty noise
	of sonnets chasing sunsets,
drunk Welsh poets
tearing tails for London wisps

Until it comes, a northern boy without southerly blues
The swaying Yarrans, sparkling flutes, Victorian flues
Keeps Flinders Station stepping full of over-priced shoes

And boney bonny dames, old money games
Skirts for winters, surgeons for gains
They climb to lower you, for fifteen lights upon their names 
But can they look up to the night,
And know wonder in the sight?
In that blue-hued veiled Van Gogh I see your stars

Song of a New Season

Gazing out my window screen
I picture fields of gold.
Beholding sights so long unseen
and stories gone untold.
The wonders of Spring unfold.

Sunshine dripping from the sky
and falling on my shoulder.
Flowers giving another try
and squirrels growing bolder-
the earth's another year older.

Easter bonnets soon we'll wear
and dresses made of lace.
Ribbons and flowers in our hair
put smiles upon our face.
Of snow there's not a trace.

Sunshine fills the freshened air
while everyone's delighted.
Buds are blooming everywhere
and butterflies are sighted.
Winter's wrongs are righted!



for contest "Here Comes The Sun"
written Feb. 6th, 2014
© Deb Wilson  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member The Tea Party

A game of musical chairs has just begun in earnest. A pot and kettle band arrives 
through the dining rooms’ French doors following the Valentine Queen. A putrid pink 
flamingo with a croquet ball stuck in its beak settles it’s derrière onto a fine caramel 
leather seat. His humor is short lived. A snort echoes from each of the six bullhorns 
forming his head. “Got him that time, you really did, Matilda!” laughed Lucky, the 
horn-backed chair. A single, rose-pink, button pops off Matilda’s back and lands in 
the hatless brigands’ teapot, just as he is placing a silver tea ball inside. “Ou a le 
petite fille?” Matilda groans. Around the far end of the table chasing a set of 
disembodied eyes with a cat tail, a girl child runs screeching. “She looks familiar, 
don’t she?” Windy whistles beneath the lacy tablecloth, tickling Mattie’s fancy. “Her 
name ain’t Louise,” as with a plop, a brigand crushes Laddie’s rushes. The windsor 
replies. “Geeeeeeeeez Louise!” the ladder-back mutters, between its back straps. A 
top hat flies through the air and landed on the top knob of the lanky ladder backed 
chair. The child righted herself, wiping her nose on the errant apron string. She lisps 
through the spider web pattern of her seat. “Awww now what a shame,” Mary 
whispers to Tex. The loose tails of her apron caught beneath Mary’s rocker and the 
child tumbled face forward into a full cup of Assam tea.  A girl child resplendent in 
golden locks and white pinafore tore into the room planting herself on the caned 
ladies rocker Mary. “Mon Dieu” She moans. “Ya’ll see that nasty monster splatter 
chocolate icing on my skirt?” A knob kneed, potbellied prig, holding a cupcake, 
shoves his way onto Matilda, the little ladies slipper chair. Tex the horned back chair 
at the tables girdle chortles. “Do you know who’s been invited to this soiree?” The 
rabbit topples over backward, his watch bashing his delicate pink nose. Windy 
sneezes.“Aahhh chhhooo!” Tufts of fanny fur tickled between his spokes. 
“Good golly Miss Molly,” shrieks Windy the windsor chair at the far end of the table,
 as a wild-eyed, white rabbit with a gold watch plunked into his well-worn seat.

*Refer to "The Chairs Have it"
This poem can be read from the backwards too ;)

Something In the Air

Something in the air.

People will see what they want to see
And blame who they want to blame
I don't want to see the reflection of me
To face the mirror of my own shame

The one who smelt it dealt it
Is a jibe we learned in our youth
The one who denies it supplies it
Looking back we see it's the truth

It's easier to point the finger
To divert attention elsewhere
And if the smell should linger
Just refuse to breathe your own air

Something stinks around here he proclaims
Take a breath, did you get a good whiff?
But only it seems around you!
That confirms it then he says to  himself

Why is it you're always last to know
When your breath gives off a bad smell
With your nose located an inch from your mouth
You should be the first to tell

But it's always another who points it out
Hey, brother, I've a mint for you!
No thanks, I just ate you quickly reply
But he insists,'Go ahead take two!'

We need to be tactful, and never be mean
But it needs to be pointed out
The importance for all in oral hygiene
Can never be left to doubt

So next time someone offers you a mint
Take a moment and ask yourself why
Is he kindly trying to give you a hint
For the cause of that tear in his eye?

If we all could focus on the  rafter in our own
And not that straw in another's
We wouldn't have to find ourselves all alone
Shut off from those we called brothers

The kisses of a hater are to be despised
But the wounds of a lover invited
So when offered a mint don't be surprised
He's helping your wrongs to be righted

If only you could close up that space
Given more thought to the words that you chose
The source of the problem in many a case
Is right there under your nose

Premium Member Night Visitors?

Old Jo-Bob checked his still one  night,
What he saw gave him a terrible fright.
One eye and one ear
They were drinking his beer,
With feet that glowed with  red light.
 
It seems their ship was stuck in a tree,
So they decided to stay and partEEE.
He watched them dance
until they fell in a trance,
and slept soundly 'til quarter to three.

After awhile they righted their ship,
And flew off with a bit of a dip.
Bob started  to drink
And tried not to think,
Had been true?  or just another bad trip..........


For the Aliens contest..

Miracle On Terrapin Creek

Let me tell you a story
One day, near summer’s end
Martha and her husband
Went canoeing with a friend

Suddenly a log’s there!
And what can Martha do?
Then she’s in the water
She tipped from her canoe

The canoe was righted
But she’s still in the creek
“I cannot climb back in there!
Oh, I am just too weak!”

Then the men were thinking
About what they could do
To somehow get her out
And into the canoe

Then their friend gave warning
He pointed, “Look up there!
In the logs and branches
I saw a snake–beware!”

Now it has been proven
That miracles are true
For when they looked at Martha
She’s back in the canoe!

Theme: funny

Be Nice

4/21/22
"

Greed I see and spy it
No need for me to hide it
What I seek, still can't find it
If I'm curious about it, I'll try it
If I want it, I'll buy it

There's no need to deny it
THC I always light it
I'm always the drunkest and the highest
I've been
 Blinded
And misguided
Yet still one of the nicest

It's not always two-sided
Maybe, I've been a fool, and slighted
In areas that are blighted
Corruptions lingers on, little if any wrongs being righted
The path no longer clear or lighted
Endlessly people remain divided

Despite it
Does no good if I quit
Why b****
And always feel some type of way by it

Always sensed a slight shift
As soon as night hit
Like a firework leaving the sky lit
In ultraviolet

They put out the bait, but I don't bite it
Many couldn't resist or fight it
At times in order to survive it
Was a close call and tight fit

Believe me, you'll just get swept out with the tide if
You try s***

It all could impact the climate
Can't just stay quiet
Always making a scene, causing a riot
Then quickly turning violent
You either do or don't mind it
I stay silent
It all used to make me quite sick
But now it just gets brushed aside quick
Like a flip of the light switch

Still got the touch like Midas
Yet going through a crisis
If I slip
 Then I'll be lifeless
It's just the prices
Of having dangerous vices
When it all no longer suffices
Trust me life is
Full of surprises

Still so caught up on devices
Yet never making sacrifices
No wonder opportunity rarely arises

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