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Old Jo-Bob checked his still one night, What he saw gave him a terrible fright. One eye and one ear They were drinking his beer, With feet that glowed with red light. It seems their ship was stuck in a tree, So they decided to stay and partEEE. He watched them dance until they fell in a trance, and slept soundly 'til quarter to three. After awhile they righted their ship, And flew off with a bit of a dip. Bob started to drink And tried not to think, Had been true? or just another bad trip.......... For the Aliens contest..

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Date: 4/5/2010 5:59:00 AM
Congrats for the win. A fine twist of thoughts.
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Date: 3/24/2010 3:32:00 PM
'very cute, Barbara, congratulations!
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Date: 3/23/2010 4:27:00 AM
Your limerick is, “Out of this World!” Congratulations Barbara, (hic-cup! Ah...good one. Chuckles) on your OUTstanding win in New Contest: Out of this World Limericks! Sponsored by: Carolyn Devonshire. I’m doubling over with laughter! I must say, it is a fun way to start the day. Laughingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/22/2010 3:32:00 PM
Dear Barbara, Congratulations on YOUR 2nd Place Win in Carolyn's Contest A Triple Limerick How Ingenious YOU are My very own POETESS Laureate Love YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER BG & HG
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Date: 3/22/2010 7:28:00 AM
HaHa drunken aliens Congrats on 2nd
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Date: 3/21/2010 11:08:00 AM
Awesome win Barbara. Congratulations on a much deserved win. Agape, Moses
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Date: 3/21/2010 10:10:00 AM
Wonderful Limerick, I enjoyed it very much. Caryl
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Date: 3/20/2010 9:58:00 AM
Excellent and witty Barbara! Congratulations to you. Loved it.-Robert
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Date: 3/19/2010 11:17:00 PM
lol good one congrats :D
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Date: 3/19/2010 7:04:00 PM
Congrats BG on your winning poem and placement in the Limerick contest.. great words and win..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 3/19/2010 4:48:00 PM
Great entry. Congratulations on your no. 2 win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 3/19/2010 11:50:00 AM
How cute is this??? Great work, Barbara...you are on a roll!! Hooray for you!! Love, Carrie
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Date: 3/19/2010 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations Barbara on your fine win in Carolyn's wonderful contest >> James
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Date: 3/19/2010 11:12:00 AM
A TRIPLE limerick no less!...Hilarious, Barbara!...Congrats on the win!...To celebrate you should now go and 'parTEE...'til quarter to three'! - Tim
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Date: 3/19/2010 11:10:00 AM
congrats on your sucess in the contest!! funny and I enjoyed reading it!!
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Date: 3/19/2010 10:52:00 AM
CONGRATS IN THE ALIEN CONTEST NICE WRITE FALESHIA
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Date: 3/19/2010 10:21:00 AM
:-) Groovy! Congrats on your second place win!
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Date: 3/19/2010 10:16:00 AM
Dear Barbara, Congratulations on producing a winner! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 3/18/2010 1:38:00 PM
Barbara, That's a winner! (I just know it will be.) Smiles, Dane Ann
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Date: 3/15/2010 3:41:00 AM
Nice limerick series BG, best of luck in the contest...Raul
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Date: 3/15/2010 12:57:00 AM
Awesome! Lobed it!
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Date: 3/15/2010 12:57:00 AM
I mean LOVED it, LOL
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Date: 3/14/2010 10:31:00 PM
A Delightful ending to this "trip" of a poem, Barbara. WELL DONE!! LUv, Andrea
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