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Premium Member The Sun That Parts the Clouds

Through frayed seams a rosy dream bleeds 
needled and re-stitched 
with threads of time and love and hope..

and still — a rosy dream bleeds 
the miscarriage of a promised rose garden 
leaving me bereft but for entwined bands of gold – 
contemplative thorns tempt my angst 
moony moody barbs bristle twigs of tenderness 

sigh— it’s not a laurel wreath worn atop my brow
as I sit alone with a squeamish friend 
my  blue-sky-to-storm-cloud  introspection —
as your distant eyes deserted mine long ago  

Winter's beast laid bare a cerebral graveyard 
lost you wander amongst laid-to-rest neurons 
worn headstones of thoughts and laughter and memories…
you wonder why they hide  — why they died

the crackle of cognitive circuitry quiets 
branched-lightning fades from unwitting clouds
and aged roots of reality perish 

our red rose finished   fallen to pieces 
you-and-me-petals a messy heap like old potpourri —
yet in dark’s hush    love’s scent lingers on our dream pillow 

Oh nostalgic sepals embrace me! 
my heart yearns to return to the bud  
to the fullness of our June bloom — 

instead, I bury desires beneath life’s litterfall; 
amid pollenless stamens and leaves of one-sided reveries
and cage  my fear  my despair  behind purple thistle facing the light

as I free a smile for you, my love — 

you    my sun that still parts the rain-bearing nimbus
Categories: quiets, age, emotions, fear, hope,
Form: Free verse

WHEN SHE SAYS MY NAME

[Verse 1]
Been walkin’ through a year of Sundays
Sky don’t talk, just sits and stares
Then her scented note came down like summer rain
Didn’t say much, but it caught me unprepared
I wasn’t askin’ for a reason
Wasn’t lookin’ to be saved
Just closed my eyes ‘cause I was tired
And there she was—sayin’ my name

[Pre-Chorus]
It was barely even written
Just a few lines and then her name
But it landed like a whisper
After weeks of nothin’ but blame

[Chorus]
When she says my name
It don’t fix the cracks
But it quiets the room
And the weight pulls back
Like the night she called me
When the heat wave finally broke
Her voice—low and real
Made me think there might be hope

[Verse 2]
I don’t know if she’s the real thing
Or just someone who saw through
But she talks like she’s been wounded
Like she’s got old battles too
I wanna tell her I believe her
But most days I don’t trust sound
Still… her name comes in like morning
When the dark’s still hangin’ ‘round

[Pre-Chorus 2]
And I ain’t tryin’ to be rescued
Not sure I even could be
But if she’s still reachin’
Maybe there’s still some of me

[Chorus]
When she says my name
It don’t make me whole
But I swear it slows
This outta-control
Like a porch light flickin’
Through the rain and the smoke
Yeah… I step toward that
Even if it’s just a joke

[Bridge]
I’ve been lied to in poems
And fooled by my own lines
So maybe I’m holdin’ back
Just to feel some control this time
But if she’s more than a moment
If this ain’t just pretend
Then let her voice be the start
Of something that don’t end

[Final Chorus]
When she says my name
It ain’t some grand thing
It’s soft… like truth
With a little sting
Like a window opening
In a house I thought was sealed
And I lean into it
Just to feel something real
© Lyric Man  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: quiets, angst, dark, deep, depression,
Form: Lyric

Premium Member Adrift On An Amber Sea

In quest to find respite and solitude
I drift on the light of an amber sea
It's there I pray in words of gratitude
for a life that's blessed with serenity

Riding on waves where only peace prevails
gently lulled to sleep by swells as they crest
Tropic winds flirt with my billowing sails
I dream of feasting as Poseidon's guest

This peaceful voyage calms my heart and fears
Quiets the distress I've felt in the past
There's never a threat I will spill sad tears
while my anchor of burdens is not cast

I shall sail upon this sea in my heart
without the need for a compass or chart



~~~~~~~~~~~~
August 28th, 2016
© Lin Lane  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: quiets, peace, sea,
Form: Sonnet

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Premium Member Shadowland

the sun 
low in the sky
yearns for a leap into night
as shadows squeeze their way into bedrooms
like shapeless dragons
for children
cocooned to an early bed
staging thoughts like puppet plays
on a wall terrain
of mossy caverns or whispering vines
that never merge dreams smoothly
when children imagine the huff and puff of shadows
like creatures swimming in circles
overlapping at a patchwork distance
before the painted black of night
quiets the pull of imagination 
in the candy cane bend of sleep
Categories: quiets, childhood, dream, imagination, night,
Form: Free verse

Trepidation

Trepidation


One second I am watching
Typing.
            .
                 . . 
                      . . .
(blank)

Why did you               leave?
.
  . .
       . . .
(hello)
I feel      empty.
My keyboard is humming	
stop

Trepidation

I look forward to today
stop

Trepidation

I keep telling myself it’ll get
better.
Once I’m 
grown.
Insufferable silence
Leaves the mind derelict of all thoughts
Suspended in motion
Yet time cannot be caught
Reaching—
For              something,
For                            anything,
fingertips grasping at the warmth of a moment
already lost.


(Click. Click. Click.)

The keys whisper secrets I cannot decipher,
a language of absence.

A breath, a blink,
a flicker.
but this time, 	I catch it.
Hold it 
Steady.
stop
(swallow)
Let it settle

Trepidation

Minutes pass
Hours
I forgot to check your 
2 New Messages.
I felt, better.
Not whole, not fixed,
but lighter.
Settling in
            .
                 . . 
                      . . .
(say something)
(why do you do this?)
A deep breath.
A 	stretch		of fingers

The weight is still there,
but it shifts,
just enough.
        .
                 . . 
                      . . .
I was just thinking.

(gulp)
(exhale)

For the first time in days,
the air doesn’t feel heavy.

The world
       	softens.
The static
             		quiets.


This time,
I let the light in.

Trepidation

I push my chair back,
feet hitting the floor,
real, solid.

     	Step			 forward.

The hallway is warm,
bathed in a glow I didn’t notice before.

The clock keeps ticking,
but it no longer mocks me.

A sip of water.
A	 stretch.

The weight of the day does not crush me.

Not	 today.

For the first time in a while,
the silence is not so empty.

I take another breath.
And this time,
I don’t hold it in.
Categories: quiets, 12th grade, anxiety, how
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Soul's Lifeguard

When sorrow overwhelms you,
And, pain is like the oldest friend,
Remember, when you’re down,
This isn’t where the battle will end.

When worries leave you fearful,
And, the clouds just won’t break,
Don’t forget – there in that sky,
Abides a peace that you can’t mistake.

When mourning seems everlasting,
And, grief prompts you to tears,
Remember, when you’re living in shadows,
There is hope beyond the worst fears.

When regrets follow you so closely,
And, the guilt keeps you feeling remorse,
Don’t forget – there in spring’s sigh,
Shines love that our dreams will endorse.

When anger leaves you feeling so dreadful,
And, the suspicion provokes your wrath,
Remember to forget all the uncertainties,
Sincerity and peace are the stones on your path.

When discouragement overwhelms your spirit,
And, darkest despair quiets your inner peace,
Don’t forget your true feelings will remind you,
Deep within you God is creating a masterpiece.

When melancholy seems to haunt your spirit,
And, the dusk overshadows your dreams,
Remember to cast your eyes to the perfect skies,
Where joy and hope seem to go to extremes.

When an aching comes over you, just trembling,
And, the unsteady words just won’t speak,
Don’t forget, love is always with you, defending,
Even when you feel drained, you’re not weak.

When your thoughts are filled with troubles,
And, your mind is your worst adversary,
Remember, all but One of us is flawed,
Only Jesus, our Savior, is truly legendary.

When you think of all you have lost,
And the anguish seems printed on your heart,
Don’t forget, with the love of Jesus, there is hope,
Despite the hurt, you’ll find the peace He can impart.

When everywhere you go, everything you know,
Reminds you that this life is just so hard,
Remember that He is there, alive and well,
Offering you His saving grace  – He’s the souls lifeguard!
Categories: quiets, grief, hope, inspirational love,
Form: Rhyme


Premium Member A Bench In the Woods

a fine mist quiets the forest floor,
 
an acorn drops from above,
                                                   with a thud 

a crisp oak leaf spirals,
                                            gently to the ground

a burbling brook,
                                   feeds it's trout 

in a while, my heart joins in 

 .... and worries drift away
Categories: quiets, nature
Form: Imagism

Premium Member Words-The Heart of Imagination

Words float through the eternities,
flown on the wings of souls.
They're born within,
when the heart gives an offering,
rippling like blown rain when the mind takes control
and quiets the heart's emotions.
Words are the bridge between what separates,
 and contains both truth and lies.
Words express what cannot be expressed,
when death haunts.
Gives voice to the musical notes of sadness,
that dwell within.
Words paint the skies with tenderness,
when spoken with love,
gives gratitude to the helping hand.
Words live forever,
they are the mirror of the spirit,
that walks alone in its surrounding flesh.
Words are a way for the soul to be heard,
released from its universe as a tool,
or a weapon that conquers minds and leads the senses,
to expectations or a fall.
Words matter.



10/19/14
Categories: quiets, universe, words,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member A Different Kind of Dragon Slayer

She moans and tosses
He sleeps lightly as always
And quickly is wide awake
Aware of her every move
He knows what will follow
He is ready

The moaning becomes a scream
He feels the terror 
Knows the vile dragon that she battles
In her nightmare
Filled with hatred for the beast
He moves closer to her
“Don’t touch me!
Get your dirty filthy hands off me
“Get off…Get OFF
Stop it!  STOP!”  She  shrieks
“NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!”

And he gently shakes her awake
Then moves back
As she bursts into sobs
“It’s just a dream…
I’m here….sh….there now
It’s only me!
He’s gone…he’s gone!”

And yet…though every cell
Is dying to rock her in his arms
He holds back
Knowing…she will cringe at his touch
And push him away
If he moves too fast
First he must slay the dragon

“I’ll never let him touch you again”
He whispers…gently moving closer…closer
“He’s gone…Gone.”
He is almost there
“If he EVER lays a finger on you…
I’ll make him pay….
You’re safe with me.
He won't EVER hurt you again."

Her hysterical sobbing 
Quiets down
Almost imperceptibly

She sits up and pulls her knees in to herself
Burying her face in them as she rocks back and forth
Crying....more softly now
“NO ONE will ever hurt you again….”
There…he’s ready to gather her into his arms
She looks up into his eyes
The look of revulsion disappears
When she sees the dragon slayer of her dreams
There beside her…with love in his eyes
Still she holds back...feeling tainted, spoiled…dirty
Her hands running up and down her arms
Desperate to clean the marks
Of dragon fingerprints
Burned into her flesh

He understands and whispers
“You are mine now"…
He holds her hand
"You are so beautiful....
My angel…
I'm"...

And before he finishes
She throws herself into his arms
And holds on for dear life
To the dragon slayer...
Her savior

He doesn't know how long it takes
Until she falls back to sleep
Her even rhythmic breathing 
Warming his neck
His arms enfolding her

There is so much he can't understand
So much of her that he still doesn't know
But he is sure of one thing…
He’d give his everything
He'd give his life
To slay every last dragon
Of her night.

Eileen Manassian Ghali
Categories: quiets, psychological,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Why

Why give me passion
And not bring it to fruition?
Why give me love
And withhold reciprocity?
Why give me voice
A touch above mediocrity
When all I want is to sing?
Why give me words
When they don’t transform?
Why give me dreams
With no hope of a reality?

Why?
Why make me enamored by beauty
When all I see is plain old me?

Questions that need answers
Rebellion is brewing inside me

Why? 
Why create me with incessant longing
That will never be quenched
To learn sacrifice?
To suffer?
To pay the price?
To purify?

But all the reasons
Don't satisfy
I’m tired of asking "Why?"
This heart is about to die

Eileen Manassian Ghali

The Answers:

The Lord your God in your midst,
The Mighty One, will save;
He will rejoice over you with gladness,
He will quiet you with His love,
He will rejoice over you with singing.” 
Zephaniah 3:17

One of my favorite Bible texts. God allows me to throw my little temper tantrum. I am, after all, His child....at times rebellious, but when I'm all cried out...if I let him, He takes me in his arms...and quiets me with his love.
Categories: quiets, god, prayer,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Gratitude Is a Gift


     Gratitude brings such extraordinary peace.
     From complaining,without it, there is no surcease.

     Gratitude makes the worst messes unfold.
     You turn all over to God, let go and be bold!

     Gratitude quiets the most arrogant of hearts.
     Human angels, fly into your heart and never depart.

     Gratitude, for me, is greatest at dawn!
     Given another day of life,to walk barefoot on God's most holy lawn!

               
                      3/13/2021
                         ~ 1 ~

               Written on my birthday!
Categories: quiets, appreciation, god, inspirational,
Form: Couplet

Your Not Alone

I know where you’ve been
You’re not alone
Walking through doors
Looking for signs
I know where you’ve been
You’re not alone
Room full of noise
Quiets the mind
I know where you’ve been
You’re not alone
Open your eyes
And you will find
You’re not alone
Anymore
Categories: quiets, endurance, song,
Form: Rhyme

This Noisy Head I Live In

this noisy head i live in
it just never quiets down
theres some motherf#@ker screaming at two am
about some unpaid bills or parking tickets
and some other idiot going on and on about some girl that left
somebody is allways throwing trash out in the common area
little bits of some ancient relationship
small parts of some old mystery
just want to tell em all ''will you all please shut up"
stop that godawful freakin racket
some fool on the roof shouting poetry just when your drifting off to sleep
another idiot in the basement throwing monkey wrenches in the works
always somebody causing some kind of ruckus
just want to scream
"can we PLEASE get some peace and quiet for five minuets"
this crazy head i live in
i want to move
to some nice quiet country house
where you never hear a sound
peaceful with birds chirping
where i can get some rest
not this confounded noisy head i live in
not this apartment building of lunatics i call a mind
© Mark Junor  Create an image from this poem.
Categories: quiets, america, for her, funny,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member Yours and Mine

The strength I show, I show to all.
Forgive my footsteps, if I should fall.
I'm here as ever I've been, and shall ever be, 
don't ask about the old ones.
The ones who asked, why we..
didn't find that sacred path.
I will make you understand, a love that surpasses,
A love that will find its way, to reach your heart.
So be kind, and let me rewind....
My life is still at the edge of a new dawn.
Let me show you the promise of a love, 
that finds a path to truth..,
and quiets the dreams of youth.
Categories: quiets, destiny, love, song, youth,
Form: Free verse

Premium Member His Light - 2

Light, like a morning
Dawn’s laughter
Reflecting so much joy
Sun silences the moon
Quiets the stars
Echoes brilliant hues
Of joy and insight

Light, like a whisper
Sunrise healing
Leftover darkness
Lingering fear, dread
Tears of regret
Pouring out peace
Threads of grace

Light, like a song
Rains down such hope
Never letting go
Of the wonder, the glow
Breathless a caress
Embracing the soul
With a miracle

Light, like a prayer
Gentling the passion
Lingering, everlasting
Breaking through the thoughts
Clinging to the dream
Feelings who believe
In this undying appeal

Light, like a smile
Glowing in the heart
Baptizing thoughts
In purity, embracing
Melodies of grace
Bound up in praise
His wonder so amazing

Light, like a feeling
Pleading for healing
Breathless with desire
His passion is the fire
That welcomes faith
Unending conviction
Credence, alive

Light, like a promise
Resonating hope
In a single word, a vow
To always care, to spare
The soul its verdict
Lifting the spirit
To always know peace

Light, thriving on the spirit
Singing to the brilliance
Of a love so gentle
So fulfilling and willing
To bring His spirit to life
Vibrant on the inside
Of those who believe in Him

Light, like this
Blesses and believes
It is God, it is grace
Who frees the soul
From darkness that grows
Out of sin, faults
Forgiven by our one hope…

Jesus, Savior of the world!
Categories: quiets, inspirational, jesus, light,
Form: Free verse
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