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WHEN SHE SAYS MY NAME

[Verse 1] Been walkin’ through a year of Sundays Sky don’t talk, just sits and stares Then her scented note came down like summer rain Didn’t say much, but it caught me unprepared I wasn’t askin’ for a reason Wasn’t lookin’ to be saved Just closed my eyes ‘cause I was tired And there she was—sayin’ my name [Pre-Chorus] It was barely even written Just a few lines and then her name But it landed like a whisper After weeks of nothin’ but blame [Chorus] When she says my name It don’t fix the cracks But it quiets the room And the weight pulls back Like the night she called me When the heat wave finally broke Her voice—low and real Made me think there might be hope [Verse 2] I don’t know if she’s the real thing Or just someone who saw through But she talks like she’s been wounded Like she’s got old battles too I wanna tell her I believe her But most days I don’t trust sound Still… her name comes in like morning When the dark’s still hangin’ ‘round [Pre-Chorus 2] And I ain’t tryin’ to be rescued Not sure I even could be But if she’s still reachin’ Maybe there’s still some of me [Chorus] When she says my name It don’t make me whole But I swear it slows This outta-control Like a porch light flickin’ Through the rain and the smoke Yeah… I step toward that Even if it’s just a joke [Bridge] I’ve been lied to in poems And fooled by my own lines So maybe I’m holdin’ back Just to feel some control this time But if she’s more than a moment If this ain’t just pretend Then let her voice be the start Of something that don’t end [Final Chorus] When she says my name It ain’t some grand thing It’s soft… like truth With a little sting Like a window opening In a house I thought was sealed And I lean into it Just to feel something real

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 10/31/2018 1:45:00 PM
What a beautiful delivery, Dave! At times, just one word or a smile can work wonders! ~ Best regards // paul
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Date: 10/26/2018 2:10:00 AM
Excellent job
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Date: 10/6/2018 7:50:00 PM
magic reveal if in love.... Beautiful Lyric Man..
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Date: 10/4/2018 7:59:00 AM
Gotta fav this exquisite beauty. Tho' speaking of sad this gem also shows the bright light of love and promise of bliss that "she brings" to a weary soul! Such is truth and is presented in truly brilliant and very captivating poetic form my most talented friend..
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Date: 10/1/2018 8:25:00 PM
It sounds like she could feel you, your heart- that tender ache inside. It isn't a dream, she is real. Her words hold hope, peace, happiness and love. It is wonderful that your heart is lifted, you should always soar in the sweet touch of the sky. In that Midnight Hour, she will take your hand and lift you even more. I know she will. I believe. Your thoughts wrap softly around me. ~ Brandy
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Date: 10/1/2018 7:04:00 PM
Wow!! Lyric Man, absolutely splendid.. Your lyrics are so smooth!! Your talent always shines.. Blessings, my friend..
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Date: 10/1/2018 4:36:00 PM
Lm As you wrap your pen in Midnight, It pours emotion to the nines! You are an artist ESQ!
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Date: 10/1/2018 2:28:00 PM
Very romantic, heartfelt lyric, LM. Enjoyed reading your poem..excellent rhythm and flow.
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Date: 10/1/2018 2:20:00 PM
we sometimes have to connect through handwritten notes or mail for some human reciprocity... written with such lyrical flow and certain melancholia... love it, D... glad you're back!..huggs
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Date: 10/1/2018 10:50:00 AM
Well written and so true. Wishing you well :)
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Date: 10/1/2018 10:37:00 AM
only the lonely, a poem to wake one up to the sadness of the many, them that need a friend, i know been there done that,wish your poetry had been around then,,,
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Date: 10/1/2018 10:25:00 AM
It only takes one word LM, fab lyrics my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/1/2018 10:16:00 AM
How true Dave, even one word is enough to bring you back from the edge sometimes. Lovely lyric. Tom
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