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Adrift On An Amber Sea

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In quest to find respite and solitude I drift on the light of an amber sea It's there I pray in words of gratitude for a life that's blessed with serenity Riding on waves where only peace prevails gently lulled to sleep by swells as they crest Tropic winds flirt with my billowing sails I dream of feasting as Poseidon's guest This peaceful voyage calms my heart and fears Quiets the distress I've felt in the past There's never a threat I will spill sad tears while my anchor of burdens is not cast I shall sail upon this sea in my heart without the need for a compass or chart ~~~~~~~~~~~~ August 28th, 2016

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Michael Thompson

Date: 12/5/2016 8:14:00 AM

A very calm and soothing poem and an enjoyable read.

Lin Lane
Date: 12/5/2016 12:06:00 PM

Thank you very much, Michael. I'm happy you liked it.

Robert Lindley

Date: 10/20/2016 12:18:00 PM

CONGRATS ON THE CREATION OF THIS EXCEPTIONAL SONNET MY FRIEND. Smooth as silk, peaceful as a lamb and as soothing as a hug and kiss from a loved one! Superb sonneteering.. A fav..

Lin Lane
Date: 10/20/2016 1:49:00 PM

As ever, Robert, you grace my poetry with the kindest of expressions. With gratitude for our friendship ~ Lin

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 10/18/2016 8:26:00 PM

Ah, the perfect poem, Lin. Repeat my Serenity Now mantra, read this poem ... all is well again. Ty for the serene tide ride into your lullaby thoughts. Much appreciated, dear. Love and peace to you.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/20/2016 1:48:00 PM

What poetic comments, Freddie. I'm thanking you for taking a serene ride on my voyage.

Chris Green

Date: 10/13/2016 4:04:00 PM

Well, is it ok for guys to sigh? Too late, I already did. This is beautiful, a soft comforting beauty floats in your words Lin. I love the rhyme and the cadence of this but most of all I love where it took me and how I felt when I got there. Absolutely gorgeous.

Lin Lane
Date: 10/13/2016 4:38:00 PM

Oh yes, Chris, please sigh all you'd like. Thank you for liking this one so well and allowing it to take you to a calming place, where gentle waves can rock you to sleep.

Keith Logan

Date: 9/14/2016 2:28:00 AM

deja vous, I thought I had commented on this earlier but mayhap not. Overall good, couplet great.

Lin Lane
Date: 9/19/2016 8:11:00 AM

Thanks very much, Keith.

Ruth Phipps

Date: 9/10/2016 5:26:00 PM

I love the picture and the poem very good

Lin Lane
Date: 9/19/2016 8:11:00 AM

Thank you, Ruth.

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/9/2016 7:59:00 AM

Very write, Lin. Good to know you're back again. This poem has serenity written all over it. There is a peace in knowing that all is well in the heart. Hugs

Lin Lane
Date: 9/19/2016 8:11:00 AM

Hi Eileen, I'm not really back. I wrote this one and wanted to share it with the friends here. Thank you for liking the peacefulness of it. Nice to see you, and hugs back.

Sunita U.D Palawon

Date: 9/6/2016 1:26:00 PM

This is a wonderful poem and congrats to have it as POTD! Sunita :)

Lin Lane
Date: 9/7/2016 12:03:00 PM

Thank you, Sunita.

Constance La France

Date: 9/3/2016 1:48:00 PM

Lin, this is a lovely, dreamy sonnet and a winner ~

Lin Lane
Date: 9/3/2016 2:17:00 PM

Thank you very much, Constance. ;-)

Sandra Haight

Date: 9/3/2016 7:03:00 AM

Lin, I somehow missed reading this beautiful Sonnet so full of peace and tranquility and drawing me in to want to be there. Congrats on your Poem of the Day honor. Hugs, Sandra3HV

Lin Lane
Date: 9/3/2016 9:01:00 AM

Hi Sandra. You didn't miss a thing. You're here now and thank you for such sweet thoughts.

Phillip Garcia

Date: 9/2/2016 1:38:00 PM

I can't remember if I already commented on this or not but this is the 3rd time I've come back to it and I love it with increasing passion. It's just so soft and moving. I'm not sure that exactly captures how I feel but it's the best I can do. Very nice. PS - if I post the exact same comment in a few hours call the authorities and tell them I'm stuck in Groundhog's Day and need help

Lin Lane
Date: 9/2/2016 3:22:00 PM

I don't remember seeing a comment from you prior to this one, but if you've read this sonnet 3 times I'll count that as being the best kind of compliment. Thank you very much, Phillip.

Paul Callus

Date: 9/1/2016 1:59:00 PM

Having read this lovely sonnet of yours I am tempted to undertake a similar voyage, Lin! I find your words soothing and inspiring. Congrats on p.o.t.d. ~ Regards // paul

Lin Lane
Date: 9/1/2016 2:30:00 PM

A voyage like this would be the epitome of contentment. Thank you for liking it, Paul.

James Inman

Date: 9/1/2016 6:09:00 AM

Serenity! I've been looking for it all of my life with only fleeting success. You've captured it well in this lovely poem Lynn.

Lin Lane
Date: 9/1/2016 2:29:00 PM

Thank you for such nice comments, James.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/31/2016 3:37:00 AM

Well deserved POTD, Lin:) Congratulations:)

Lin Lane
Date: 8/31/2016 4:57:00 AM

Thanks so much for the congrats, Jo!

John Hamilton

Date: 8/30/2016 9:14:00 PM

I see congratulations are in order POTD I knew it, I just knew it! Great write Lin! You are a refreshing breeze, passing over the hot soup!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/31/2016 4:56:00 AM

What a sweet thing to say, John. I really appreciate your thoughts. Thank you so very much.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 8/30/2016 6:09:00 PM

You have really sparked my imagination being alone in the sea. Congratulations on your POTD!

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2016 8:06:00 PM

What a great compliment! Thank you, Ralph.

Laura Hay

Date: 8/30/2016 5:32:00 PM

Marvellous and clever, now on my favourite, a 7 from me ;) warm regards, Laura

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2016 8:06:00 PM

aw sweet of you to make it a fav. Thanks so much, Laura.

Nilima Deb

Date: 8/30/2016 1:17:00 PM

lovely poem..congrats !

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2016 3:02:00 PM

Thank you, Nilima.

Vladislav Raven

Date: 8/30/2016 11:35:00 AM

Hi Lin, just dropping by with my congratulations an a richly deserved Poem Of The Day honour. An excellent sonnet indeed. It deserves another seven and it would get another fave if i could give it. Congratulations Lin. Love....Mike. XX.

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2016 3:01:00 PM

Thanks a bunch, my Celtic Dreamer.

Gordon Alexander

Date: 8/30/2016 10:59:00 AM

Lovely flowing poem

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2016 3:01:00 PM

Thank you, Gordon.

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/30/2016 9:51:00 AM

Hi Lin, I'm so happy to see this lovely piece in the spotlight. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Enjoy the honor:-) Alexis

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2016 3:00:00 PM

You're so sweet. Thanks, Alexis.

Tim Smith

Date: 8/30/2016 9:30:00 AM

Good to see this lovely piece as POTD. Enjoy your day to shine Lin

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2016 3:00:00 PM

Thanks very much, Tim. I'll see ya elsewhere.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/30/2016 8:25:00 AM

WOW Lin this is fabulous to see you get POTD and of course it was your input that started the POTW collaboration so you have a double celebration my friend:-):-) many many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 8/30/2016 8:32:00 AM

I'll raise a cup of tea to you my friend and think of a topic for a new collaboration:-) hugs jan xx

Lin Lane
Date: 8/30/2016 8:30:00 AM

Then let's celebrate! Thanks for the congrats and for your friendship. I'll write with you anytime.