Best Pit Poems
Pit of DespairSometimes, life can seem unfair
when your heart loses all hope.
And from a pit of despair,
you struggle merely to cope.
Love is an elusive dream,
interlaced with nightmare thoughts.
And anxiety's extreme;
tying your stomach in knots.
You try to rewind life's tape;
and yet, it is stuck on pause.
And there's no...
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Categories:
pit, abuse, angst, emotions, feelings,
Form:
Quatrain
The Bottomless PitFrom the bottom of an abandoned gravel pit
behind my childhood home, seated,
leaning against its hardpacked sandy side,
he watched the July sun set,
the empty prescription bottle at his side.
Did he walk that day to his unnatural fate
slowly, shoulders rolling like a big cat,
alternating first one,...
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Categories:
pit, daughter, death, family, father,
Form:
Narrative
Falling Into Lifes Sad PitI'm teetering along the edge
Of a long and deep sharp ledge
One more push and I will drop
Can someone please help me stop
The pain everyday that follows
Me into more bad tomorrows
That will not leave me alone
I would like to just be shown
What it's like to wear...
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Categories:
pit, heartbroken, how i feel,
Form:
Rhyme
Life's Bottomless PitBankrupt and broke life has given to me
Endless contradictions with windows I see
What a shame that it is to be in this bind
However the outcome I'm losing my mind...
Yesterdays care gave out almost there
While trailing once more, lifes relentless wear
Has taken me down again and...
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Categories:
pit, angst, depression, life, sad,
Form:
Lyric
Red Cherry Pitred cherry pit
gutted, c-sectioned
fingertips stained
5/27/2018...
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Categories:
pit, fruit,
Form:
Haiku
Mosh Pitthe mosh pit of rain
carries me to my room
drops me on my pillow
12/27/2018...
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Categories:
pit, sleep, weather,
Form:
Free verse
Passion Pit "Passion Pit"
moonglow shone beneath sheer veil, love ignited,
starry skies canopy shadowed lovers flesh
in perfumed atmosphere, passion excited,
warm kisses navigate silk skin, melting mesh.
sweet passion pit of love burns fiery embers
memories of romance essence remembers.
touching tenderness as flames of love impart
delicate embrace...
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Categories:
pit, passion, love, passion,
Form:
Rispetto
Pit Stop -- Anger ContestBursting for a bathroom;
Tim Horton’s stop
~ closed for cleaning
For Susan Burch’s contest
“Show Me The Anger”
Won 2nd place...
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Categories:
pit, funny, travel,
Form:
Haiku
Villanelle: Cowered Crushed Cramped Cold In the Pit of Our StomachsVillanelle: Cowered crushed cramped cold in the pit of our stomachs
Cowered crushed cramped cold in the pit of our stomachs
We drag our ego thrones saddled on stooping lean backs
Fiendish liege Lords’ furnace mouths whiplash at run amoks
None can bear the thought shrunken image left on...
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Categories:
pit, character,
Form:
Villanelle
Azazel's PitIt is said that there are creator Gods
That create Gods
Who in turn created
Man
These blessings cheated the system of order
Seas of black turn blue in the mind
With one slight of hand
Emerges clay in the shape of man
Trees fork, slit and seeds become killing machines
Steadfast in plights...
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Categories:
pit, philosophy
Form:
Free verse
The Pit of Her StomachShe brushes her fingertips
down her own skin and dreams of him
rising like a tide inside her,
his tongue between her teeth.
She waits for the stars to fall ripe into her palms,
and for the messiah.
She waits, heart in mouth,
for his breath against her bones....
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Categories:
pit, love
Form:
Free verse
Cherry Pit War MinesI breathed in the scent of the sunsets,
Cherry pit war mines covering the street,
Rose colored petals dancing in the background,
The sun painting me pink,
Crickets symphony under the lights,
That Summer that never left me....
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Categories:
pit, america, appreciation,
Form:
Free verse
I Kissed a Pit BullOnce upon a time…
I said- oh no, Never would I have one.
But I was kissed by a Pit Bull & he stole my heart.
Really he is so very sweet.
I just say to uneducated people,
I am sorry you are a racist that is...
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Categories:
pit, animal, best friend, judgement,
Form:
Free verse
True American Pit Bull Terrierlook me in my eyes but dont show signs of fear
call me with a whistle thats how i know your here
walk me with conviction and hold your head up high
because for you and only you, you know that i will...
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Categories:
pit, loveme, dog, dog, me,
Form:
Rhyme
Yet I Smile With Sparkling EyesMy anger boils deep down inside.
Yet I smile with sparkling eyes.
Hot blood flowing vie chamber to chamber…
Thumping heart beats vexed closer to danger…
Drinking in downpouring tears and cries.
Yet I smile with sparkling eyes.
Pissing out vengeance, bourbon and wine.
Bowels rumble loudly from the hate I dine.
Hands...
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Categories:
pit, 2nd grade, anger, body,
Form:
Metrical Tale