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Pit Stop -- Anger Contest

Bursting for a bathroom; Tim Horton’s stop ~ closed for cleaning For Susan Burch’s contest “Show Me The Anger” Won 2nd place

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Skat A

Date: 10/19/2012 7:42:00 PM

Hi Miss Lee, how I feel the anger. COngrats with your 2nd place win. *smail seeya SIDDY

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/8/2012 2:03:00 PM

Yes, that could be an anger moment..Thanks for the stop by my blog..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2011 11:01:00 PM

Lee,, a nice haiku, thank you for sharing.. May the magic of writing fill your days here on the soup. May all your dreams come true this holiday season. I hope you are enjoying the blessings that Christmas brings.. filling our hearts with hope and joy, just take care of yourself... once again enjoyed your poem,,always,..p.d.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/3/2011 7:33:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the "Show Me The Anger" contest Lee. Love, Carol

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/2/2011 9:42:00 PM

Good luck in the contest LEE,,, have a good one,..p.d.

Lori Lucas Mcclure

Date: 10/2/2011 8:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your wonderful win!!!!====Lori

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/2/2011 6:52:00 PM

Congrats Lee on second place win with this excellent expression of emotion luv...

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/2/2011 3:23:00 PM

This is so funny because we all have this happen. So sorry to hear you are sick - hope you are improving. Lots of flu and colds here at the moment. God Bless phyl

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 10/2/2011 10:02:00 AM

LOL, so true!!!! Never open when you ned them....always Michael

James Fraser

Date: 10/2/2011 9:14:00 AM

Oh my! nothing worse than wanting to go, with no place to go to. Good luck in the contest Lee. Have a lovely Sunday :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/2/2011 1:28:00 AM

It was just a symbol, Lee. (and it was Cleopatra's Nile,not the one we know today!) hahaha. Now let's see this this haiku here. HEy, this is really cute. You were so inventive to do it in a short form like this. You should name it a senryu for being about human nature. this kind of thing makes me angry too, AND I mean pissed (heehehe)