Pit of Despair

Sometimes, life can seem unfair when your heart loses all hope. And from a pit of despair, you struggle merely to cope. Love is an elusive dream, interlaced with nightmare thoughts. And anxiety's extreme; tying your stomach in knots. You try to rewind life's tape; and yet, it is stuck on pause. And there's no way to escape the suffering or its cause. Abuse morphs into self-hate; guiding the blade on its path. And admonishing your fate, you let its edge purge your wrath. Every cut exacts a toll; unleashing a scarlet flood. And yet, the pain in your soul is numbed by the flowing blood.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/16/2018 3:45:00 PM
Great lines "You try to rewind life's tape but you find it's stuck on pause."
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Emile Pinet
Date: 3/16/2018 3:53:00 PM
Thank you so much Line, your support is appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 12/22/2015 5:20:00 PM
Merry Christmas Emile... a nice flow in this poem using a topic that appears more and more prevalent in modern society - thank you Emile - Lindsay
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/22/2015 8:01:00 PM
Thank you Lindsay, it's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend. Emile.
Date: 12/11/2015 2:13:00 PM
Hi Emile. I liked the rhythm. The story is good too. Lately I find more bad times in life than good. You can't look for the happy times. You have to make the happy times. Hope you write more. I like your style to this.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 12/11/2015 2:20:00 PM
Thank you Trevor, I appreciate your insightful comments. Emile.
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