Passion Pit

"Passion Pit" moonglow shone beneath sheer veil, love ignited, starry skies canopy shadowed lovers flesh in perfumed atmosphere, passion excited, warm kisses navigate silk skin, melting mesh. sweet passion pit of love burns fiery embers memories of romance essence remembers. touching tenderness as flames of love impart delicate embrace sharing love heart to heart.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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A  Avatar
March 13, 2014 at 3:28 AM
love the ignited image... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~
Ainsley Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 6:23 PM
vary nice surprise Thanks.
A   Avatar
January 1, 2013 at 12:32 PM
Linda my bff , making an appearance on the soup today. Only 2 wish you this coming year to be a glorious one in which rewards all your future poetry with success. I love the time I took out of the first day of the year. 1-1-2013* :-) Just to wish you the best of 2013. Take care my dear poet friend. Thank you for sharing the best of your here..xox~pd
Sweetheart Avatar
December 13, 2012 at 12:39 AM
WON 5TH PLACE .. THANKXX
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 10, 2012 at 6:17 AM
Congratulations once again Linda, a well deserved win xx
A   Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 2:50 PM
Linda, congratulations with your awesome win..in the Skitty Skat Contest.... thank you for everything. ~Always & Forever~ PD
A  Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 2:25 PM
Congrats in my contest, . ~SKAT
Horsman Avatar
December 6, 2012 at 6:17 AM
always get a warm lovable feeling when reading your poetry.. it is so beautiful
Dietrich Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 3:07 PM
a beautiful passion it is, Linda!! Very nicely done!
La France Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 8:22 AM
Linda, very romantic, full of love and emotion, well done, Constance
A   Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 9:16 PM
Hi Linda my bff... love the passion in your poem..wish i would fall in this pit...LOL..pd
Horne Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 3:06 PM
love this romantic gem, my friend. Glad to see you on Soup : )
Johnson Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 2:15 PM
fire burns when the arousal comes, and heat that almost burns the thumbs, where to put me diddle dum? damn it take your chances, the sweetest of romances, in heaven i be chum, pass the fourex son, (beer 5%) thirsty work for some, the horizontal dancers, the diddling has been done:) Is her daddy that bloody rancher? nah it's Sancho Panza.... re 'Passion Pit' Linda-Marie SweetHeart Don Johnson
Sivey Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 12:27 PM
This is quite the passionate write my friend! I really enjoy reading a romantic poem such as this one Linda-Marie! What a special and enhanced piece, Great Work!!
Andresen Avatar
December 3, 2012 at 1:58 AM
Linda-Marie - always sweet and romantic - GORGEOUS! - Have a wonderful day my friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Sweetheart Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 11:01 PM
a little love and passion before bed at midnight makes for sweet dreams poets .. so enjoy .. nite nite ..luv..
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