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Premium Member Embedded Hieroglyphics

Called to journey
Through the passageway of my heart
I close the door and turn
Exposing myself in full surrender

Fuzzy whiteness vibrates around me
A fleecy cocoon tickles my limbs
I feel your fingertips calling out to me
Royal turquoise butterflies appear
Leading the way onward

Dissolving light waves reveal
Frolicking foam caressing sandy shores
Transparent bubbles look up at me 
From in between my toes
Walking slowly, I pause
I lay down ~ cradled by the beach
Exposing my flesh to
Lapping waves which nuzzle me gently

Rising to my knees
I lay my ear against
The calm waters
Waiting for your call

Caw   Caw   Caw

Attentive seagulls glide close by
Bellies against the surface 
Of ocean’s breast
I hear you whisper
~Join me my love ~

I raise my arms up
Feeling the breeze kiss my fingertips
I float upward
Lavender lenticular clouds
Create continents and islands
Of hope and discovery

I touch your heartbeat with
My outstretched hand
Allowing you to lead me
With your magical magnetism
Guiding me to realms unknown

We drift upward viewing twilight tendrils
Of mauves, sages and fading Prussian blues
Each movement a deepening 
Of heart and soul
Receiving embedded hieroglyphics
Of passion and pain

My heart expands
My soul delights
As I weep silent tears of gratitude
Remembrances of lifetimes past

I gaze skywards witnessing
The three sisters on cliff’s edge
Pillars of strength and wisdom
Sharing insight
Pink smoke hovering 
Around their downy silhouettes
As hawks, snakes, and reptiles
Of the canyonlands observe

Coyotes howl in the distance 
Sensing the ceremony

With eyes closed
I feel the embrace from you
From my sisters
From the elements
From the animals
Our shared connection

We are one
I send my kiss out into the universe
As heaven’s face smiles down upon us

Premium Member Mystical Lore of the Moonlight Moth

Mystical amour of moonlight moth's whimsical lure,
a glowing flame in sensual saffron gold attire;
restless tease with every breeze, gilt-cavorting contour,
pale green fluttering, her wings stirring his breath afire.

Lilting lightness in beaming brightness, her dark eyes shine,
in the night renewed flight, fragile love on agile wings;
aerial display of desire's ache amaranthine,
hungry heartstrings crave what evening's ebony brings.

His illumination sparks her imagination,
heart’s replete, breathless beats, she basks in his halo-heat;
fascination with chance her hot romance, damnation,
flame’s fickle spurn, wistful wings burned, by love bittersweet.



Susan Ashley
October 18, 2017


~ First Place ~
Contest: Favorite Rhyming Poem Ever
Sponsor: Laura Loo

Premium Member Her Mystical Mantra

Drawn to her chants
we run to her
rhythmic is her mood

in all her glory
we walk with her
fluid is her grace 

her steely blues
are dreamy today 
sharing spheres of giving light ~

meditative is our spirit and haunting is her song.


Susan Ashley  
August 16, 2018


~Second Place ~
Contest: April 2019 Premier 4, Max Ten Lines
Sponsor: Brian Strand


Premium Member Mystical Mermaid

hidden below the echoing cold indigo sea
     a mermaid dwells . . . 
mystical as told in myths if you believe
          breathtakingly beautiful and sensual .  . .
in her cobalt blue cave . . .  
she keeps gems and treasure chests stolen
      the sailors dizzy with lust
lured into the sea by her liquid musical murmur
and   D
           O
              W
                 N     they fall to be no more . . . 
and when the ship crashes into jagged rocks
     breaking apart and becoming part of the sea
she comes silently beneath the tumbling waves
             to take anything that shines 
to her watery underwater cave . . . 
    where they sparkle and glow for her
she loves to touch each one -
      so beware travelers of the open uncharted sea
a beautiful mermaid is waiting
to   d r o w n   you in the unforgiving dark depths
and steal all that sparkles
only to decorate her blue cobalt cave . . .   
_______________________
August 1, 2016

Poetry/Free Verse/Mystical Mermaid
Copyright Protected, ID 16-813-213-0
All Rights Reserved.  Written under Pseudonym.

Written for the Premiere Contest, Caves,
sponsor, Anthony Slausen

Fifth Place

Premium Member Mystical Kingdom

When dreamtime leads me to a mystic land
I saunter quietly ... climbing a hill,
For the kingdom of fairies and elves reigns
With gossamer wings and jewels in their hair.

A sapphire castle laps with ambient winds
Robed in diamante from godly hands.
Sweet mist of air and silver voices echo
Through quivering rock pools of hawthorns green.

This lofty place thrills bright imaginings
Upon glittered sands like tiers of limestone,
Hard marbles and finely-polished pebbles
Lie dotted through rainbow of stardust ,untold.

Tasseled wands bestow spells on the courtyard
Beguiling my eye with pixie- waltz steps
Until, at the height of enchanted awe
Fairy Queen lends magic, then fades in dreams!



Second Chance # 3 Contest of Broken Wings
Posted  4/21/2016  
Judging Finalized  4/27/2016

Premium Member Mystical Lore of the Twilight Hawk

Aloft, with keen eyes in sorbet skies’ raspberry half-light
visceral vibrations of vitality does await.
Soaring in a hush, with plumage plush, a silent stealth kite,
he glissades on ghostly winds with mystical wings of fate.

Poised to plummet from his summit of purple sundown spread
with wingspan wide, wreathed gradual glide, hunts a twilight hawk.
Floating form causes flocks to brainstorm on life or death dread,
those flying forlorn, late to roost, are reduced by his stalk.

Aerodynamic, his dramatic dive deals destiny,
raptor raptly pursues passerine through air’s plum-bruised dim.
Whispering wings whisk to live and not die desperately,
over the arborvitaes the future for one is grim.

If it’s true that energy never dies; its cries transform,
then songbird's notes will ascend on hunter's wings in reform.


Susan Ashley 
December 3, 2017


~ First Place ~
Contest: Your Best Poem In The Last Year 
Sponsor: Silent One


~ Seventh Place ~
Contest: Best Rhyming Poem October - December 2017
Sponsor: John Hamilton


Wrapped In Your Smile

Wrapped in your smile,I saw the golden light
As if  a hidden world  our love revealed
Our spirits touched, our sorrows pushed to flight

In that space,  our worries did not bite
The trees were shelter, losses were each  healed
Wrapped in your holy smile,I saw the light

Do you  learn there is a second sight
From  heart and soul , the golden bells  shall peal
Where spirits touch ,where sorrows quickly fly

And who but you would see my inner plight
Would know the false from  what is right and real
Wrapped in your smile,I  felt warm golden light

No army with its metal and its might
Can win the final war , love conquers steel
As spirits touch ,as sorrows  say goodbye

I know it’s  hard to learn what others feel
And not draw back  from grief, from loss revealed
Wrapped in your  holy smile ,O golden light
Our spirits touch, our  eyes  weep  their delight

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Premium Member Mystical Epiphany

Written: January 12, 2024
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Their buzzing goes unabated
the cool air scent of lavender
in this unfathomable cosmos
where dreams are fulfilled,
a smidgeon of silver wind
utterly enthralled.

Within the icy voids of
aching and colorless hues
raven-inhabited remnants
vulnerable grays
aesthetic fog, fanciful yarns
dissipating wood smoke
whispers of winter, as dusk falls
dawn in monochrome
amidst gentle chimes
traces of an emotional waltz
oblivion is grieved in silence
a blackbird with ruby wings!

The colors of the trees
Iridescent in appearance
create a stunning scene
that is incredibly fortunate
this is a poetic domain
where lilts joyfully chortle
the trees gently move
and the dryads are overjoyed
the heart of lullabies
with brilliant opals
giving wandering spirits hope
back in their house labyrinth
Scarlet nests were seen on high boughs
romantic place where calm blooms.

With the hearth of lullabies
opals that are flaming
soul-directing the wayward.
they're back in their home maze.
nests of crimson grew snugly.
among the boughs, exalted.
a sanctuary for love.
wherever there is harmony,
exquisitely halcyon arbors
colorful tapestry with wonderful beauty
Iridescent sky with gorgeous hues
In this magical setting, dreams bloom
where nature's splendor is eternal,
calmly, trees swing, and the dryads spin.
© Sotto Poet  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Mystical Lore of the Thunderbeast

Great Spirit whispers on breathing breeze; 'It is time',
puce plume in saffron noon signals hunt's aborning,
ThunderBeasts' harrowing hooves erupt Great Plains grime,
soon will ail, widow's wail like a wild dove's mourning...

Ancient wisdom, ebony eyes, high cheekbones wide,
buffalo, he knows, mystical foes who fight back,
astride, he rides his Spanish horse with native pride,
his soul cleared, spiritual prayers 'fore the attack.

Timeworn trails, bison beaten by shaggy stampedes,
hunting grounds feared and revered, tribesmen o'er the brae,
power potent, cloven cloud, hastened heart proceeds,
ambush laid, panicked herd, embrace the bloody fray.

Casualty's chance, horseback dance, drum lethal hoof beats,
thunderous trample of ample prairie crocus,
Sioux and beasts' sacred throes, their crimson flows 'neath feet,
death has a way of bringing life into focus.


Susan Ashley
October, 24,2017


~ Third Place ~
Contest: Tribute To Native Culture
Sponsor: Line Gauthier

Premium Member Heavenly Hallucinations of Love's Divine Destiny

Heavenly Hallucinations of Love’s Divine Destiny
 
A wondrous spirit of true love now softly murmurs its echo
On the wings of God’s angels, as they ascend heavenward.

This and more occurs as radiant cultured pearls begin dancing
Their magical-mystical dance deliciously in the oceans deep.

With this, the bright-blue-mirrored waves of the oceans move
In a melodious tempo of love with the pearls as they dance.

Caressing the heavenly sparkles rippling deep in the oceans’ waves,
An enchanted diamond-cut glass now trembles and shatters loudly!

At this moment, a mermaid of angelic pulchritude takes her divine
Throne as the mystical dance continues throughout the late night.

Crystal chimes begin sounding pure with a fire and fury of emotions
Within our hearts, as they excite our passions palpably and exquisitely!

The candlelight’s effulgent reflection in this moment transfixes me true,
By your warm and loving touch and the magic of your presence with me. 

Coloring and scenting the air surpasses all others as the breathless and
Honeycombed eminence of your being touches the depths of my soul!  

Gary Bateman and Liam McDaid, A Collaborated Poem
Copyright © All Rights Reserved – July 21, 2018
(Couplet)

A Mystical Place

Frolicking through the woods pale light, elves do sing and fairies delight.
Searching for a hidden place, where pixies sing and children race.
Do beware the wicked trolls, who guard the bridge and steal your gold.
Cross the bridge and you shall find, the hidden gates once lost in time.
Read the runes in elven tongue, and the gates will open to a world still young.
Once inside you shall see, a mystical place that still remains free.
Enchanted queens with beautiful faces, who dance with grace in firm embraces.
Leprechauns count their pots of gold as wizards spin their tales of old.
Do not venture beyond this place, or goblins and orcs shall scar your face.
Winged dragons above they soar, breathing fire and loud they roar.
Venture not into the night, for banshees scream and cause you fright.
Witches mix their evil brews, and werewolves hunt in bloody broods.
So stay within the gated realm, where pleasures are many and beauty abounds.

3/8/2013

Premium Member Mystical Tides


Before me lies the ocean, with its shore,
   maintaining varied limits day and night;
at times, beyond its border, reaching more
   than ever, thrashing out in wild delight.

At other times, so docile, ebbing low
   with timid ripples that creep on the sand.
With highs and lows, the tides reshape its flow,
   by rhythms that obey the moon's command.

And here, I'm like an ocean at low tide,
   in quiet stillness, feeling down and out-
no energy, I let my high waves slide
   and merge with the calm seascape hereabout.

But like this ocean, soon my tides will turn-
   as waves roll in and stretch along the beach,
and thrashing out in wild delight, return
   to grasp the joy of everything in reach.


Sandra M. Haight

~1st Place~
Contest: Standard, End of 2018
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 12/29/2018

~1st Place~
Contest: Tell Me A Story 2
Sponsor: Brenda Chiri
Judged: 11/08/2018

Premium Member An Inner Knowing, An Absolute Feeling, My Mystical Soul, Self

My words come from an innermost and secret place within me.  Hidden feelings
that I have veiled and concealed over the years.  Words that bleed with emotion
and speak of deep-seated pain and weep with tears.  They spill onto my white
pages. All those inward words that I have held for years come dripping.

And I know that I have mastered my writing, I know my poetry is meaningful.
I realize that some may not like my words but it means nothing to me. For my
poetry is not measured by others or by being acknowledge somehow but by the
words that take my breath away.  I have that kind of wonderful inner knowing.

sad words are falling
all the red orange and brown-
a feather floats by

I am absolute and certain that I am meant to write pain and definite death,
and my aboriginal heritage with boundless and unrestrained passion.  I give 
totally to this path.  I am fixed and clear and infallible.  Seems I am on a
mission to utterly enlighten others.

And when you read my words you will feel my compassion and empathy, my
love, sorrow and affection.  You will glimpse and get an inkling of my journey
to the here and now, the rocky road that I have  traveled.  But, that road has
left me with feelings of absolute beauty, so I write poems beautifully sad.

and hidden birds sing
a song so melancholy-
calico cat stares

I feel we writers have to be mystical and in touch with our mysterious spirits,
there is a magic when you can connect with that otherworldly place deep inside
of your mind.  Some may call this connection their spirit or their muse,  or their 
soul but when you find it, you will know and it is from that place you write.

For inside of self is your ego, your I and yourself. It is your essence and vital
force,  it is your poetic heartbeat, it is where your mournful dwells and your
memories linger to be retold, for me it is my vitality and my journey that I 
share, and it is where I keep my HURT.

the rain is falling
as I stand beneath the tree-
my tears fly away 

___________________________
June 9, 2018


Written for the contest, An Inner Knowing,
And Absolute Feeling, My Mystical Soul/Self
sponsor, Caren Krutsinger

First Place

This Mystical Heart

THIS MYSTICAL HEART

Do you know me? Not my worldly names,
merely form, the vessel…I see what others
do not, I feel what others may never touch,
the morning mist surrenders to the subtle sun.
Jumping in and out of existence, the anti-particle
of fear; need is scratching the back of rejection
while some in favour of blindness, preach. I am 
drawn to you the way the shore beckons the sea.
Do you know how many years I wandered the sands
searching for the oasis in time? The flute needs
only wind to make music but what makes it a song? 
Motion is the creative spirit, the harmonic breeze
moves across the openings and flute and sound
are one; a loving connection is why the shaman walks.
A Crown you chose over this pauperism,
tired of the fight; it is in the very struggle that
riches are found. Be like the Prince of Peace
and surrender to the laundry, there is no lifting up
when things are easy only trouble brings out the light.
Of the many lives within this one each death
has brought the sober terms and one by one they die
like the notes of a song, not the whole tune, a part.
Listen for the melody of this mystical heart.
Do you know me? I am the wind.
Be the vulnerable flute and hear with your body.


For White Wolf's contest ~ first poem entered on the Soup (4/07/16)

Premium Member Magical Mystical Moon

Her journey begins in the west
a golden globe upon her breast,
amongst a carousel of stars;
although she sleeps, she never rests.

Gazing at the heavenly czars, 
passing on a course from afar.
illuminated by the sun,
floating in an astral bazaar.

Flirtatious, concealing for fun,
a myriad of faces spun.
Her province, to adjust the tides;
with mystic powers it is done.

At a celestial pace she glides,
passing astrological signs.
On a cycle, cannot linger;
keeping a course that she abides.

A wise old crone, no beginner;
knows when to rise, shine, and shimmer.
An orbit of mystique and charm,
sometimes bright and sometimes dimmer.


Date: May 23, 2022
For: Rubaiyat Contest Poetry
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet
Syllables verified on Howmanysyllables.com
Rhymes verified on Rhymezone.com
Rhyme Scheme: aaba-bbcb-ccdc-dded-eefe
Placed 3rd in contest

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