Mystical Epiphany

Written: January 12, 2024
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Their buzzing goes unabated
the cool air scent of lavender
in this unfathomable cosmos
where dreams are fulfilled,
a smidgeon of silver wind
utterly enthralled.

Within the icy voids of
aching and colorless hues
raven-inhabited remnants
vulnerable grays
aesthetic fog, fanciful yarns
dissipating wood smoke
whispers of winter, as dusk falls
dawn in monochrome
amidst gentle chimes
traces of an emotional waltz
oblivion is grieved in silence
a blackbird with ruby wings!

The colors of the trees
Iridescent in appearance
create a stunning scene
that is incredibly fortunate
this is a poetic domain
where lilts joyfully chortle
the trees gently move
and the dryads are overjoyed
the heart of lullabies
with brilliant opals
giving wandering spirits hope
back in their house labyrinth
Scarlet nests were seen on high boughs
romantic place where calm blooms.

With the hearth of lullabies
opals that are flaming
soul-directing the wayward.
they're back in their home maze.
nests of crimson grew snugly.
among the boughs, exalted.
a sanctuary for love.
wherever there is harmony,
exquisitely halcyon arbors
colorful tapestry with wonderful beauty
Iridescent sky with gorgeous hues
In this magical setting, dreams bloom
where nature's splendor is eternal,
calmly, trees swing, and the dryads spin.

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Date: 1/16/2024 9:36:00 AM
Ah dr sotto, back to congratulate you on your top win in brians contest, well deserved really. Its always good to see you in winners list
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Date: 1/13/2024 2:36:00 PM
An enchanting write Sotto, Very nicely penned
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Date: 1/13/2024 6:17:00 AM
Your poetic canvas paints a vivid and enchanting scene where the symphony of nature harmonizes with the ethereal. The opening lines, with buzzing sounds and the scent of lavender in the cool air, immediately set a tranquil atmosphere, inviting readers into a dreamscape where fulfillment awaits. The imagery of iridescent trees and a poetic domain where lilting joyfully chortles create a picturesque setting. The mention of dryads, opals, and wandering spirits imbues the poem with a touch of
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Date: 1/13/2024 6:18:00 AM
mysticism, adding layers of enchantment to the unfolding narrative... Nicely done ..
Date: 1/13/2024 4:59:00 AM
So charmingly poetic, my friend: --this is a poetic domain where lilts joyfully chortle the trees gently move and the dryads are overjoyed the heart of lullabies with brilliant opals---awesome descriptions adorn the images you convey, Lasaad.
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Date: 1/13/2024 4:34:00 AM
Oh wow, dear Sotto, I really love the mythological touch that you've given this poem with the beautiful mention of the 'soul of trees' - 'dryads'..That's absolutely a profound and creative aspect.. How beautifully you've reflected the coziness of crimson warmth that is homes by those little nests..It works very well in conveying a deep metaphorical interpretation as well.. I'm in awe of your ethereal descriptions here and how beautifully you've made this free verse flow! It's absolutely gorgeous
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Date: 1/13/2024 1:54:00 AM
Your free verse is stunning. Your description just flows.
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Date: 1/12/2024 10:35:00 PM
How descriptive is this poem, i love how you do free verse too dr sotto, you make them flow so seamlessly with exquisite metaphors. And for some reason , my hazy mind finds it easier to comprehend free verse as descriptive as this more easily and i cant help but be in awe captivated by lines and thoughts expressed here such as “ The colors of the trees Iridescent in appearance create a stunning scene” so true through nature and all that which is around we fine serenity and healing. Loved this
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Date: 1/12/2024 7:53:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem of dreamland beauty.
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Date: 1/12/2024 6:53:00 PM
Ah, lovely- and ethereal, enchanting, "mystical" as you say, love the invoking of dryads with the trees and beauty of Nature...
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