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Mystical Epiphany

Written: January 12, 2024 __________________________________ Their buzzing goes unabated the cool air scent of lavender in this unfathomable cosmos where dreams are fulfilled, a smidgeon of silver wind utterly enthralled. Within the icy voids of aching and colorless hues raven-inhabited remnants vulnerable grays aesthetic fog, fanciful yarns dissipating wood smoke whispers of winter, as dusk falls dawn in monochrome amidst gentle chimes traces of an emotional waltz oblivion is grieved in silence a blackbird with ruby wings! The colors of the trees Iridescent in appearance create a stunning scene that is incredibly fortunate this is a poetic domain where lilts joyfully chortle the trees gently move and the dryads are overjoyed the heart of lullabies with brilliant opals giving wandering spirits hope back in their house labyrinth Scarlet nests were seen on high boughs romantic place where calm blooms. With the hearth of lullabies opals that are flaming soul-directing the wayward. they're back in their home maze. nests of crimson grew snugly. among the boughs, exalted. a sanctuary for love. wherever there is harmony, exquisitely halcyon arbors colorful tapestry with wonderful beauty Iridescent sky with gorgeous hues In this magical setting, dreams bloom where nature's splendor is eternal, calmly, trees swing, and the dryads spin.

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Date: 1/16/2024 9:36:00 AM
Ah dr sotto, back to congratulate you on your top win in brians contest, well deserved really. Its always good to see you in winners list
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Date: 1/13/2024 2:36:00 PM
An enchanting write Sotto, Very nicely penned
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Date: 1/13/2024 6:20:00 AM
Indeed a magical setting you created with such mystical, exquisite lines and imagery. I want to live in that place--"a sanctuary for love. wherever there is harmony, exquisitely halcyon arbors colorful tapestry with wonderful beauty. You've captured in your 'Sotto' style nature in it harmonious and glorious splendor. I have to fave this so I can re-read it. It spoke to my soul. Wishing you a wonderful weekend, your poetess friend in frigid Texas, Sara
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Date: 1/13/2024 6:17:00 AM
Your poetic canvas paints a vivid and enchanting scene where the symphony of nature harmonizes with the ethereal. The opening lines, with buzzing sounds and the scent of lavender in the cool air, immediately set a tranquil atmosphere, inviting readers into a dreamscape where fulfillment awaits. The imagery of iridescent trees and a poetic domain where lilting joyfully chortles create a picturesque setting. The mention of dryads, opals, and wandering spirits imbues the poem with a touch of
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Date: 1/13/2024 6:18:00 AM
mysticism, adding layers of enchantment to the unfolding narrative... Nicely done ..
Date: 1/13/2024 4:59:00 AM
So charmingly poetic, my friend: --this is a poetic domain where lilts joyfully chortle the trees gently move and the dryads are overjoyed the heart of lullabies with brilliant opals---awesome descriptions adorn the images you convey, Lasaad.
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Date: 1/13/2024 4:34:00 AM
Oh wow, dear Sotto, I really love the mythological touch that you've given this poem with the beautiful mention of the 'soul of trees' - 'dryads'..That's absolutely a profound and creative aspect.. How beautifully you've reflected the coziness of crimson warmth that is homes by those little nests..It works very well in conveying a deep metaphorical interpretation as well.. I'm in awe of your ethereal descriptions here and how beautifully you've made this free verse flow! It's absolutely gorgeous
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Date: 1/13/2024 1:54:00 AM
Your free verse is stunning. Your description just flows.
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Date: 1/12/2024 10:35:00 PM
How descriptive is this poem, i love how you do free verse too dr sotto, you make them flow so seamlessly with exquisite metaphors. And for some reason , my hazy mind finds it easier to comprehend free verse as descriptive as this more easily and i cant help but be in awe captivated by lines and thoughts expressed here such as “ The colors of the trees Iridescent in appearance create a stunning scene” so true through nature and all that which is around we fine serenity and healing. Loved this
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Date: 1/12/2024 7:53:00 PM
I enjoyed this poem of dreamland beauty.
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Date: 1/12/2024 6:53:00 PM
Ah, lovely- and ethereal, enchanting, "mystical" as you say, love the invoking of dryads with the trees and beauty of Nature...
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