This Mystical Heart

THIS MYSTICAL HEART

Do you know me? Not my worldly names,
merely form, the vessel…I see what others
do not, I feel what others may never touch,
the morning mist surrenders to the subtle sun.
Jumping in and out of existence, the anti-particle
of fear; need is scratching the back of rejection
while some in favour of blindness, preach. I am 
drawn to you the way the shore beckons the sea.
Do you know how many years I wandered the sands
searching for the oasis in time? The flute needs
only wind to make music but what makes it a song? 
Motion is the creative spirit, the harmonic breeze
moves across the openings and flute and sound
are one; a loving connection is why the shaman walks.
A Crown you chose over this pauperism,
tired of the fight; it is in the very struggle that
riches are found. Be like the Prince of Peace
and surrender to the laundry, there is no lifting up
when things are easy only trouble brings out the light.
Of the many lives within this one each death
has brought the sober terms and one by one they die
like the notes of a song, not the whole tune, a part.
Listen for the melody of this mystical heart.
Do you know me? I am the wind.
Be the vulnerable flute and hear with your body.


For White Wolf's contest ~ first poem entered on the Soup (4/07/16)
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Lamoureux Avatar
November 2, 2019 at 9:06 AM
I can relate to your words. You have expressed this so well. I wrote a piece called “Wisdom Tree” that I think you would connect with. Thanksfor your visit and comment this morning.
Deo Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 8:21 AM
Among the top ten finishers, Congrats Phil. Once again, deep yet basic to any who seek primordial melodies. Walking with Jesus, I remember when a driver cusses me on the highway, smile and repeat "Bless her, LORD" until I begin to smile ... unlocks some of Jesus' deepest lessons. Deep, then so simple. Yet hard for humans. Like me. shalom and Happy Easter, Sir Capitano!
Allison Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 7:36 AM
Many congrats on your win Phil its lovely to read the you first poem for the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
April 12, 2017 at 10:42 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest! It was a really hard choice.
Capitano Avatar
April 13, 2017 at 4:14 AM
Thanks Rick, hard to believe its been one year ~ so much has happened, it seems like a lifetime ago. Namaste.
Wolf Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 6:02 AM
Spoken like a shaman too! I love your first entry, Phil. I'm placing it in my fav's now.
Capitano Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 6:42 AM
Thanks Rick always great to have a fan. I have been practising shamanism for many years now...the stories I've yet to tell...
Breedt Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 1:08 AM
Hi Phil, you really have a beautiful mind This poem slowed me down to take momens to refrain afrom my usual banter. It gave some peace with I so badly needed. Thanks for stopping by mine too
Kimathi Avatar
May 19, 2016 at 6:57 AM
Hi Phil. Congrats for having your work featured in the Poetry Soup homepage!! ;-)
Whatley Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 11:09 AM
Lovely metaphors, and confident expression in this enigmatic piece. An excellent way to introduce yourself here on PoetrySoup, and so I bid you the warmest of welcomes, Phil. ~Michael
Lane Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 10:56 AM
Phil, you capture your thoughts with such wonderful phrases. The perfect title for the melody your flute plays through its mystical heart.
Dalei Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 8:53 PM
Dear Phil, Nice first entry.. Hearty welcome to PS. Wish u a successful journey ahead.......hugs
A   Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 3:30 PM
Phil, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Negron Flores Avatar
April 7, 2016 at 3:07 PM
Excellent poem Phil. Welcome to Poetry Soup
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