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When dreamtime leads me to a mystic land I saunter quietly ... climbing a hill, For the kingdom of fairies and elves reigns With gossamer wings and jewels in their hair. A sapphire castle laps with ambient winds Robed in diamante from godly hands. Sweet mist of air and silver voices echo Through quivering rock pools of hawthorns green. This lofty place thrills bright imaginings Upon glittered sands like tiers of limestone, Hard marbles and finely-polished pebbles Lie dotted through rainbow of stardust ,untold. Tasseled wands bestow spells on the courtyard Beguiling my eye with pixie- waltz steps Until, at the height of enchanted awe Fairy Queen lends magic, then fades in dreams! Second Chance # 3 Contest of Broken Wings Posted 4/21/2016 Judging Finalized 4/27/2016

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Date: 5/6/2016 12:45:00 PM
Your enchanting piece is really beautiful and magical!!! Congrats Nette, for your top placement in the contest!! ;-)
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Date: 5/4/2016 8:19:00 AM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. Your castle on the hill brings the fantasy of dream's kingdom onto your canvas, painted by the most gentle words. May your dreams always sing Nette for they are beautiful indeed. You bring to life a world that shall always sing in its beauty. Keep bringing your dreams before us. This is a seven. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 5/3/2016 7:50:00 PM
Nette, lovely poem! congrats on your top win in the contest :)-luloo
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Date: 5/1/2016 9:00:00 AM
Please take me there next time you go your words make me want to see it with my eyes. Dream big, my dear.
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Date: 4/25/2016 12:22:00 PM
Wonderful dream of castle on mystic land where fairy queen lends magic viewed with the artistic words. Good luck in the contest my lovely friend. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/23/2016 2:36:00 PM
- An exciting castle with beautiful spells and angel dust - Lovely poem, Nette :) - Good luck in the contest! - hugs // Sun :)
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Date: 4/23/2016 2:20:00 PM
This poem is indeed magical Nette. I am sure this will be a top winner. #7 ;)
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Date: 4/23/2016 11:52:00 AM
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Date: 4/23/2016 8:20:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Very different from the ones that I have already read..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/23/2016 8:12:00 AM
Phantasmagoric writing dear, nette! Good luck!
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Date: 4/23/2016 4:09:00 AM
I must say it’s a magical gem created by you dear friend Nette. Its magical beauty would continue to live through the beauty of your Poem for a very long to come. Love and best wishes always...Ravindra K Kapoor
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Date: 4/22/2016 9:09:00 AM
Lovely dreamy write Nette.
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Date: 4/22/2016 7:46:00 AM
Mystical and magical, a castle I would love to visit, and I did through your words :)
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Date: 4/21/2016 11:51:00 PM
You turned the castle on the hill into a marvelous magical lace, Nette. Very well executed.
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Date: 4/21/2016 9:33:00 PM
You have a very magical way with creating visions! The best to you in this contest! :-)
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Date: 4/21/2016 4:13:00 PM
Dreams lead you to the land of fantasy, where your sapphire castle stands loftily in fairyland...surrounded by an aura of magic and mystery. So beautiful!! What a pity that dreams have to come to an end! Fortunately this poem could last for ever:) hugs // paul
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Date: 4/21/2016 3:59:00 PM
Mystified,mystified. Your fairy dream is a tower of a poem!
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Date: 4/21/2016 2:37:00 PM
I think I've had a dream like this where I got lost and had to click my heels together to get back to Kansas. Your dream, however, is much better than mine. "Through quivering rock pools of hawthorn green." How bout that. Love, daver
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