Magical Mystical Moon

Her journey begins in the west
a golden globe upon her breast,
amongst a carousel of stars;
although she sleeps, she never rests.

Gazing at the heavenly czars, 
passing on a course from afar.
illuminated by the sun,
floating in an astral bazaar.

Flirtatious, concealing for fun,
a myriad of faces spun.
Her province, to adjust the tides;
with mystic powers it is done.

At a celestial pace she glides,
passing astrological signs.
On a cycle, cannot linger;
keeping a course that she abides.

A wise old crone, no beginner;
knows when to rise, shine, and shimmer.
An orbit of mystique and charm,
sometimes bright and sometimes dimmer.


Date: May 23, 2022
For: Rubaiyat Contest Poetry
Sponsored by: Sotto Poet
Syllables verified on Howmanysyllables.com
Rhymes verified on Rhymezone.com
Rhyme Scheme: aaba-bbcb-ccdc-dded-eefe
Placed 3rd in contest

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Date: 6/14/2022 12:57:00 PM
You entrance me with your mystical poem Paulette. Congrats on your win, bravo bravo, a winner by far xo xo
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Date: 6/14/2022 9:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A "Wonderful" write. Did you see the beautiful extra full moon last night??? Have a great/blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 6/14/2022 12:38:00 AM
You've penned a wonderful rubaiyat poem my dear friend, Paulette. This form is difficult for me but you did it so well. I like it a lot. Imagery is great. CONGRATULATIONS on your win! Hugs
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/14/2022 4:53:00 AM
Thanks Len, your comments are so uplifting! Glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette
Date: 6/13/2022 8:23:00 PM
A great poem. Congratulations!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/14/2022 4:52:00 AM
Thank you, Christuraj~glad you enjoyed it. :)Paulette
Date: 6/13/2022 5:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in my contest Paulette, you did a wonderful job in this poem. Best regards
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/13/2022 5:45:00 PM
I am honored to have accomplished a placement in your Rubaiyat Contest~it is not a form I generally do; but I enjoyed the challenge. Thanks for the opportunity. :)Paulette
Date: 5/31/2022 9:47:00 AM
Loved the imagery and the flow, Paulette. Thanks for sharing, Bill
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 6/1/2022 5:35:00 AM
Glad you enjoyed it~the Moon is captivating! :)Paulette
Date: 5/26/2022 8:47:00 AM
This went straight to my FAVEs list. I liked every single line ever so much!
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/27/2022 8:38:00 AM
Oh, you are making me blush....but I cant help love your applauding comments. :)Paulette
Date: 5/24/2022 1:57:00 AM
The moon is always an attraction apart from its scientific value. I loved your poem though for its value.
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Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 5/27/2022 8:37:00 AM
Thanks for stopping by to comment. Hope all is well. :)Paulette
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