Best Long Drawn Out Poems


Premium Member Lyrebirds

A short walk from the road
you are deep in forest. 
Tall mountain ash form 
pillars that hold up space 
and keep a cathedral 
of shade within its walls.
High overhead, a canopy
of leaves curtain the sky 
in prayerful whispers.

Tree ferns crowd a gully
where fallen giants bridge
a creek carrying a trickle
of mountain tears. 
You keep your silence
not wanting to intrude
on another's grief.

Sometimes you can hear
lyrebirds perform their repertoire 
of mimic song. One, they say,
can copy the sound
of a chain saw, another, 
the long drawn out whine
of a siren as it races
towards a fire.

Miracle On 10th Street

On many long, drawn out nights, his routine was to
shuffle aimlessly along dimly lit city streets.
Much of the time, his only companion was a
concealed remnant of cheap bottled wine. He
scavenged for food and money. He would walk
enveloped in deep, weighty shadows and
halo laden street lights. Solitary. Lonely.
Emptiness that few people feel or know.
The raw hollow of an alcoholics tightly 
drawn stomach. A gnawing pain that craves
food but will only be quelled when he gets
enough cash for another pint of cheap wine or gin.

Where to spend the night? Maybe with
some of them under the 10th st. bridge.
They may have some money there, or a
blanket to share. Might rummage garbage
containers at the restaurants on the way.
Could walk the parking lot at the grocery store.
There's always change lying on the asphalt. 
Could act like he passed out on a city
bench. The police take you to the Detox
Center then. He hated that. Have to stay
72 hours. Guts ache, skin crawls. They
feed you well, but there is always
that craving.

Just keep walking. Frail, vaguely awaren
of hissurroundings as he treks in shadow 
andsepia. On 10th, the street lights are so
damned bright they hurt his eyes. 
What's that at the bus stop bench
in a brown paper sack?
Two loaves of bread, two wrappers of
bologna, and a luxurious bottle of Gallo
wine tucked in the sack. My God. 
Providence at a city bus stop.
Someone boarded the bus and left 
their supper. Probably headed for the
homeless shelter overnight. 
White bread and meat for one hunger.
Cheap wine for the other.
There might even be some food to share.

                         Miracle on 10th St.

A Season of Warmth Part One

The beauty of lies, 
      Between your eyes. 
The song of drugs 
      I find in your veins 
                     Is never ending. 

The stream replies to a song of redundant tides, 
      How will I hide all that you have brought to me 
      In these gifts of disease? 
Let’s sing them out in melodies. 

The flow is mixed in nicotine, and a pinch of coca 
      Leaves. A variety of alcoholic drinks you 
      Gave to me, with a smile that just whines 
      “Please.” THC and so many leaves, why 
      Couldn’t you love me? 
The hand of a white goddess touches mine. I will 
      Address all that you have meant in these eyes. 
The pain of your subtle lying smile, it 
                                      Stings, 
                                     Till I cry. 

Life is only a jar of ashes, 
      And ha-ha, 
The body as a temple… 
      Let it burn, 
                For the lies of Christ 
Are dull and pathetic, 
                 I’d rather prefer 
My long drawn out, 
          Season in Hell.


Premium Member Museum Lights

The museum closed for ever,
and I was there
when they turned off the lights

They were turned off one by one...
At first the boardroom's
where Jacqui cried, I think

then the conference room
where they dismantled
all the plugs

then the rooms on all the floors,
and I could not stand it -
the long drawn-out goodbye





12/25/2015
© Julia Ward  Create an image from this poem.

Premium Member Song of The Rainbow Butterfly No 1: ABAB

A faithful atmospheric worth of you,
equal in statuesque rainbow possess.
Grace a forest wake to rumored jewel,
long drawn-out winks ethereal blesses.
Favoring flowers blossoming parades,
a living garden hails its ambitions.
Hovers a bee stared yearning serenades,
nigh turnout unequal kinds, auditions.
Ode claims Rainbow Butterfly to whom shares
glory to its signature character,
beliefs prestige for reserving crosshairs.
Incepts moniker beings cofactor,
chicks or the eggs, and who'll take second best?
Rainbow suave sky soars the aliferous.
© Hilo Poet  Create an image from this poem.

When

April 26, 2018 Thursday 9:10 am  A COMING APART OR A COMING TOGETHER


	WHEN WILL I HAVE YOU?	

	I ask
	oh, anything to get you to focus on us
	Think about 
	Talk about us
	but, the bait isn’t taken
	You must forget how much this love seeks 
	to validate
	to commeserate
	to be
	When will you be all mine? I whimpered, I wondered, I asked, I begged
	Oh Love you stupid creature of myth
	Why did you come to my doorstep in such a hideous way?
 	Full of lack
	Full of insinuation
	Full of stark days full of unrequited everything
	The touch of you, the long drawn out harm derived
	if it isn’t going to last
	like forever promised
	Full of holes is this love
	nasty implications
	this whores nest
	a flipped over contamination of heart
	two that want but won’t be
	won’t be what’s wanted
	you sit in holy non matrimonious bliss
	as I wait in sanctimonious kiss
	what kind of love is this
	this blessed event soured in tentured history
	you and your best flaunted
	by me in daily horror
	while I guess 
	is it fool or not
	to keep you
	when you show up
	even daily is the promise
	and you do
	still I suffer the wages
	paid to keep us apart
	it wasn’t my idea
	to have it like this
	i put up with it
	because like I said before
	love is stupid
	shot full of holes
	blinding
	binding
	habitual
	pissy
	I’d like a hiatus
	from this
	though I’d miss
	the interaction
	in my mind
	an intelligence dwells
	the heart doesn’t partake though
	it too, idiots up
	at this rate
	even if it comes
	I may not take it
	May forget the whole escapade
	go my own way
	without
	without hoping it will turn out
	I may let doubt override
	I loved being a whole, one together
	With you, I’m neither
	barely a quarter, if that
	so how come we’re still haggling over the details
	why still together
	got me
	that’s all I know
	is you still do
	have me
	When will I have you?


Deadly Waves of the Sea

The night was dark and stormy, lightning lit up the sky
Your little boat was rocked and tossed around in the sea
the sharp and jagged rocks drew nigh  
Without warning there was a loud ripping noise as the
sail tore and the mast fell down on the wooden deck
The little boat that you were so proud of was now
a sad and broken wreck. 
 
I knew you were out there somewhere, where your tired
and weary body lay I couldn’t see    
All I really knew for sure my darling was how dear you are and 
how much you mean to me
If only I could hold up my head just high enough to look down
through  the  deep waves in the ocean blue       
I know I could find the strength I would need to make a path 
that will lead me right to you.

Though many fierce storms have passed over where you lie now
since your boat struck those rocks and was tossed into the sea
I've been praying for a miracle and you'd be found before these long drawn out days turn into months
I pray that God will lift you high up from the ocean's floor below and help you see the light that will guide you
To a safe path that will carry you across undulating waves of the sea
and soon my love finally you'll be home again with me.

Death of a Dream

Death of a Dream
      by Amy Swanson


Time
   existence
       goes by
          *long drawn out sigh*

gray transforming

overbearing
    the happy
         once joyful
            exuberant bright cheerful eclectic

becoming shadows
misty vapor
                  rising to the sky
                  fleeting...
                              gone.

Days gone by
     weeks
        and
          months
            and
               years

                          motions of life
                          crowd out
                          emotions of life  


                                         This unrecognized yet all too familiar place...

                                                    This is where dreams are born.
                                                    This is where dreams die.

Spark of light
    soft golden
struggles against 
    darkened mire

hope's ashes
      faith's grief
           love's despondence

Marigold hue
        charred
              sphere of night envelopes

Streaks and smudges
          of pride
              vanity
              selfishness
              cruelty
                      deface life's canvas
                         once glowing brilliant
                             -- now torn and tainted.


                                          This unrecognized yet all too familiar place...

                                                    This is where dreams are born.
                                                    This is where dreams die.
Silence...
    utter chaos...
         sheer madness
              consuming life -

they don't know.

They don't care.

They go about
     *busily*
          trading dreams
              spiritual riches
                for material fantasies
                     built with air.

Colorless
    consumes the bright

one small spark
        daring dream
              chasing burgeoning shadows

until exhausted
           extinguished...
                       no more.


                                            This unrecognized yet all too familiar place...

                                                    This is where dreams are born.
                                                    This is where dreams die.

Vamp

Hiding a hint of melody
In the free-wheeling ramble
Of the piano’s opening phrases

It’s a pitter pat preview like
Kelly’s singing steps as he
Splashes through a street of rain

It’s a long drawn out unraveling
Of the tune on Ray Charles’ piano
Before he shouts out a bluesy version
Of our patriotic America the Beautiful

Afrocentric

Africana, Serengeti kaleidoscopes
I painted with Zebra isotopes
 My ethnicity abounds from my
 afro follicles.
 Black fruit with pink middle 
 My garden cultivates Nubian yokes
forever bound like 
 Sampson tied to temple pillars 
 pulling with all my might 
 there was a time I discredited my blackness 
 Curls, waves, relaxer and activator 
 Wanting my soul to glow
 Not knowing the image reflected 
 back from Eden's pool
 was God saying Lou is that you?
 Confused, thinking my tar tone
 big nose and lips were haunting 
 but I know now it was only God calling,
 Blackness awakening 
 Fist held high, my race
 breathed relief “sigh” long drawn out
like an exhale that comes from that tired place
that place where all you can say is "oh, well"
and the inhale brings peace you don't understand
but you feel God placing your clay in order
We are what we've been denied 
We are what we've been holding inside 
We are the kinky, curly course shaft
the vein for all that is possible
and grows into a beautiful black afro
that thing hands can't get enough of
beautiful by default 
 Thoughts of ugliness 
  take a walk.
 Blackness, as round as
Erykah Badu's Afro
The circumference of us is this:
we are colored with spiritual isotopes
and what we need most
is the straightest line to love.
Put a part in it
O' how magnificent!
© Ts Lewis  Create an image from this poem.

Time

Time crawls by as your living one event
And time won’t speed up for it to go by
Then once it has past and  you look back
You see that maybe the time really flew

Then another event in your life comes
And time won’t slow down as it flies by
Now time has past, looking back you see a long drawn out event
It should have gone by even faster

Looking up you  watch the moon linger 
It seems to be an unobtainable beauty
In your mind there are constant thoughts of what would-be
Stand tall and move forward and the future you will see

Black Friday - More Holiday Shenanigans

~Black Friday~

With the turkey out of the way
It's time to do some shop and save
Black Friday...here we go again

I am up at three o'clock
So I'll be at the door on the dot
Shopping like a mad whirlwind

Pulling up to Walmart
Grab myself a fresh shopping cart
For when the doors open up at five

Like a horse out of the gate
Your own fault for being in my way
Just count your blessings that youre still alive

Beat the crowds straight to the back
For a little snatch and grab
Gotta have the newest wide screen T.V.

Blue hair had my T.V. in her cart
Took her out with a karate chop
Sorry granny it's either you or me

Next set my sights on this kid
With no clue of what he did
Or how he ended splayed out on the floor

In the remote car shopping isle
And it may take that kid awhile
To remember who, what, when, or what for

I next wildly veer off to the right
For that set of Ginsu knives
That I use to hold back the forming crowd

With it being the only set left
I Samurai it over my head
Which  quickly clears out the entire Ginsu isle

With my shopping about done
I sweep shelves into my cart on the run
Figure I can sort it all out later

At times it's hard to pick and choose
With the attitude of I hate to lose
Anyways I figure they owe me for all my labor

When I get to the front of the store
There's bookoo bunches of crowds galore
I've never seen such a long drawn out line

So I clear the path in front of me
Taking people off at the knees
They'll surely think twice the next time

Before getting in my way
And my day of shop and save
Already planning for next year my friend

Satisfied I head for the door
But I tell you not before
I turn and say Happy Holidays and Good Will Towards Men!
Cause that's just the way I am...

Black Friday

With the turkey out of the way
It's time to do some shop and save
Black Friday...here we go again

I am up at three o'clock
So I'll be at the door on the dot
Shopping like a mad whirlwind

Pulling up to Walmart
Grab myself a fresh shopping cart
For when the doors open up at five

Like a horse out of the gate
Your own fault for being in my way
Just count your blessings that you're still alive

Beat the crowds straight to the back
For a little snatch and grab
Gotta have the newest wide screen T.V.

Blue hair had my T.V. in her cart
Took her out with a karate chop
Sorry granny it's either you or me

Next set my sights on this kid
With no clue of what he did
Or how he ended splayed out on the floor

In the remote car shopping isle
And it may take that kid awhile
To remember who, what, when, or what for

I next wildly veer off to the right
For that set of Ginsu knives
That I use to hold back the forming crowd

With it being the only set left
I Samurai it over my head
Which  quickly clears out the entire Ginsu isle

With my shopping about done
I sweep shelves into my cart on the run
Figure I can sort it all out later

At times it's hard to pick and choose
With the attitude of I hate to lose
Anyways I figure they owe me for all my labor

When I get to the front of the store
There's bookoo bunches of crowds galore
I've never seen such a long drawn out line

So I clear the path in front of me
Taking people off at the knees
They'll surely think twice the next time

Before getting in my way
And my day of shop and save
Already planning for next year my friend

Satisfied I head for the door
But I tell you not before
I turn and say Happy Holidays and Good Will Towards Men!

Cause that's just the way I am...

It's Not Easy When the Road Is Your Driver

It's Not Easy When The Road Is Your Driver 

To want you to hold you to need you
 We look for love in all the wrong places
 Certain vestibules will leave a trace in
 A challenge to be free is a question of time
 With my shortness of breath makes me step in line
 Shadows break through the piercing skin
 A new day in which to begin again
 A flood of emotions from my tavels on the road
 The turning of a tide onto a new episode
 The moments we used to share having so much fun
 We look for cover now while were out on the run
 I remember the touch of your hand & sweet romance
 The soft music with a long drawn out bubble bath
 We see a slight vision from the mirror at a glance
 A love letter that was sent to your door lest I implore
 It's not easy when the road is your driver
 One hand to hold a heart will mend
 A glance at the past will tell us of our future
 Sweet kisses with perfume in the air
 We dined in the comfort of a loving touch in the atmosphere
 You were a stranger so long ago yet not anymore

A Theatrical Nose Dive

This just in, we are long drawn out drab sentences of our breath,
trying to base a topic off epiphany's languid scry, waiting on osmosis to spark a nerve.

Crinkled pages, termites gnawing on pencils, saw dust.
Failed improvs to deliver colloquial precedence, un performed characters with ventriloquist strings for livelihood, the presentation uncanny to scintillating epitomes.

Group 2, line one, drawing a line in the sand. Out of the blue sparks a Big Bang, a flash of genius, a flicker of brilliance in a nano second, staged to theatrical dreams of sun dance wins.

Then there is me, clapping my hands in silenced tongue, speechless with hesitation in my thoughts, smoking in the after burn of rust, only the mind would know what to say left in the smoke clouds of their creation.

I've got nothing, quick sand running through my fingers like vapors in edgewise, and while I am still just breathing they just are, encircling around me like a shooting star.

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