William Kelii Kekaula Poet Crown of Sonnets

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Poetic Form: Crown of Sonnets: Italian or Petrachan
Inspired: 2023 December 27
Image: Rainbow Butterfly by FB

Song of The Rainbow Butterfly No 1: ABAB

A faithful atmospheric worth of you,
equal in statuesque rainbow possess.
Grace a forest wake to rumored jewel,
long drawn-out winks ethereal blesses.
Favoring flowers blossoming parades,
a living garden hails its ambitions.
Hovers a bee stared yearning serenades,
nigh turnout unequal kinds, auditions.
Ode claims Rainbow Butterfly to whom shares
glory to its signature character,
beliefs prestige for reserving crosshairs.
Incepts moniker beings cofactor,
chicks or the eggs, and who'll take second best?
Rainbow suave sky soars the aliferous.

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Silent One December 28, 2023 at 6:34 AM Look forward to your new saga my friend.. you seem to be so proficient in posting sonnets.. great imagery in this one, really colourful.. as always your sonnet flows so well.. William Kelii Kekaula December 28, 2023 at 8:17 AM A heartfelt thanks indeed to you as well, Silent One. I hope I'll be able to master the 3 formed outlays and through these practices of sonnets, mayhaps take on other forms down the road, my friend. Aloha, William

Hiya Sharma December 27, 2023 at 7:05 PM Oh, this is another saga of songs that you've begun and its just so intriguing with the rainbow butterfly.. The imageries you've painted here feel otherworldly, especially "Grace a forest wake to rumored jewel" Woww "Favoring flowers blossoming parades", "Rainbow suave sky soars the aliferous" Beautiful wordplay throughout as you describe how the rainbow essence of that butterfly is unique in its own.. Gorgeously crafted! William Kelii Kekaula December 27, 2023 at 8:47 PM Oh, Hiya, anything said, in commenting on other writes, or that of your writes that induces commenting, whereto, 'tis to be such an occasion, a great honor, indeed. An admirable review that slivers highlights passages then neath spotlights be arrested for in-depth furtherance, --to the whole of it, my heartfelt thanks, my friend. Aloha, William