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Teaching By Immersion

Teaching by Immersion (A poem for my dad…) When I was young On the tiny island of Tonga My dad taught me to swim “Swim” He said as he threw me From the back of the boat As the water closed Over my head I felt Free I wasn’t afraid I knew I could hold my breath until someone above panicked and my dad would crash into the water and lift me into the sun I don’t remember ever Being taught how to swim I simply remember waiting Calmly In the blue green blur For my dad And The sun…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/11/2009 3:44:00 PM
Kim that certainly does tell a tale of how brave and trusting one girl is (That would be you). You must love your father a great deal - I never had the chance to meet my Dad but if I had I would have hoped that I would come to love him as you do yours - From what I understand he was a real good Man - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 2/11/2009 1:38:00 PM
I see a little humor at the beginning. But I liked the rest of it as well. Good write Kim
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Date: 2/11/2009 12:16:00 PM
So then it taught patience? Well that's a good thing to learn too LOL Love the directness and clarity of this write and the understanding that you had even as a child. Michael
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