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Eclipsed Letters

Intermingled threads of my fantasies pour
from the ink of my love on the bare soul
of the letter I write for you, my beloved
The windowpane sparkles moonlit dreams
And I submerge into my visions of you
You, my moon bound to your services
Make me wonder how I would write
All the love-soaked words I've never said
I had questions that submerged in tides
Propelled by divine celestial waves
I forgot to savor the fragrance of lilies
That intertwine into my desolate bed stand
Perhaps you will be gulping your tea
When this letter relishes the touch
Of your frozen fingers looking for warmth
You might inhale the aroma of my love
Dripped in my waxing and waning hopes

Rosy shades of mellowed sunrise
Prompt my hopes to flutter and fly
Away to a land where you reside
I have spent last night tossing them
In solicitude of your awaited letter
My feet took a hundred strides 
to the door that I opened warily

I await your reply to quench my love
I am the sun that follows her moon 
Eclipsed by unending galactic cycles 
Let me drape myself in your love
Let your letter wait at the corner
Until I've told you my anxiety faded away
I've been onlooking the desert roads
Oh should I merge into them in daylight
To kiss the path your letter traverses
This time I hope it remembers at last
My name and address on this frayed street

Let it bring to me your smooth embrace
The sun, exhausted of the chase for moon
Over these centuries, awaits the end of eclipse
Drenched in my fears I whisper at sunset,
"Let my love engulf me in soothing waves"

....The sun and the moon in a golden Aurora, unite,
Your letter arrives before you colored in lilac twilight.


*A tribute to the tumultuous emotions of a soldier's wife*
 


May 26, 2020
The Sun And The Moon Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Chantelle Anne Cooke
~~Premiere Contest Winner: 4th Place

BRIAN'S CHOICE V,any form,any theme Contest
~~Winner: First Place

Premium Member Eclipsed

The sun, drab green
  The moon too quiet
Earth's cities wept
  Looting and riots

Mayors postured, spoke
  Their message 'woke'
The sun raced away
  Moon's light gone gray

Premium Member Eclipsed

Reality seems obscured
By what we think
We need to do
© Uwe Stroh  Create an image from this poem.


Eclipsed

Sparse lashes span aged lids,
framing an eye that catches light
like the clearest glass.
The softest liquid sheen - of tears?
But the eye stares blankly
without expression. 
No crinkle of joy, no distention of fear,
yet the pupil dilates, eclipsing the iris. 
Snuffing out the moon.
And there, the faintest reflection...
watching, waiting.  
He stares down Death itself
with no sign of fear.

*Inspired by Escher's "Eye"

Premium Member Totaly Eclipsed

Moon on fire kissing souls unite 
sparks in destiny your spirit flying towards the sun 

Honey dew rises in light of a promise 
dazzling warm golden blinding mirror reflections 

Sparkling brightly rainbows 
floating on a breathless air

Gasping frozen inside thoughts
you are grasping at the heartstrings 

Eclipse of love splendid delight 
a porthole of Heaven has opened up

One look in your eyes seventh wonder a golden stairway
on wings spirit of beauty an eagle over mountains call

Flying with your soul crystal clear blue horizon
before the eyes arising flowers you beautifully 

Eclipsing the heart beautiful 
tonight I pray with one in a thousand angels dream

Premium Member Caught Within Eclipsed Facts

Passionless lies turns to unmoved bigots thoughts 
with emotionless half arsed hearts consumed by hate 
splitting hairs we all know fact from fiction 

Try to claim killing the unborn is care giving 
then this retro bias claims a man has no right to speak
equality speaks from the soul without division 

Where each son has a mother who protects who
when lines are drawn in the sand this is not about gender 
This is not about women having the right to kill 
                                                
Or even twisted sinners of men who live on cloud coo coo 
Time waits on no man or woman to love and cherish each living heartbeat
we are brothers and sisters of the one God 

His words have impact in those whom truly believe


Eclipsed Ring

Put me on your finger, like the faded ring
Eclipsed, amidst the sun, against your skin
Casting dark cages, incarcerating the moonlight
Of your burning desires, and the maddened grin
Of evil, exposing nefarious doubts veiled from sight;
Put me on your finger, for I am; the light
You've always desired, but failed to dance in..

Premium Member Caught Inside Eclipsed

Once upon a moonbeam you entered precious gold 
like one shooting star the fireworks became the vision 
this picture is framed beyond even words to draw 
It was there a world burned brightest dazzling 
became blinded by reflections flooding back 
generating electric in the soul awakening possessed
Filling the four chambers with warm radiant light 
sparks began to generate deeply powered inside currents 
giving birth to the most radiant pearl of angelic beauty 
Pure as a diamond sparkling within the brightness 
rainbows coloured the radiance that shone through the sparkle 
as wings flutter oceans began to turn the salt through a stream 
Then the river flowed down streaming murmuring forever 
where oceans drank from a salted spiced memory love 
this treasure embraced the broken shell internally healed 
Everywhere I close my eyes thinking of you appearing 
we were destined to meet before the closing of the age 
everyday you awakened the prayers that beg to heaven

Premium Member Eclipsed By Your Light

Whispering echoes magic dust 
soul's mate breathless wonder aired 
peace within an eternal halo promise sings

Until time itself ends inside forever loved 
circling trust colours salt of the sands 
running out pure golden time captured

Holding precious memories sparked together 
warmly lighting gems behind a veil 
pink blushing fire spells cast enchanting

One shooting star that always welds kisses 
unto your diamond treasured heart's lip's 
dining under the candlelight of night


unrhymed tercets

Your Face Eclipsed

Bad news eclipses sun
Like the moon orbits your face
As we grow together, rooted
This garden displays variety, its fruits
So don’t overrun simply because you can
Robbing future diversity defrauds us all
And you don’t have to love me – no
Just accept mine as encompassing
To protect from blinding madness

Premium Member eclipsed-dodo

when the sunlight disappeared,
all around, the black of night
tinged my heart and every mood.
then ~ I saw your smile...

Eclipsed

Ample words from bloated chests, 
won't rest until the messages crest.  

Moving through phases of covered stresses, 
that are just shadowed mirrors from larger troubled messes.  

Covert grievances, rise with the tide; during their full revealing. 
And shine light through the crevices, that have not yet completed their healing.

Premium Member Eclipsed

every now and then

when heart ache laid, I fall apart,

shattered in dark







... CayCay / Based on Bonnie Tyler's "Total Eclipse of the Heart"
September 7, 2019

Premium Member Eclipsed

A slow death marinated.
In half-prayer and long goodbyes.
So much suffering on this cobblestone of lies.

To think it all began with a silky lullaby.
The Faries and unicorns soon drift from our lives.
Replaced by tarry intentions.
Oozing from cinderblock faces.
Bridges of hope undercut by trolls.
Silky dreams slip into eclipse.
The sun's last breath kisses the necrosed lips of our nothingness.

The Eclipsed Sun

Could you also in shame bow
Like smothered cocoyam leaves
In all your elegance of prided shame?

You hid behind amber's of burning coal
Lording your weakness on cowards of sky
You crown yourself with sparkling rays
A kings regalia over your slumped orphaned shoulders

With a tortoise craftiness you awoke
As others fell fast asleep to occupy
The seat of kings as a king over kings
But your elegance was veiled in blackness
Your wickedness covered with darkness
As you resign in shame of your cunning at last
Sorry comrade, the rich also cry.

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