Eclipsed

Sparse lashes span aged lids,
framing an eye that catches light
like the clearest glass.
The softest liquid sheen - of tears?
But the eye stares blankly
without expression. 
No crinkle of joy, no distention of fear,
yet the pupil dilates, eclipsing the iris. 
Snuffing out the moon.
And there, the faintest reflection...
watching, waiting.  
He stares down Death itself
with no sign of fear.

*Inspired by Escher's "Eye"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Arowolo Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 4:06 PM
Well written..Splendid!Congrats on your superb win ,Heather....
Dietrich Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 2:40 PM
wow, when did you post THIS one, Heather? I had never seen it, And it's so well crafted! Also I see that you won a contest with it recently. BIG congrats, sweetie.
Hunter Avatar
March 25, 2013 at 10:19 AM
Congrats, Heather! I wrote about the eye too, but yours is much better...can I be jealous?..haha
A   Avatar
March 23, 2013 at 12:29 PM
HEATHER, congratulations with your awesome and wonderful poem. Always~ Linda
Guzzi Avatar
March 22, 2013 at 7:00 PM
Simply true! great entry Heather. Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Ferry Avatar
March 11, 2013 at 8:01 PM
Escher... an illusion in an illusion in an illusion Like your work Rick
Manassian Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 8:54 AM
Heather...another great write! You are so good with words! :) Good luck! The pupil eclipsing the iris...wow!
Sanders Avatar
March 8, 2013 at 6:40 AM
Nicely done poet. Excellent!!!! Hey you should check out a young poet name Margherita Russo
Jones Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 6:10 PM
Wonderful Heather..good luck...
Williams Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 12:43 PM
Heather I just love this and Escher, very well done...David
Hunter Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 11:03 AM
Oh yeah, this is a great one for the contest....Im not sure what to make of it...so I've not written one yet.
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