Eclipsed

Reality seems obscured
By what we think
We need to do
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Denholm-Young Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 6:55 AM
I like it, a tight circle.
Meade Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 6:10 AM
Words without action dulls us -- your haiku calls us to act -- now!! great poem
Cruz Avatar
November 13, 2014 at 4:49 AM
nice Uwe. you did a great job
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