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eclipsed-dodo

when the sunlight disappeared,
all around, the black of night
tinged my heart and every mood.
then ~ I saw your smile...

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Sam Kauffman

June 2, 2024 at 3:49 PM

Congrats and high fives Craig for this romantic poem "tinged" with the joy of love shining like sunshine through bleak darkness. So much said in these few lines. So glad to see you posting and on the winners list! Blessings to you!

Sara Kendrick

May 31, 2024 at 10:58 AM

Nice to see the winners' list with your name on it and also, see what everyone else wrote for the contest. Congratulations. Way to go. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 30, 2024 at 1:38 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the contest ... yep, gave a smile :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

May 28, 2024 at 8:59 PM

The heaviness of the 1st three lines flipped…with a smile! Congrats, Craig!

Anisha Dutta

April 24, 2024 at 9:04 AM

Very Nice. I also smile.

Andrea Dietrich

April 23, 2024 at 1:03 PM

Lovely dodoitsu, Craig. Glad you liked my Strangler's Wood.

Ink Empress

April 12, 2024 at 2:33 AM

This is heart warming, so beautifully flowing and evocative dodoitsu dear craig, so well delivered! I especially loved the last two lines, “ tinged my heart “ and “ i saw your smile” so soulfully moving! Pleasure always reading your poems. Best wishes

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