Eclipsed

every now and then

when heart ache laid, I fall apart,

shattered in dark







... CayCay / Based on Bonnie Tyler's "Total Eclipse of the Heart"
September 7, 2019

angstbetrayalbreak upconflictsenryu

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Paige Hind

May 2, 2025 at 6:38 PM

Deep, a deep image,

Funom Makama

September 9, 2019 at 10:43 AM

Your lines expectedly weigh in tonnes and your consistency has made you a master of masters in this act. This is beyond compliments. Good work mate. An absolute beauty.

Jennifer Proxenos

September 8, 2019 at 12:51 PM

We all fall apart at times my dear dear friend and our heart thinks the ache will never go, everythings seems dark and unbearable, but being who you are, a strong, capable and loving human being, you will always get up and greet a new day with gusto! An amazing few words. Hugs, Jenny.