Totaly Eclipsed

Moon on fire kissing souls unite 
sparks in destiny your spirit flying towards the sun 

Honey dew rises in light of a promise 
dazzling warm golden blinding mirror reflections 

Sparkling brightly rainbows 
floating on a breathless air

Gasping frozen inside thoughts
you are grasping at the heartstrings 

Eclipse of love splendid delight 
a porthole of Heaven has opened up

One look in your eyes seventh wonder a golden stairway
on wings spirit of beauty an eagle over mountains call

Flying with your soul crystal clear blue horizon
before the eyes arising flowers you beautifully 

Eclipsing the heart beautiful 
tonight I pray with one in a thousand angels dream
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Dietrich Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 10:49 PM
THIs is a most heavenly Eclipse of LOVE! Beautiful writing!
Callus Avatar
August 27, 2015 at 11:00 AM
Delightful romantic beauty, Liam! An apt ending, too, for an eclipse of love. Hope you are keeping well! All the best. // paul
Petersen Potter Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 4:20 PM
Hi Liam!A very beautiful romantic enchanting love poem penned by you my dearest friend Liam.Another sparkling diamond from your very beautiful golden pen.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written!A very dreamy, sweet captivating love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.Awesome!I truly enjoy it.A true golden gem!Your pen is mighty golden!A 7 +++!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful romantic,gentle and sweet.Keep your Faith!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 1:56 PM
- Beautifully, dear Liam !!! - The angels came to the right place !!! - Hugs and love // Anne-Lise :)
Manassian Avatar
August 21, 2015 at 12:05 PM
Beautiful and romantic, dear Liam. As always...the love shines. hugs
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