Eclipsed By Your Light

Whispering echoes magic dust 
soul's mate breathless wonder aired 
peace within an eternal halo promise sings

Until time itself ends inside forever loved 
circling trust colours salt of the sands 
running out pure golden time captured

Holding precious memories sparked together 
warmly lighting gems behind a veil 
pink blushing fire spells cast enchanting

One shooting star that always welds kisses 
unto your diamond treasured heart's lip's 
dining under the candlelight of night


unrhymed tercets
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Downing  Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 5:55 PM
Liam, This is one my favorite by you! Such a romantic dreamy poem a lady would love to read nightly ;)
Sathasivam Avatar
October 27, 2016 at 6:58 AM
Excellent. Great imagery write. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 6:01 PM
Absolutely stunning Liam and that final line just blew me away its amazing imagery:-) Hugs Jan xx 7
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 5:56 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely day!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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