Best Departing Poems


Departing Laos

The monks gave me a bag of Thai oranges
Before I left for the States.

Next time I come, I’ll have learned more Lao,
I promise.

      They promise there will be more to show the next time.

Sitting outside the Khop Jai Deu restaurant
Waiting for my bus to come

Elvis is crooning “Return to Sender”
       Because there’s no such number,
       And no such home.

I took a photo of the fountain
Next to the Scandinavian Bakery,
Tuk-tuk drivers loitering nearby.

Handing them some fruit,
They ask, “How long are you staying in Laos?”

   And I reply,
   “This is my last day.”

The sun looks like it could be peeled wide open
While I take a bite of a giant orange,

Trying to wring out a last memory from this light, 
Wondering when the King’s song is ever going to end

   The scent of citrus on my hand
   Sinks deeply past my bones,
   Trying to harden into an anchor

   The shape of a kind heart.

Premium Member Departing Spring

As spring departs
In the wind and rain
Termites swarm
© Uwe Stroh  Create an image from this poem.

A Departing Soldier

I know you.
Candles lit, incense fuming,
You like it when I bite your neck, just hard enough.
Blankets thrown about the room
So recklessly, they refold themselves.

And we roll down a hill together,
Kissing the leaves, tickling with our eyes,
Laughing with our hearts.
"Once you get on that plane, you're not coming back, are you?"
"No," I say. Because only
Nothing
Lasts forever.
And it spills through the cracks in your hands
The moment you grasp it.
Like water from a stone.
She bites my neck
Drawing lines of ecstasy down my back with her fingernails
Spilling into me, fighting my words.
"I leave when the sun sets."


Departing

I have thought of this very hard 
For I have played every card 
The sunset is coming fast 
Leaving behind all my past

My life with you can not be
I will not pay this fee
Like the worm that kills the apple
The HIV of my chapel

When it rains I am clean
No more of the obscene
And when the sun shines though 
I have something else to pursue

Departing 2020

"Threat" is the word that made mothers worry about their child.
Disposable face masks have been our weapon to combat.
The whole quarantine thing tolerates people to be wild.
I got crazy for months at home; I was never like that.

It took several sips of coffee for Dad to realize.
That this year has crippled his pocket yet he stays survive.
Tea parties and schooling are now digitized.
It shifted routines and lifestyles; Thank God I’m alive!

Isolation was the healing to tie up the families’ bond.
It is the greatest magic that the virus has ever done.
We will depart this year together and correspond;
Be vaccinated by faith and hope; we will rise like a sun.

2020 has been the news flash of ups and downs.
We should start to adapt to change and embrace the "new normal".
Let us paint fireworks in the skies with no frowns. 
I hope we will live in 2021 like there is nothing but normal.

Departing Soul

The sweet, sweet smell of a departing soul.

Your face blurring with my tears,

as your warm hand grows cold.


The sound of children weeping breaks the heart,

with tears flowing down their cheeks,

salty kisses to part.



For the "Senses"  contest.


Departing Storm

Departing storm you've wreaked your wrath

As such I've seldom seen

The power of your winds and rain 

Ripped through county Racine

With straight line winds, tornado too

And lightning bright as day

The savage fury of your approach

Cause trees to bend and sway

And at the peaking of your pass

My kitty was not found

For under bed he hid away

'Til your ferocity calmed down

And as I see you slip away 

into the dark of night

I breathe a sigh of great relief

But know you're not contrite

Goodbye to you, departing storm

To your thunder and lightning complicity

I'd watch the radar to see you leave

But you left me without electricity

Poem To a Departing Friend

the times that were together shared
	the times for each the other cared

a moment there a minute here
	immortal days of boundless cheer

golden hours of trading dreams
	joyful eyes with happy gleams

a trusting and attentive ear
	for griefs alone too hard bear

the welcome hand the open door
	the knowing of what friends are for

clear and bright and ever warm
	of endlessly delightful form

a friendship of the best of friends
	perhaps to last until time ends

a friendship made of inlaid gold
	in magic draughts of silver rolled

endless hours spent  together
	in sultry sunny Summer weather

we talked we sang we laughed and read
	and on occasion danced instead

then the Fall 'neath leaves of gold
	beside those trees uniquely old

accompanied by trilling birds
	we shared a thought and lacked for words

but winter saw us bid farewell
	the tree limbs bare a gray pastel

surrounding all on every side
	a snowy blanket deep and wide

though friendship never ceased to burn:
	you gave a promise to return

Spring brought  branches tipped with green
	furry creatures little seen

and roused the sun from Winter's rest
	and Spring brought you and that was best

another season now has fled
	left Summer snugly tucked in bed

as now we have to part once more
	('tis no simpler than before)

we've grown together you and me
	but partings sometimes have to be

so  leaving    going      gone away
	Fate at last has had its say

o when are we to meet again
	how bleak and dry the time 'til then!
© John Mudge  Create an image from this poem.

Departing Arthurians

And to the past they rode
The Shining Host: lent death
or immortality 
by golden sands of time.

Call not them back
Lest to discover that
They who last held 
Rome's bright light
Were marauders
Filled with spite

Nor recall
Their lovers fair
And find them sluts
Or, robbed of time's gifts, 
Now only wizened mutts

Let them go.

But catch the insubstantial tales,
Akin to Kingly gossamer threads.
Only dusty spider's webs 
By noon's blinding light
but the silk of dreams' delight
In evening's gentle dales.


** I know that this is too short to be a lay, but I don't really have a time to write a new poem (especially something as long as a lay), and I don't want to break my pattern and re-use a style.  When it comes time for me to spend a week on each of the types of poetry I am writing this month, I will write real lays, I promise.  Also, the title is subject to substantial change**

Premium Member Departing Sun

Honed from old habits, you leave us once again

Leaving again, the way of lovers departing...

Oh, departing sun, you linger in the dusk

In dusky mauve, so reluctant to say goodbye

Goodbye you speak in many tongues 

Forked tongues of light, you spread your words in gold

And with a golden hand, and fingers spread

You spread your promise, vast against the sky

Where sky, that mingles  with the crimson earth

Unite the earth and thee to blend

You blend, and lend your colors rich....

Rich in soft pastels, ...until,....until you come again

___________________________________________________

Inspired by the Contest: "Wreath on the Flavor of Dusk"
Sponsored by Nette Onclaud
By Carrie Richards  8/12/12

Departing

Departing:

You said you loved me.
I fell for you lie.
I truly thought I loved you.
You made it a joke.
I want it real for me.
I need it true
why did you lie to me,
when life was so cruel?
You need to know
I don't need you
thinking I was not everything I needed
wishing I had that
wanting to be what not
I now understand, I don't need you.
Copyright ©2008 Marissa Stoops

Departing Friends

Sometimes in your life,
a point you reach,
there are those who matter,
and those that don't recipricate,
then sorrow begins to alate!

Fore when they choose,
to be less benevolent,
a vacuum will permeate,
fore there will always be,
some other yearning to percolate.

Worry less about the past,
undoubtedly there was lucidity,
why they reveled around in treason,
early on in your crisis season,
they're absent for that reason!

Premium Member Departing Words

You have nothing to forgive, you have nothing to forget.
You have nothing to re live, you have nothing to regret.
You have nothing to be afraid of, you have nothing but my respect.
You have nothing ever again to ever worry about, because you are dead.

On Death

Departures!
We are all departing,
Beings of departure belonging to no one
And we lack all the knowledge of it
From the first day we came,
Our aim has been to move on,
To reach our goals. 
Enough!
You have turned me into a prey!
I noticed lately, how wantonly
You look at me from your garden,
Stalking, stealthily trailing my back
And sometimes hovering over my head.
Are you really courting me?
I hope you know how uneasy, how hard
It is for one to cross-carpet?
It's very hard especially when
On the other side, little is known
Except some speculations of a green pasture.
The stage is the world where we perform;
It has the cry, we have the pain and
The triumph we relish makes it more daring
To stay put, to battle, to lose, to win.
There's bound to be little reluctance here
And there, like trying to make up one's
Mind on buying a sunshade instead of a cap.
It's even harder to make up ones mind
Especially when nothing tangible would change
Only a regress to that beginning
When the flesh is fresh and new.

Departure! That's our agony
Will it ever end?
The regression, the continuing from scratch,
The opening of new pages and chapters, 
Is that what we are made for?
That is, becoming invisible at a point
Or merely disappearing into a dark night.

Living is the beginning of dying
And dying, the beginning of living.
But I'd be wild awake that day
When life and death would seal the deal
And life hands over change of ownership
Certificate of me. I'm reminded of,
If you know the feeling, how sad
It is to be cast out, sold in the midst of life,
As if unwanted, like a broken toy,
An object, once cherished and wanted!
It's sad to be forgotten, committed to memory.
It's sad indeed! But that day,
I'd simply raise my legs
One after the other, reluctantly and
Cross over to the other side, smiling.

Date written: 05/15/2018
Contest name: "A Poem about Death" Poetry contest
Sponsor: Broken Wings
Theme: In the Midst of Life

Premium Member Now Departing, Soon Arriving

Winter's arrival signals my departure
  hidden by soft snow in the ground  
When Spring returns, I emerge from hard mud
  on sidewalks and in plush flowerbeds

I'd love to warm myself, to lay in the sun
  but I'm on the look-out twenty-four/seven
for a worm's sworn enemy, the dreaded bird
  Discretion, please: Shh! ~ Don't breathe a word

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