Best Commando Poems


Premium Member The Knickerless Vicar - Contains Innuendo :- Collaboration With Nina Parmenter

For a man of the cloth, our dear vicar
is not very partial to clothes
He is almost allergic to trousers
and y-fronts get right up his nose.

Ev’ry Sunday as he climbs in the pulpit
(where the choir boys are sitting below)
His meat and two veg are seen swinging
And it’s proof that he is commando

The ladies who bake and do flowers
don’t know if to scream or to peek
but Olga the Organist’s smiling
and she’s practising eight days a week!

At this year’s summer fete it was breezy
and the wind, I’m afraid, took its toll
His cassock blew up to his waistline
as he served up the last sausage roll

I've heard when he goes on vacation
He suns himself on a nudist beach
and his wife applies his sun lotion
to stop his tush looking like a ripe peach

03/14/20
Categories: commando, clothes,
Form: Rhyme

Dancing For Fun

I'm doing a little highland dancing 
and I've gone commando under my kilt
I lay down my claymore
Then dance around the hilt .
but I slipped and did the splits
Now I'm only slightly built .

Dah, Dah,  Twiddly , Dah
Twiddly Twiddly Dee
Let go of your sporran 
and come and dance with me . 

You have to go commando 
and expose your hairy knee's 
Belts off Troosers down 
Let your bits dangle in the breeze 
Ignore the flashing blue lights 
Tell the police men to sod off
I'll come and visit you in prison
The next time I have another day off.

Dah , Dah , Twiddly , Dah
Twiddly , Twiddly , Dee
Let go of your sporran
and come and dance with me.
Categories: commando, funny,
Form: Verse

Demeter

The moment I walked in on this scorching room,

I saw innocent faces of sorrowful bloom.

You stared at me when I shook everything off,

Holla don’t worry because I can’t be so off.

 

 

 

 

We spent 5 months of knowing each other,

I’m happy enough with the words that you utter.

You may sometimes don’t get what I want you to do.

Pretty good things are all I want just for you.

 

 

 

 

I often don’t understand how you always feel,

Seeing your good deeds is contentment and real.

I love that childish mind in your wealthy young age.

A movement of prissiness is such funny beige.

 

 

 

 

When you wrote sorry in a white crumpled board,

This heart was lacerated by your one holy sword.

You may have not noticed these sacrifices that I’ve done,

One day of change is your realization in down.

 

 

 

 

I’m your commando in a most fashionable look,

You’re my soldiers who are fearfully all always hooked.

I’m looking forward in your ramp of achievement,

Seeing that white gown in you is so much fulfillment.
Categories: commando, children, graduation, high school,
Form: Rhyme

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry


First Year With Kaylee

From sleeping through the whole night,
To cutting your first tooth to bite,

From watching you roll over,
To hearing your first word 'MUMMA',

From watching you crawl commando,
To seeing your first steps solo,

Your Nan has spent time with you nearly everyday,
And to be honest would have it no other way,

I've rocked you to sleep time after time,
Had you when you're sick giving your Mum piece of mind,

Cuddled you when you've been sad,
And told you 'No' when you've been bad,

Laughed with you when we've been playing,
Praised you when you're not misbehaving,

Just in one year you've developed at such speed,
First year milestones you've passed indeed,

Your presence is infectious you can't ignore,
Obviously an old soul you've been here before,

I think you've been sent to teach all of us,
Cause you're the perfect example of unconditional love.

07/01/2016
Categories: commando, baby, grandchild, granddaughter, growing
Form: Couplet

Fab Virgil

The bikies are in town today
 Least they're trying to make us think so
 I know different
 Thunderbirds, they really are
 FAB Virgil
 I heard someone say

 Lady Penelope sits astride a  97 Bonneville
 I'd know that hairstyle anywhere
 
Thunderbird 1 cloaked as a Norton Commando
 Thunderbirds 3 and 4
 Triumphs the both of them
 
International rescue comes to town
 Something big is going down
 Must be

 I spied Thunderbird 2
 Parked outside the TAB
 Stopped and asked Virgil
 For an autograph
 Told him I liked his Hells Angels costume
 And asked if he and Lady P
 Were off to a costume party
 
Then he showed me
 The special markings on his arms
 Proof he was from International Rescue
 And suggested I leave quickly
 Clearly something big going down
 International Rescue come to town
Categories: commando, humorous,
Form: Free verse

Destination: New Convenant

"Destination: New Covenant" 

When we arrived
at our destination,
the place they called
"New Covenant",
we were assigned 
fresh armour.

we thought the war 
left long and far behind us;

of course, 

our ranks had changed,
but our allegiance 
for saving contracts
in the between worlds place
was much to our disbelief,
swiftly locked in again.

we were, one must admit
with good humour -
hell-bent, resigned. 
Our redeployment
steadfast, some considered
insane, we had no time 
to complain.

we, were told to 'man-up'
this was our mission -
so we, the perceived 
fallen, unsubtle yet,
viably courageous,
remained 
stoically aligned.  

"Karma is a b**ch",
the untainted remaining 
flaunting their immunity
from return, watching
in their safe sectors 
playing their harps, 
all chimed. 

We saluted, 
smiled back at them,
and sardonically
flipped the birds -
we weren't 'tweeting'.
switched on, we were,
in our protection.

Light suits 
full commando wings
on display, 
we boarded the 
supersonic getaway
and at the helm, 

The Firm's leader, 
the No. 1 Honcho,
the Big Cheese,
the Chief-in-Command 
delivers us from...
well, you know the story - 

His rank 
is very well deserved
earned by blood, 
sweat and tears. 
Worthy of respect -
over us, he has many years, 
seniority, experience.

His instructions
are ultra clear, 
some might say,
religious. He's our,
lead stag, we follow, he steers.
He declares, commanding, 
loud and sincere,

"Buckle up Legion.
The last battle.
Victory to all.
God speed.
Burning entry 
by clouds.
Bury your fear."


(LadyLabyrinth / 2022)
Categories: commando, freedom, future, muse,
Form: Narrative


Two Preying Birds

I'm like a SEAL team commando
After several cups of espresso
I like to dive bomb
With great aplomb
A gyrfalcon? I think so

To poach me is illegal
My name evokes the regal
I reach astonishing speed
When I'm ready to feed
You can call me a golden eagle
Categories: commando, animal, bird, hyperbole, imagery,
Form: Limerick

Demeter

The moment I walked in on this scorching room,

I saw innocent faces of sorrowful bloom.

You stared at me when I shook everything off,

Holla don’t worry because I can’t be so off.

 

 

 

 

We spent 5 months of knowing each other,

I’m happy enough with the words that you utter.

You may sometimes don’t get what I want you to do.

Pretty good things are all I want just for you.

 

 

 

 

I often don’t understand how you always feel,

Seeing your good deeds is contentment and real.

I love that childish mind in your wealthy young age.

A movement of prissiness is such funny beige.

 

 

 

 

When you wrote sorry in a white crumpled board,

This heart was lacerated by your one holy sword.

You may have not noticed these sacrifices that I’ve done,

One day of change is your realization in down.

 

 

 

 

I’m your commando in a most fashionable look,

You’re my soldiers who are fearfully all always hooked.

I’m looking forward in your ramp of achievement,

Seeing that white gown in you is so much fulfilment.
Categories: commando, education, graduation, hero, high
Form:

The Mourning After the Night Before

“Knock, knock” “Who’s there?”  I haven’t a clue
What day is it? Who’s at my door?
“Here is some breakfast I made just for you”
Says some stranger who slept on my floor
The sight of the eggs and the bacon and tea
Turns my stomach inside upside down
Migraine’s the price that I’ve paid for the glee
Of a banging night out on the town
“‘Ere, it’s New Year, do you fancy a beer?”
“No thanks, mate, I’m feeling quite rough”
I may have blacked out after midnight I fear
But now I’m…remembering…Stuff
Slowly but surely it’s coming to mind
As glimpses emerge from the fog
Of a twist and a twerk and a bump and a grind
And my new Christmas phone down the bog
I thought I was hot but in retrospect not
In the morning light nowt could be plainer
And that I remember I like not a jot
My naked and drunk Macarena
Oh me and my mates, we do get in a state
And last year we gave it some welly
But if anyone had not enough on their plate
We’d do onesies and pizza and telly
My mates are my life, we’re a pretty tight bunch
They’re alright, mate, they’re really all right
But last night I must have been well out to lunch
For I reckon I started a fight…
It was something to do with a girl I once knew
And a joke that she did stuff for money
And a fine upper cut in the queue for the loo
Well, I thought the punch line was funny
Oh, what’s in my pockets, this isn’t my coat
As I’m clearly not Super or Dry
And what are the words that are writ on this note
‘Bell me, baby, you’re totally fly’
And I’m going commando, hilarious bants
Will be had in regards to my loss
Much mirth to be had from the sight of my pants
On the top of the Market Cross
It’s not looking good, and tucked in to my hood
Are two gherkins all wrapped in a bra
Half a kebab and a squashed Christmas pud
And a wing mirror nicked from a car
I think I’m experiencing chemical guilt
And at some point I’ll have to atone
But right now I’m going to hide under my quilt
Crying blubbery tears for my phone

by Gail
Categories: commando, drink, friendship, fun, humor,
Form: Rhyme

My Other Half

Like a mission you came tactically as if you're a hero,
You neutralized my heart intently without hesitation,
Just like a specialized cop you impressed me though,
And like a naive warrior I was fell with your actuation.

I never dare mesmerize you to lead the trail towards me,
Nor entice you just to show I've got a new buddy of my heart,
Nevertheless, I never gambit you to love me by  plea,
In fact, you just forcibly enter into my den so smart.

Knowing you're my destiny, I trusted you wholeheartedly,
Believing every words you disclosed, you bewitched me so badly,
But every pieces of your hidden agenda investigated vigorously,
Bingo! I discerned the truth beyond reasonable doubt discreetly.

You are as rogue as insurgent like we used to eliminate,
Such a treacherous kind and sham alibis to totally hate,
You turned my  life into a war zone, I don't care about my fate,
There's no other way but to quit before it's too late.

Unknowingly, God is such an enigmatic author to my story,
Since I am a damsel in distress, He sends me a knight in shinin' armour,
From nowhere a tough yet compassionate man crossed the said border,
Piece by piece  my torn heart cautiously fixed by that army.

No amount of depths can deter if your intention is pure,
Or either a disaster can intimidate you if your love is true,
Cultures might be a big differences, it's not an obstruction for sure,
Because true love conquers all and torment is about to cure.

Combating the misery I've felt before is quite an inferno,
Yet an intruder sneak the terrain through my being like an ammo,
Invading my camp and save my bloody heart as such a Commando,
And as I open my eyes I realized you're my other half as I know.
Categories: commando, romance,
Form: ABC

Action Game

A grotesque gamer gobbles gummies grunting gleefully at his game. 
Sounds of slaughter spewing from the surround sound speakers.
The cunning commando combats a clearing 'cross countless cretins.
Validating his victory only after violently vanquishing the virtual villains.
Categories: commando, adventure, computer-internet, death, fantasy,
Form: Alliteration

Premium Member Fernando Dando

There once was a man from Orlando
Who went by the name Fernando Dando
Ran out of laundry soap
What to do, what a dope
Decided to go it commando



Submitted on August 19, 2018 for contest CELEBRITY LIMERICK sponsored by TANIA KITCHIN  -  RANKED 10TH
Categories: commando, celebrity, clothes, fun, imagination,
Form: Limerick

Premium Member Don'T You Wish

The man, the woman, the ship, and the sea.
Don’t you wish we were having camoille tea?

The bachelor, the maid, the valentines day girl,
Don’t you wish we could swish in countrified swirl?

The paint, the brush, the palette and the knife,
Don’t you wish that you were colorful like fife?

The Forests, mountains,oceans, meadows,and prairies,
Don’t you wish we had some milk in our dairies?

The toddler, the three, the five and or six,
Don’ t you wish that we could shuffle board mix?

The Bear, the Belly, and the BumbleBee.
Don’t you wish, you were commando, like me?

The paper, the pencil, the syllables, and such.
Don’t you wish you always had the magic touch?

When acting angry, behavior challenged, enraged, threatening, buly-fied, and mad.
Don’t you wish our parents and teachers would just realize we’re acting out our sad?
Categories: commando, 2nd grade, 3rd grade,
Form: Rhyme

Premium Member Hero's Return In Armada Mass

June 6th 1944
An Armada masses at Europe's door
Five sector landings, 160,000 troops
On the following beaches, our hero's would swoop
Utah, Omaha, Juno, Sword and Gold
Allow me to write, as my story unfolds
 
We, 50th Northumbrian Infantry
To repatriate Europe's lost countries
The Devonshire, Hampshire regiments but two
The Allied might in this incredible feud
 
Beach landing storm, between Le Hamel - Ver sur Mer
 
Sectors Item, Jig and King
Is where the 79th Armoured would sing
 
Beachhead established, Mulberry harbour plan
Reaching Bayeux, cut the road to Caen
East we will go, meet with the Canadian troops
Juno Beach they landed in their infantry groups
 
King sector assault, casualties high
Our tanks now landed, their shells fly
Enemy positions pounded
Men of both die
 
Jig sector assault, Le Hamel fell
Village by village, only time will tell
Creully and Crepon reached and taken
Forsaken
 
Item sector, commando strong
Harbour to take, enemy thrawn
Important target, supplies to land
Eventual demise of this German stand
 
From this landing, our masses advanced
Through deadened lands, i never glanced
To absorb the sights that i witnessed there
To look ahead, no stop no stare
 
As i sit at home and close my eyes
Not knowing whether to despise
Being in the middle of carnage hell
Our Hero's fell, but I'm here to tell
 
 
   " Dedicated to Stanley Elton Hollis - the one and only recipient 
of the Victoria Cross on D-Day June 6th 1944, but they are all hero's "


              http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/war-2.php
Categories: commando, angst, death, family, history,
Form: Rhyme

Queen of the Motorhome Park

V1

Connie was a looker, forty years ago.
Connie's still a looker, she looks like cookie dough.
You'll often find sweet Connie, talking to a mirror
Sayin, "Mirror mirror on the wall, please shrink my saggy rear!"

Chorus:  

Connie, Connie camp queen,
Queen of the motor home park.

V2

Earl was a looker, forty years ago.
Earl's still a looker, though you wouldn't know,
By looking at old Earl cause you're blinded by his nose
and just like Rudolph Reindeer's, you'd even say it glows.

Repeat Chorus

V3

Well Connie married Earl, back in sixty-six,
some would say the both of them had passed up better picks,
but to this very day, they're very much in love,
they stick together firmly, like fingers on a glove.

Repeat Chorus

V4

Earl drives the motorhome, Connie rides along,
With her with dog menagerie, what a throbbing throng,
of Pekinese and Poodles, a Pit Bull and a Pom,
Now tell me this, Amigos, what could possibly go wrong?

Repeat Chorus

V5

When campin' at the RV park, Connie soon takes charge,
of anything and anyone, ain't bigger than a barge.
No one's crossed ol' Connie up and lived to tell it yet.
I wouldn't cross ol' Connie on a million dollar bet!

Repeat Chorus

V6 
        
Earl likes to disappear, he heads off to the bar,
But Connie keeps a tight leash, he don't get very far.
Keepin' Earl's sanity requires many beers.
I think it's a miracle, he's made it all these years!

Repeat Chorus

V7

Connie went commando one day, went back to her roots,
wearin' nuttin' 'neath her miniskirt, above her GoGo boots.
Someone hollered: "Go find Earl, I think he oughta know,
his favorite girl Connie is puttin' on a show!"

Repeat Chorus

V8

Well listen little doggies, you never more will roam.
'Cause Connie and old Earl are in an old folk's home,
but Earl is just as happy as if he had good sense,
when he wants to drink a beer, he climbs the wire fence.

Repeat Chorus
Categories: commando, age, humor, song,
Form: Lyric
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