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Two Preying Birds

I'm like a SEAL team commando After several cups of espresso I like to dive bomb With great aplomb A gyrfalcon? I think so To poach me is illegal My name evokes the regal I reach astonishing speed When I'm ready to feed You can call me a golden eagle

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Indiana Shaw

Date: 12/10/2018 9:16:00 AM

An extra sausage on the plate to quell that hunger and a cup of de-caffeinated coffee next time I think, nice work, I enjoyed this one . . . ; )

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2018 10:16:00 AM

I have read your short work and wanted to say congrats on your win ..Way to go.. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/13/2018 3:52:00 PM

Nice ones!! Congrats to you.

Trey Hamner
Date: 9/13/2018 4:15:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 9/13/2018 12:18:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Trey.

Trey Hamner
Date: 9/13/2018 4:15:00 PM

Thanks, Line.

Charles Messina

Date: 9/12/2018 11:30:00 AM

Great job Golden Eagle (lol) They are amazing animals. Both the gray falcon and the eagle. Well done Trey. Congratulations on your win and thanks for entering my contest...Charlie

Trey Hamner
Date: 9/12/2018 1:32:00 PM

Thanks Charlie, it was a lot of fun. Cool subject matter.