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My Other Half

Like a mission you came tactically as if you're a hero, You neutralized my heart intently without hesitation, Just like a specialized cop you impressed me though, And like a naive warrior I was fell with your actuation. I never dare mesmerize you to lead the trail towards me, Nor entice you just to show I've got a new buddy of my heart, Nevertheless, I never gambit you to love me by plea, In fact, you just forcibly enter into my den so smart. Knowing you're my destiny, I trusted you wholeheartedly, Believing every words you disclosed, you bewitched me so badly, But every pieces of your hidden agenda investigated vigorously, Bingo! I discerned the truth beyond reasonable doubt discreetly. You are as rogue as insurgent like we used to eliminate, Such a treacherous kind and sham alibis to totally hate, You turned my life into a war zone, I don't care about my fate, There's no other way but to quit before it's too late. Unknowingly, God is such an enigmatic author to my story, Since I am a damsel in distress, He sends me a knight in shinin' armour, From nowhere a tough yet compassionate man crossed the said border, Piece by piece my torn heart cautiously fixed by that army. No amount of depths can deter if your intention is pure, Or either a disaster can intimidate you if your love is true, Cultures might be a big differences, it's not an obstruction for sure, Because true love conquers all and torment is about to cure. Combating the misery I've felt before is quite an inferno, Yet an intruder sneak the terrain through my being like an ammo, Invading my camp and save my bloody heart as such a Commando, And as I open my eyes I realized you're my other half as I know.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/16/2016 6:52:00 AM
Hi, Juliet, thanks for the reply, anyone can write a poetry. But, to be a poet you must read, think, write and feel like one. This poem is a good example of flow and rhyme. In which is good for a new poet... Hugs...Linda
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Juliet Nicol
Date: 3/16/2016 10:05:00 AM
Hope I'll be like you someday Linda.
Date: 3/16/2016 2:25:00 AM
War and Pieces-Great write;look forward to more
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Date: 3/16/2016 6:40:00 AM
Thank you so much SKAT. I so love writing poems. I wish to become a poet someday. My poems are more on about love. Is't ok to post a poem for my SAF 44 brothers?
Date: 3/15/2016 11:50:00 PM
Hi Juliet, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 3/15/2016 10:03:00 PM
Hello Juliet, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 3/16/2016 6:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda. In fact, I want to become a poet but I don't know how to start with. I will post more of my poems and please check if I'm qualified though. Thank you.

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