Unweighted Poems | Examples


What a Woman Wants

“All a man really wants, is a girl who looks good in a bikini.”—Jack Freestone

All a “man” really wants is a “girl”
who looks good in a bikini?
All a woman wants is someone
who really doesn’t care, or is it
just to feel warm sea-side air
caress her chest instead of nylon
and play once again, summer child,
outside a body of which she’s too aware,
alive in movements unbound by eyes
and unweighted by prudish gravity,
to wade into the froth of waves breaking wild
around her, an improvised dance that swirls
in cadence to life’s rhythms, wise
to no man’s guile, unresponsive to his gambit.

Peacock Song

Secret lover
greeting morning
from flowering
window
a song
opening day
like peacock fan
lilies and roses
sparkling
ripping 
from night
its equalizing 
veil
uncurtaining
dawn's
new day
rosy child 
play
maturing 
midday
to adulthood 
cares
trading petals
for apples and pears
with seeds 
tomorrow
to share
rich fall harvest
one by one 
falling
dry dreams
out
of tree head
essence of
branches
extended
towards heaven
praying
unweighted 
by care
old man winter
dreaming
while rocking 
four seasons
capriciousness
to end
a Sun
never setting 
on a fifth 
new season
of mild springtime
without end
with jolly old friends
youthful and strong
dining with Jesus
at His banquet hall
lining a hymn 
of unending joy
now and forever 
in love. 

Third Place Winner-Brian Strand-Up To You Contest-2/10/24


May Be

a quire or two, 
or three, may be
uncharterd
uncounted
discounted, maybe
tablets
stone shards
heavy slabs of me
rain soaked reams
sloughed off of me
shoulders of clay
unweighted may be
separate from morass
the mass of me
plunged heavy and sunk
in a literary sea
of words great men
spoke to me
I look for words
so meanings i'll see
and write, and write,
and write, maybe
so inner thoughts
so quiet may be.

03/06/2017

I Thought of You

I smelled the essence of your being.
  Your scent, was sent, to my dreams.

 I thought of you, in the night's delight.
Thinking thoughts on moon felt flights.

        Giving way to sensual blazes.
Spacing time, with sighs, unweighted.

    Spinning thoughts in star lit ways.
     Giving the universe a far lit gaze.

      Waiting for the free fall wages.
       Writing on these future pages.

        Hoping for a love filled night.
        Spent apon a heavenly sight.
Form: Rhyme

A Friend Who Failed

Under sun's warm breath and winter's frozen moon
To the river's fast current and society's torment
I promised to enshrine you in my cocoon-
Save you when all others' did circumvent.

They saw you exhausting and jaded
A mind turned mad- full of tragic despair
I knew you as exuberant and unweighted
Full of life, love and amiable  flair

I loved you- serving was no favor 
I sought to be your crusading savior-

Dear friend- you were so frail
Tried though, laboriously, 
fate had another plan -
In the end, my friend, you- I failed.


For the Nailed or Failed contest by Black Eyed Susan
Form: Rhyme


Unweighted

They let the words seep through to your gentle heart,
Everyday like seconds and minutes apart.

Wandering through darkness with low self esteem,
until you found a river flowing with a poisoned dream.

A faceless man stood extending his hand,
the answer to a question no one can understand.

Together you walked down to the waters edge,
A few steps later consumed by the pledge.

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