A Friend Who Failed

Under sun's warm breath and winter's frozen moon
To the river's fast current and society's torment
I promised to enshrine you in my cocoon-
Save you when all others' did circumvent.

They saw you exhausting and jaded
A mind turned mad- full of tragic despair
I knew you as exuberant and unweighted
Full of life, love and amiable  flair

I loved you- serving was no favor 
I sought to be your crusading savior-

Dear friend- you were so frail
Tried though, laboriously, 
fate had another plan -
In the end, my friend, you- I failed.


For the Nailed or Failed contest by Black Eyed Susan
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Thekidster Avatar
June 14, 2012 at 11:50 AM
You obviously haven't lost your toch. It's good to see that some things never change. Best Wishes with the contest. Be well my friend.
Arowolo Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 5:47 PM
Nice write,Amy.....Great work...Congratulations on your win...
Brown Avatar
June 7, 2012 at 6:07 AM
Congratulations on your win in the Susan's "Nailed or Failed"contest Amy. Love, Carol
Grisetti Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 8:56 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem, a sad but moving tribute to friendship.
A   Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 6:51 PM
AMY,Congratulations with your wonderful win, In SUSAN'S contest. take care ;-) ~ Always PD
Salama  Avatar
May 28, 2012 at 7:40 AM
Hey Amy, This was both beautiful and sad. I think you were not able to save someone, although you desperately tried. I would say this is a winner. It certainly is in my book! :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 9:39 PM
this sounds like death happened? So sad. VERY good entry, Amy.
Green Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 10:18 PM
Not physical death, no...
O'Leary Avatar
May 27, 2012 at 7:03 AM
Your 'failure' will certainly be a winner... Terry
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