Peacock Song

Secret lover
greeting morning
from flowering
window
a song
opening day
like peacock fan
lilies and roses
sparkling
ripping 
from night
its equalizing 
veil
uncurtaining
dawn's
new day
rosy child 
play
maturing 
midday
to adulthood 
cares
trading petals
for apples and pears
with seeds 
tomorrow
to share
rich fall harvest
one by one 
falling
dry dreams
out
of tree head
essence of
branches
extended
towards heaven
praying
unweighted 
by care
old man winter
dreaming
while rocking 
four seasons
capriciousness
to end
a Sun
never setting 
on a fifth 
new season
of mild springtime
without end
with jolly old friends
youthful and strong
dining with Jesus
at His banquet hall
lining a hymn 
of unending joy
now and forever 
in love. 

Third Place Winner-Brian Strand-Up To You Contest-2/10/24

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/24/2024 11:10:00 AM
Dear Frances, it was a delight to revisit and reread this beautiful piece once again. Congratulations for your win in Brian's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 2/10/2024 8:12:00 AM
Lovely writing. God bless you and Congrats .... love, Gina
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Date: 2/10/2024 5:34:00 AM
Beautiful unique and descriptive write! I love the visual words flowing throughout seamlessly. Pleasure reading your work. Congratulations on your well deserved placement
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Date: 11/20/2017 7:56:00 PM
A beautiful and colorful spiritual write, with fantastic imagery, of life coming full circle ending in the kingdom of heaven..Lovely!
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Date: 11/20/2017 4:09:00 PM
Lot of imagery of nature and emotions woven in this poem--well done, Frances!
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