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They let the words seep through to your gentle heart, Everyday like seconds and minutes apart. Wandering through darkness with low self esteem, until you found a river flowing with a poisoned dream. A faceless man stood extending his hand, the answer to a question no one can understand. Together you walked down to the waters edge, A few steps later consumed by the pledge.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/23/2010 5:19:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Matt. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/22/2010 5:06:00 PM
interesting and deep write, enjoyed reading this one...P.D.
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Date: 9/22/2010 2:29:00 PM
Hey Matt Cool poem. Welcome to the soup
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Date: 9/22/2010 12:38:00 PM
So enjoyed reading your creative write tonight Matt.. with luv... awesome words and title..luv..
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