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Revising Poems - Poems about Revising

Architects of Identity
... Stories, the invisible architecture of our becoming. Woven threads of whispered lore, of shouted headlines, of lullabies hummed in the dark. They enter us like breath, unseen, yet vital, s......

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Categories: revising, identity, life,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member I wrote a poem that alleges
...I wrote a poem that alleges that I left her a little too rough around the edges, and would I kindly try to rewrite. So, all night long, I added and deleted, moved around and repeated, till she......

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Categories: revising, 10th grade, 11th grade,
Form: Tercet



Premium Member Shikata Ga Nai
...“This is love: to fly toward a secret Sky, to cause a hundred veils to fall each moment. First to let go of life. Finally, to take a step without feet.” ~ Rumi Life can be a pi......

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Categories: revising, devotion, emotions,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Honor Thy Father is a Punchline
... It don't hurt. —Johnny Thunders, lead guitarist of The Dolls, last words My ancestors are made of malt and barley, barely a drop of water left— Midas in jorts and Nikes, overp......

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Categories: revising, abuse, addiction, anger, growth,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Draft 1,2,3,4 then gave up
...Saturday - Draft 4, turned to Sunday but didn't finish as revising and editing doesn't seem to be my way. Villanelle Please leave it out, just cut the rain Inevitable as storm prediction Res......

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Categories: revising, hurt,
Form: Free verse



MAMA AFRICA
...Mama Africa; beauty is oneness So much love she have got to share, pure she's just like gold Her glowing black skin so unique and alluring; Attracting, healing, elevating,inspiring and vibra......

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Categories: revising, africa, appreciation, beauty, black
Form: Prose Poetry
Premium Member Rediscovering
...Rediscovering on revising Myself, Myself and I. One's self-worth, One's real self on this Rediscovery of this condition of one's ambition, objectives, how did one go astray? Mislead on th......

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Categories: revising, adventure, blessing, character, confidence,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member geneva
...During finals week, I’d spent days on various reports and papers, scribbling in the margins of notes and books, checking facts, revising flashcards and prepping with friends. I’ve an unshakable faith......

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Categories: revising, boyfriend, humor, love, school,
Form: Free verse
Premium Member Each Day Is A Test
... Each Day Is A Test Miracle Man 4/19/2024 Each time I view the morning sun rising, I ready myself for an unknown surprising, sometimes its a test, That requires my best. At times Go......

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Categories: revising, god, sunshine,
Form: Limerick
Premium Member Transitioning
...Revising my life seeking what really matters letting small things go......

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Categories: revising, life,
Form: Senryu
Premium Member Literary Gardeners
...In the realm of words, where knowledge thrives, Teachers guide with wisdom, where the ink arrives. Enhancing writing, a guiding light they bear, To elevate students, their written tales to share. ......

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Categories: revising, teacher, thanksgiving,
Form: Bio
Premium Member Changing Weather
... Changing Weather (Get Used To It) Miracle Man January 2024 Today begins with the sky smooth gray, and a morning mist appears here to stay. A precursor for days that soon will co......

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Categories: revising, weather, writing,
Form: Couplet
The Scattered
...Inside a library of things uncountable, clippings, extracts, jottings, and snippets gather words out of nothing. Mind dust wafts. A woman approaches with an armful of my early, roughly cobbled......

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Categories: revising, poetry,
Form: Free verse
Silver Light
...SILVER LIGHT I once knew a man who thought he was free then looked in the screen to see he was me existing within a square cage of silver light watching ones and zeros form black herrings......

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Categories: revising, dark,
Form: Free verse
The Missus Served Me High Test Coffee
...The missus served me high test coffee... Ah... tis nothing more heavenly (to one borne again devout atheist) then a spring like January 18th, 2023 here at Highland Manor apartments picturesqu......

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Categories: revising, angel, appreciation, atheist, blessing,
Form: Free verse

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