Best Revising Poems

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Rumor has it on heavens above,
Among the angels’ divine sphere,
That God after very much though  
Decided in man’s life to interfere.     

2.
For He has observed Man’s mistakes,
That lately, too many came to be,
To endanger the whole of creation
Act with which...

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Distorted buildings where the wind men walk,
I asked myself what i thought, i couldn't say,
My frustration had driven all light from the day,
All heat from the garden,
And all dust from the shelf.
I was bare of thought
I ate repetition for breakfast lunch and tea,

It was a...

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I wrote a poem that alleges
that I left her a little too rough around the edges,
and would I kindly try to rewrite.

So, all night long, I added and deleted,
moved around and repeated,
till she finally said, "Yeah, that feels just about right."
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