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The Reply

i read it in the manuscript of yours where you called me out.
You said:
“I jumped off the boat because I found a hand to hold.”
My love,
you were not paying attention at all
Our boat would have drowned
carrying the weight of us
if I had stayed any longer,
with no hint where we should go

It felt right in the moment
You were keeping our hands tied
I wanted to let go
before I sink us to the floor
it was a test
that I don't know if I failed or passed—
but it was fate’s plan
I couldn't change

Reply to 2020 from 2025

So, in so many ways past and present mesh,
it's reminiscence of everything I have been through.
I thought, I thought I had bid adieu.

And then a  poem from 2020.
A soft laughter fill with tears, a glance 

A view from 2025

 hello !! goodbye, hello ! again.
I feel like I've met my long lost friend ( a grin so bright it eclipsing  sunlight) 
Pen to  paper ,eyes to a book.

I think I found what I've overlooked ( a smile so soft ,a heart that melts) 

a passion so fierce
a thirst unquenched! 
words unwritten.....
Jaws unclenched! 
emotion pours , like a gush of rain rushing ,thrusting to the ocean floor.

I see the me of yesterday.  ( Eyes glistening with unshed tears) 
I see the growth ( a lie from deep within  but  a truth that's actually not so thin ) 
but still the pain I've held at Bay.
I say I'm strong.
I've moved on !

but this brings about a memory of a time
A time 
 of yesterday
a time I thought long gone and far away
a whisper of mine carried on the wind

I remember you.
I remember you.
I remember you.
I do.

Premium Member At the Sound of Your Bell

At the sound of your bell I rush to reply
But it rings in the dream I see
In a moment away it flies
There’s no us in reality
Once we were, then we disappeared
Died for no reason at all
But the sound of your bell I hear
Be assured I have heard your call
Comes the evening, the day is gone
By the desk I still sit and stare
It gets darker, and dark is our home
In the countryside of nowhere.


Premium Member John Michael Osbourne

John Michael Osbourne
looks so tired and worn
when asked to respond
he could only say something no one could understand

Premium Member Reply to Unannounced

Your pain is shared, Jim;
I go to annoy by car,
not quite on a whim,
to relatives who chatter
‘bout things I'm assured matter.

Premium Member A New Reply to Hamlet

“To be, or not to be?” asks Hamlet's soul, 
      a mind transfixed between the depths below 
and life's thin, airy hold: this desperate role,
     I still play; although, from despair I know

that meaning consists neither in wealth, pleasure,
     nor youth, might, thought: not even in great power!
But in the feet of this poem's solemn measure,
     the answer is found: 'tis life, by whose Flower

the gift of meaning is through your love's labor, 
     the purpose for which you were made and reborn. 
In this fact, take heart and faint not nor waver; 
     but seize at last your life's prize unforlorn! 

Though Hamlet ponders still the sleep of death,
I breathe the Flower's scent with life's every breath.


Premium Member A Son's Reply

“Be a virgin your first time in bed
once you’ve married,” my dear mother said.
“But why do I see
a picture of me
from the day, Mama dear, YOU were wed?”

Wonderful Comment Reply

" As I’ve said before, I love when readers find their take of the story. We oft write collaborations :) " ~ The big poetess Kim Rodrigues. 

Wonderful comment reply!

Letting my smile reply

I look outside my window and stare 
Is it me that feels so unaware?
My head spins lightly moving the pieces 
I move them around make masterpieces 

The world outside glooms so unkind
I want to grieve but it holds my mind 
I shouldn’t be so dramatic 
But I can’t help to admire the cinema-tics

I color and color until the paper is brown 
I climb and climb and don’t look down 
The world goes around as I watch 
The puzzle fits but there’s one wrong notch 
I push them together ignoring what’s wrong 
Try to make them fit but they don’t belong 

Sometimes things move too fast 
I run and run but the past is the past 
It comes like a train howling my name 
Crushing the tracks without shame 

Then I blink it all disappears 
The storms in the background but right here it’s clear 
So I stay in the path that I know 
Watching the flowers grow and grow 

Far from all I’ve left behind 
Even if sometimes it crashes inside 
I let it go and watch it fly 
Watching the madness go on by 
Letting my smile reply

Premium Member A Reply to Hamlet

“To be, or not to be?” asked Hamlet's soul, 
      a mind transfixed between looming limbo 
and life's thin, airy hold; this loathsome role,
     philosophers and poets have played (though

some now sleep). Not wealth, nor the lap of pleasure,
     nor thought, strength, health, youth, nor unbridled power,
nor in the feet of this poem's solemn measure,
     can be found the answer: life's but a flower,

a precious gift, that lives for a short time. 
     Still, enjoy its frail beauty and brief glory 
while it's here, for in life all that's sublime 
     and dark in this world is just transitory. 

None can say for sure if the sleep of death
is g'ntler than life: so, cherish every breath.

Premium Member Reply

Reminiscing notes you sent from your peacock feather quill, kind editor
Embrace did I, your keen buoyancy, words whether grounded or surreal
Private musing you penned upon parchment brought tears of joy, mentor                     
Lavish poetry, and sage philosophy, taught my damaged soul to feel
Yearnings tormented, now calmed, a tranquil soothing from your gentle quill

I Sincerely Apologize It Has Taken Me So Long To Reply

I sincerely apologize on my own behalf

It has taken me so long

To have eventually woken up 

And to respond and reply

To you as you did to me 

As I was so taken up in my own ego and self

With you complimenting and embellishing me

With undue undeserving praise

I never was able or took my time to realize

Whilst you were complementing me

Backing up my own delusional thoughts

Thinking believing and buying into

Just how smart I thought I was

What I failed to sadly and unfortunately

Realize was just how smart you in fact

Actually you we're rather than me

And now I have finally seen the light

I sincerely apologize

I let my ego run away and get so out of hand 

And also now more than ever sincerely appreciate

You are still willing to accept my apology

So in some small inconsequential way

I feel my debt and your faith in me

Was and has been repaid

No Reply

NO REPLY

Honorary Dad Later On Reply

Our my Schade

As recently as this

Father's Day Sunday

Sent me a message

Saying to my

Honorary Dad

Although I don't and am unable
to say it

I hope you know you are my
Honorary Dad

And because of our family history

I instantaneously both assumed and
also presumed

She was indeed in fact obviously
talking about my father her grandad

She looked after when he was dying

And she was a very young child

And as our conversation gradually
continued

She later and myself also said

Life is pretty simple its mostly all about

Paying attention and listening

And case in point I unfortunately

Provided her with undeniable proof

That I sadly myself whilst talking
a good game was not 

Because when it comes to me

I quite obviously have a blind spot 

But that does not get me off the hook

Or is in any way or form

A valid or genuine 

Excuse

If anything it just proves

The point

I am no more better

But should as obviously does expect

Than from her own Dad

Reply Towards Your Own View

"I have my own scripture and it could be bitter or a heart thumper, but either way that's down towards your own actions from within your own thoughts." -Ds-

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