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Reminiscing notes you sent from your peacock feather quill, kind editor
Embrace did I, your keen buoyancy, words whether grounded or surreal
Private musing you penned upon parchment brought tears of joy, mentor                     
Lavish poetry, and sage philosophy, taught my damaged soul to feel
Yearnings tormented, now calmed, a tranquil soothing from your gentle quill
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Mishra Avatar
January 5, 2024 at 12:07 AM
A wonderful write !!! Claps
Anaya Avatar
January 17, 2024 at 10:08 AM
Thank you, for the applause! I appreciate it, Ashok. :)
Fowler Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 8:05 AM
Wow bff...I love every line of this. A nice tribute to your editor / mentor. A private musing from his/her peacock feather quill - sometimes a few words go a long way. :) Congratulations Anaya! :)
Anaya Avatar
October 9, 2023 at 11:22 AM
Thank you, Linda! A mentor in another century, lol.
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 11:34 AM
This reminded me of someone as you pictured from a previous century . Such a cute idea. Congrats and thanks for entering my contest.
Anaya Avatar
October 8, 2023 at 3:51 PM
Andrea, thank you for my placement, delighted you enjoyed. Im honored to support your contests! Hugs
Empress Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 4:47 AM
How deep and beautiful is this acrostic, quatrain? Not sure about this form but you’ve nailed it really! I love your rhymes and choice of words, so creative and artistic! I especially love “ peacock feather quill “ “ lavish poetry and Sage philosophy “ ah! Gorgeous word pairing! Goodluck for the contest .
Anaya Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 3:40 PM
Thank you Ink! Andrea's five lines/acrostic/ABABB. Her creation. I really liked her example "Youth". Delighted that you enjoyed it! Hugs
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September 24, 2023 at 4:12 AM
Such a beautifully written poem dear Anaya, the emotions are so palpable in every line, especially hoe you've maintained the flow while adhering to the requirements of this form. "Peacock feathers quill" Ahh, definitely a cathartic piece.. Truly loved reading this, lovely poetess.. Best of luck for the contest :)
Anaya Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 3:34 PM
I liked that line too, I saw an image of the peacock feather quill. Thank you for your kind and encouraging comment, Hiya!
One Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 2:22 AM
This is one of the most poetic I've seen in this form.. every line is excellent.. great choice in words also.. good luck in the contest dear..
Anaya Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 3:24 PM
Thank you, SO, Andrea is one of the best besides you, hoping she'll like it! Thank you
Buhagiar Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 1:52 AM
Anaya, I always admire your poetry. There is emotion enough in this acoustic. Well done.
Anaya Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 3:22 PM
That's makes me feel very happy, sweet Victor. Thank you!
Bowring Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 11:31 PM
This is so beautiful Anaya. So exquisitely penned.The pictures go so well with the poem. Love your careful, thoughtful chosen words and especially the last two lines. Glorious! Good luck with the contest. :)
Anaya Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 3:20 PM
Thank you, Christina! xhugs
Jones Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 8:13 PM
Great job love the flow form and word choice! Good luck.
Anaya Avatar
September 24, 2023 at 2:08 PM
Thank you, Karen!
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