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Try a Quincrosticain! Poetry Contest   Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

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Reminiscing notes you sent from your peacock feather quill, kind editor Embrace did I, your keen buoyancy, words whether grounded or surreal Private musing you penned upon parchment brought tears of joy, mentor Lavish poetry, and sage philosophy, taught my damaged soul to feel Yearnings tormented, now calmed; a tranquil soothing from your gentle quill

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Date: 1/5/2024 12:07:00 AM
A wonderful write !!! Claps
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I Am Anaya
Date: 1/17/2024 10:08:00 AM
Thank you, for the applause! I appreciate it, Ashok. :)
Date: 10/9/2023 8:05:00 AM
Wow bff...I love every line of this. A nice tribute to your editor / mentor. A private musing from his/her peacock feather quill - sometimes a few words go a long way. :) Congratulations Anaya! :)
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Date: 10/9/2023 11:22:00 AM
Thank you, Linda! A mentor in another century, lol.
Date: 10/8/2023 11:34:00 AM
This reminded me of someone as you pictured from a previous century . Such a cute idea. Congrats and thanks for entering my contest.
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Date: 10/8/2023 3:51:00 PM
Andrea, thank you for my placement, delighted you enjoyed. Im honored to support your contests! Hugs
Date: 9/24/2023 10:17:00 AM
What a nice tribute to your anonymous mentor. Lavish poetry and sage philosophy. The world could (and does) do worse. My reply? Great poetry Anaya
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I Am Anaya
Date: 9/24/2023 3:44:00 PM
Thank you, Tom! Reply's so poetic, made for a romantic novel. :)
Date: 9/24/2023 4:47:00 AM
How deep and beautiful is this acrostic, quatrain? Not sure about this form but you’ve nailed it really! I love your rhymes and choice of words, so creative and artistic! I especially love “ peacock feather quill “ “ lavish poetry and Sage philosophy “ ah! Gorgeous word pairing! Goodluck for the contest .
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I Am Anaya
Date: 9/24/2023 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Ink! Andrea's five lines/acrostic/ABABB. Her creation. I really liked her example "Youth". Delighted that you enjoyed it! Hugs
Date: 9/24/2023 4:12:00 AM
Such a beautifully written poem dear Anaya, the emotions are so palpable in every line, especially hoe you've maintained the flow while adhering to the requirements of this form. "Peacock feathers quill" Ahh, definitely a cathartic piece.. Truly loved reading this, lovely poetess.. Best of luck for the contest :)
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Date: 9/24/2023 3:34:00 PM
I liked that line too, I saw an image of the peacock feather quill. Thank you for your kind and encouraging comment, Hiya!
Date: 9/24/2023 2:22:00 AM
This is one of the most poetic I've seen in this form.. every line is excellent.. great choice in words also.. good luck in the contest dear..
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Date: 9/24/2023 3:24:00 PM
Thank you, SO, Andrea is one of the best besides you, hoping she'll like it! Thank you
Date: 9/24/2023 1:52:00 AM
Anaya, I always admire your poetry. There is emotion enough in this acoustic. Well done.
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Date: 9/24/2023 3:22:00 PM
That's makes me feel very happy, sweet Victor. Thank you!
Date: 9/23/2023 11:31:00 PM
This is so beautiful Anaya. So exquisitely penned.The pictures go so well with the poem. Love your careful, thoughtful chosen words and especially the last two lines. Glorious! Good luck with the contest. :)
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I Am Anaya
Date: 9/24/2023 3:20:00 PM
Thank you, Christina! xhugs
Date: 9/23/2023 8:13:00 PM
Great job love the flow form and word choice! Good luck.
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I Am Anaya
Date: 9/24/2023 2:08:00 PM
Thank you, Karen!

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