The Reply
i read it in the manuscript of yours where you called me out.
You said:
“I jumped off the boat because I found a hand to hold.”
My love,
you were not paying attention at all
Our boat would have drowned
carrying the weight of us
if I had stayed any longer,
with no hint where we should go
It felt right in the moment
You were keeping our hands tied
I wanted to let go
before I sink us to the floor
it was a test
that I don't know if I failed or passed—
but it was fate’s plan
I couldn't change
Copyright © Maanvinder Pilania | Year Posted 2025
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