Letting my smile reply

I look outside my window and stare 
Is it me that feels so unaware?
My head spins lightly moving the pieces 
I move them around make masterpieces 

The world outside glooms so unkind
I want to grieve but it holds my mind 
I shouldn’t be so dramatic 
But I can’t help to admire the cinema-tics

I color and color until the paper is brown 
I climb and climb and don’t look down 
The world goes around as I watch 
The puzzle fits but there’s one wrong notch 
I push them together ignoring what’s wrong 
Try to make them fit but they don’t belong 

Sometimes things move too fast 
I run and run but the past is the past 
It comes like a train howling my name 
Crushing the tracks without shame 

Then I blink it all disappears 
The storms in the background but right here it’s clear 
So I stay in the path that I know 
Watching the flowers grow and grow 

Far from all I’ve left behind 
Even if sometimes it crashes inside 
I let it go and watch it fly 
Watching the madness go on by 
Letting my smile reply
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Agustin Avatar
July 15, 2026 at 2:44 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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